PR 4933 .A3 Book -t) J "3 Id CotyrightN ^P/ COPYRIGHT DEPOSIT LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON TO MACREADY ' LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON TO MACREADY With an Introduction by Brander Matthews j fec - **^ PRIVATELY PRINTED THE CARTERET BOOK CLUB NEWARK, NEW JERSEY 1911 % Copyright , 1911, by The Carteret Book Club .A3 % ©CLA303781 & eft INTRODUCTION INTRODUCTION i T y HE English drama had its sudden out- Jlowering in the spacious days of Elizabeth; its vigour lessened a little, though its violence increased, under James and Charles; it sprang again into luxuriant life during the Restora- tion; and it did not die down until after Sheri- dan and Goldsmith. It became feebler toward the end of the eighteenth century, to flicker almost to extinction during the middle of the next hundred years. And in the final years of the nineteenth century it revived again, to re- veal itself as a vivacious rival of the novel. Prob- ably we do not yet appreciate the full merit of the plays written in the past two-score years by the late Sir W. S. Gilbert and Sir A. W. Pinero, Mr. Barrie and Mr. Shaw. But the energetic vitality which we can discover in the drama of our language from 1875 £01910, and which is equally evident to-day in the younger playwrights in both the British and the Ameri- can branches of English literature, makes us per- ceive all the more sharply the fiat emptiness of the English-speaking stage in the half-century which stretches from 1825 to 1875. There were many playhouses in Great Brit- l vii ^ INTRODUCTION ain and in the United States; and the attrac- tiveness of the theater was as potent as ever. There were many actors of varied accomplish- ment and of indisputable distinction. But there were no dramatists worthy of these actors and responding to the need of these theaters. The popular plays which filled the theaters were lack- ing in literary merit; and the compositions which the men of letters now and again cast into dra- matic form were not really plays; they were only dramatic poems , which failed to attract the broad public whenever they chanced to get themselves performed. In other words, the playwrights were not poets and the poets were not playwrights. There was a most unhappy divorce between the drama and literature. For this extraordinary condition there are several explanations. First of all, the period of the decadence of the drama was the period of the expansion of the novel, due to the overwhelming vogue of Scott. Until the sweeping success of the fV aver ley novels, the prose-romance had been considered inferior to the drama; and the earlier novelists, Fielding more particularly , had ad- ventured themselves first in the drama and had turned to prose-fiction as a second choice. The pecuniary rewards of play writing were larger than those of novel-writing; and popular plays C viii 3 INTRODUCTION were as widely read then as popular novels are now.' But the novel is an easier form than the play; it demands less technical dexterity; it is less difficult to get before the public; and pub- lishers of books are more in number and less arro- gant in attitude than managers of theaters. Secondly, the English dramatist was then unexpectedly subjected to an unfair competition with stolen goods, which instantly cut down the pecuniary reward he had been accustomed to re- ceive. Late in the eighteenth century, Kotzebue composed numberless pieces in German, filled with a perfervid emotionalism to which the Eng- lish playgoer gladly responded. And early in the nineteenth century, Scribe, and the crowd of collaborators that encompassed him about, composed numberless plays in French with in- geniously contrived stories, as effective in one language as in another. There was then no in- ternational stage-right; and the dramas of any German or French playwright could be trans- lated and adapted and performed without the permission of the original author and without any payment to him. So long as the managers of the British and American theaters could avail themselves of these foreign plays, and as long as audiences filled their theaters to witness the per- formance of these imported pieces, there was no INTRODUCTION desire and no necessity to pay a proper price to the original dramatists of the English language. As a result of these two conditions, the as- piring young authors of our language who might have become dramatists turned novelists. Charles Reade,for example, was frank in de- claring that he believed himself to be by native gift a dramatist, and that he had been forced into prose-fiction by bad laws — that is, by the absence of international stage-right. And it may be noted that the revival of our dramatic literature in the past two-score years must be ascribed in some measure to the waning vogue of the novel, but very largely to the security due to the proper protection now afforded by the laws of every civilized country to the authors of every other country. This legal recognition of the rights of the foreign dramatist has also had another far- reaching effect. When his play is now produced in another language, the author insists that it shall be translated as literally as possible, with as little mangling as may be; but fifty years ago, when a play could be stolen, it was gen- erally adapted and localized by a perverse wrenching of its motives, a French story be- ing arbitrarily transmogrified into an English story. When adaptations of this sort were the INTRODUCTION staple of the stage, the theater could not fail to be a realm of fantastic unreality, and audiences lost the taste for logic in either the action or the characters. Here we can discover one explana- tion for the artificiality which characterized the English drama in the midyears of the nine- teenth century, — an artificiality demoralizing alike to authors and to audiences. Whenever an unlikely event happened people were tempted to say, "How like a play! "And in the pieces they were in the habit of beholding in the theater they were rarely tempted to say, "How like real lifer' ii In the half-century from 1825 to 1875 there was only one man of letters of an indisputable prominence who won a position equally beyond question as a playwright; this was Sir Edward Bulwer-Lytton, afterward Lord Lytton. The only other man of letters who succeeded in the theater was Charles Reade; and but one of his comedies held the stage for long, — "Masks and Faces," written in collaboration with Tom Tay- lor and promptly turned into the novel of "Peg Woffington." Dickens had also a fleeting suc- cess in his dramatization of "No Thorough- fare/' a picturesque melodrama, written in col- INTRODUCTION labor ation with Wilkie Collins. Certain of the Victorian poets looked upon the stage-door as the portal of the Temple of Fortune and as the gate of the Hall of Fame; but even though they might manage to get inside, no one of them suc- ceeded in establishing himself in the theater. Tennyson, for one, ardently aspired after stage-success. His dramatic poems are often classed as closet-dramas, that is, as poems in dialogue and in dramatic form, not intended for actual performance. But this classification is unwarranted in Tennyson's case, since he did intend all his plays to be performed, and since he was intensely anxious that they should win approval in the theater. Indeed, they were all of them acted at one time or another; and yet only one of them, "Becket," achieved even a modest success, due in this instance to the adroit revision of Sir Henry Irving. Browning, for another, was ambitious for the laurels of the dramatist. "Strafford" and "A Blot in the 'Scutcheon" were written with an eye single to the stage, but without rewarding the poefs effort. The obvious re a son for the failure of Ten- nyson and Browning in the actual theater is that they lacked the native gift of play-making , and that they did not take the trouble to spy out the secrets of the craft and to master its easy INTRODUCTION mysteries, — as Victor Hugo had done in France with startling success, although the French lyrist had as little of the native gift of the born playwright as either Tennyson or Browning. That Bulwer-Lytton was inferior in poetic power to Tennyson and Browning admits of no question. But he was ready to serve an appren- ticeship to the stage and to take infinite pains to master its methods. As a result of this will- ingness to accept the conditions of the theater of his own time, Bulwer-Lytton achieved more than once the triumph which was denied to Tennyson and Browning. The letters now first printed in the present volume disclose his desire to avail himself of the expert aid of the fore- most actor of the day. It is greatly to be re- gretted that we have not also the letters which Macready wrote to Bulwer-Lytton. To read only that half of the correspondence which we now have is a little like listening to a conversa- tion by telephone; we can hear only one of the speakers and we have to guess at what the other has said. It is true that Bulwer-Lytton s letters are more significant and more interesting than Mac- ready's could have been. They are more illu- minative; and they reveal their author in an unexpected light. He appears before us now no C xiii 3 INTRODUCTION longer haughty , self -sufficient, and a little scorn- ful. He is disclosed as a humble seeker for ex- pert advice, modestly eager to profit by every hint that Macready can give, and ready to rewrite, to recast, to modify, or to amplify in accordance with the actor s fruitful suggestions. By the aid of these letters we are put in a position to see that Macready was almost a collaborator in the composition of "Richelieu" and "Money," just as Coquelin was almost a collaborator in "Cy- rano de Bergerac" and "Chantecler." The dramatist has often written his plays with his chief actor in mind. We are told that this is true of Sophocles; we cannot doubt that it is true of Shakspere, who provided Burbage with a superb succession of tragic parts, while he devised certain of his more humorous charac- ters for Kemp; and we know that it is true of Moliere, who kept his whole company in view when he was composing a comedy, carefully ad- justing every part to the player who was toper- form it. There could be no more interesting epis- tolary find than the discovery of the correspond- ence between Moliere and La Grange — unless it was that between Shakspere and Burbage. Part of the deference which we see Bulwer- Lytton paying to Macready may be due to the exalted position which the actor held in his C xiv 3 INTRODUCTION profession, and part may be due also to the fact that the tragedian-manager was twelve years older than the novelist-playwright. Macready was born in 1793 and Bulwer-Lytton in 1805. It was in 1838 and 1840 that they worked to- gether in producing "Richelieu" and "Money" The earlier play was designed specially to sup- port the actor s arduous venture as manager of Drury Lane; and the second was written for him after he had relinquished management. It was Bulwer-Lytton who presided at the banquet given to Macready in 1851 when he retiredfrom the active exercise of his profession, an occa- sion made memorable by Tennyson s noble sonnet of farewell. Although Bulwer-Lytton was the younger of the two, he died three months before Macready, both of them departing this life early in 1873. in In the incomplete biography of the author writ- ten by his son, the second Lord Lytton ( "Owen Meredith"), we are told that he was early in- terested in the drama. Tet he did not turn to the stage until after he had made himself one of the most popular of novelists. He wrote at least nine plays in all. "The Duchess de la Valliere" was produced in 1836, without success. Macready C xv J INTRODUCTION appeared as the hero, but according to the corre- spondence that follows, he seems to have been consulted only casually. The three plays com- posed with the advice and consent of Macready are "The Lady of Lyons" (1838), "Riche- lieu" (1839), and "Money" ( 1840). Another drama, "The Sea-Captain," produced without success in 1839, was revived in 1868 as "The Rightful Heir," and again without success. "Not so Bad as Medium; or Many Sides to a Character," was acted in 1851 by Dickens and other notable amateurs. "Darnley" was per- formed in 1 8 78 , after its author's death ; the un- acted "Walpole; or Every Man has his Price" was published in 1870, and "Junius; or, The Household Gods," was acted in 1885. It may be recorded that "Darnley" had the honour of performance at the Burg Theater in Vienna, and that both "Money" and "Richelieu" have been presented in French versions in Paris. The perusal of this catalogue makes clear the fact that Bulwer-Lytton did not succeed as a playwright except when he was working in conjunction with Macready. The plays to which Macready did not give his invaluable aid failed and are forgotten , while three of the five pieces which the actor helped to get into effective shape succeeded at once when he produced them, and I xvi ] INTRODUCTION survived on the stage for more than half a cen- tury after he had withdrawn from it. Indeed, there is a certain significance in the fact that "Money" was chosen for the special perform- ance by all the leading actors of London before the German Emperor in May, 1911, a little before the coronation of George V . Of all the Victorian authors, Bulwer-Lytton was the most multifarious. He aspired to suc- cess in almost every province of the domain of literature. He came forward in turn as essay- ist, historian, orator, translator, biographer, lyrist, satirist, novelist, and dramatist. He was as versatile as he was clever, and as ambitious as he was ingenious. In scarcely any one of the fields in which he exhibited his varied accom- plishment did he fail altogether; yet it is only as a novelist and as a dramatist that he suc- ceeded in imposing himself upon his contempo- raries. There are still spectators for his plays and readers for his romances, although the dust has long lain thick upon his poems and his sat- ires, his essays and his histories. To point this out is to indicate clearly what his real quality was. He was a born story-teller. He had the gift of narrative. He could present interesting char- acters in interesting situations. The characters might be forced or they might be flimsy; but the C xvii 3 INTRODUCTION situations were ingenious, unexpected, enter- taining, and effective. He sought to arouse the emotions of surprise rather than the emotions of recognition — to borrow Henry James's illu- minating distinction. When we recall one of his novels or one of his plays, we find ourselves re- membering what his characters do rather than what they are. His plays have the same qualities that his romances have. They reveal his abundant inven- tion and his fertility in expedient. They are manifestations of his essential gift of story- telling, — a native endowment even more impor- tant to the dramatist than to the novelist. A novel can please the public, and it can survive by sheer power of character-creation, supported by only a minimum of story; but a play must have action. In the study we may be amused by what the characters are, but on the stage we demand that they do something, that they desire something intensely, and that they present be- fore us the conflict of contending volitions. They must know what they want, and they must strive to attain it. Not a few of the dramatists have been primarily and essentially story-tellers on the stage. It is by their story-telling faculty , for example, rather than by their poetry or their psychology, that Beaumont and Fletcher won C xviii 3 INTRODUCTION the favour of the Jacobean playgoers. This necessity for a story sufficient to arouse and to sustain the interest of the spectators has been recognized by all the analysts of dramatic art, beginning with Aristotle, who was emphatic in declaring the supreme importance of the action itself. But story alone is not sufficient in the theater, unless it is so treated as to constitute a plot appealing to the playgoers by its progressive ac- tion, by its succession of situations, by its com- bination of contrast and climax. And it is here that Macready was able to afford invaluable assistance to Bulwer-Lytton. The novelist con- ceived his story, and the actor aided him to sup- port it by a plot likely to move the massed spec- tators in the theater. The difference between a good story, as invented by a novelist, and a good plot, fit for the purpose of the dramatist, can be seized at once by the comparison of the origi- nal suggestion of "Richelieu," as outlined by Bulwer-Lytton in a letter, with the plot of the play which Macready finally produced. The author obviously intended the part of Morillac, afterward called De Mauprat,for Macready himself; that is to say, he did not see that Riche- lieu had to be the central figure in the piece. Tet it is plain enough that "Richelieu" as a play I xix ] INTRODUCTION exists only for the sake of Richelieu as a part. In its original form the drama might have been as ineffective as " The Duchess de la Valliere," little more than a romanticist play of love and adventure. By bringing to the front the figure of the wily cardinal, and by focussing attention upon him, the piece took on at once a larger as- pect and gained an ampler historic background. It was lifted up to a loftier significance, audit attained almost to the boldness of a tragedy of statecraft. Thanks to Macready's technical advice, "Richelieu" became what it is; and in conse- quence of the actor's assistance " The Lady of Lyons " and "Money" were equally successful. This success was not fleeting; and the three plays kept the stage for threescore years and ten. It is true that they no longer please as they did at first. The taste of the play going public has changed. The realistic movement has tri- umphed, and the laurels of the romanticists are sadly faded. Nowadays we ask for more sin- cerity than Bulwer-Lytton has provided, for more veracity, for more actuality. When we read his plays today in the study, or when we see them acted on the stage, we are amused by their artificiality, and we are an- noyed by their extravagance. We cannot fail to INTRODUCTION perceive now that their heroes and their heroines are not living men and women, but only effective parts for actors and actresses; they seem to us stagy and tricky . We Jail to find the accent of real passion in their utterances, and the expres- sion of their emotions sometimes strikes us as perilously close to inflated rodomontade and to flamboyant bombast. Their prettiest speeches no longer ring true; they are cracked and false; they are rhetoric rather than poetry. We have advanced to a point where we discover more vi- tality, more reality, more poetry [in the larger sense of the word) in a single act of " The Sec- ond Mrs. Tanqueray, y> of "Candida," or of "What Every Woman Knows," than we can now find in all of Bulwer-Lyttons dramas heaped together. None the less ought we to be able also to see that " The Lady of Lyons" and "Richelieu" and "Money" are truly representa- tive of the best that the drama of our language had to show in the middle years of the nineteenth century. Brander Matthews. LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON TO MACREADY LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON TO MACREADY Albany, Monday, March, 1836. My dear Sir: On receiving your kind letter, I sent for M r Morris, & after some conversation he agreed to write to you. He has this day called on me, much disturbed by not receiving an answer. After as frank a communication as I could obtain with him, he seemed to imagine that the salary of 30^ per week contingent on the success of the play was the utmost he could afford — calculating on the probability of play- ing the piece [Ta Valliere] every night. I make his engagement with you a sine qua non; that settled, my own terms I shall conclude to his satisfaction. Now I know well that this salary is not adequate to your merits or celebrity & I have only therefore to request that on no con- sideration of personal courtesy or kindness to I s 3 LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON me, you will suffer it to influence you to the prejudice of other arrangements & the detri- ment of your own interests. — Perhaps you will be kind eno' to relieve the agitated mind of M r Morris by a Yes or No — as little influenced as possible by your favourable inclinations toward myself. Hoping to hear from you au plutot, believe me My dear Sir Very faith 7 Yours E. L. Bulwer. ii Knebworth Park, Stevenage, Herts. March 25, 1836. My dear Sir : I cannot say how obliged & touched I am by your kindness, nor how completely I under- stand the liberal and delicate spirit which per- vades it. I conclude now that the affair is settled, as M. r Morris himself wishes the Play £La [4] TO MACREADY ValliereJ to appear the ist of June. Other de- tails you can settle with him. Perhaps you will, by & by, inform me how long your other and more valuable engage- ments will allow you to remain at the Hay- market, should the play succeed. If sufficiently encouraged by results, I shall seriously think of Dramatic composition & hope in a grander subject & the exhibition of loftier passions to embody a character more suited to your powers than Bragelone. I suppose in the casting of the Parts, Louis will fall to F. Vin- ing, & I think, with training, Webster might refine himself into at least the best Lauzun we could get. Very sincerely & gratefully yrs E. L. Bulwer. March 26, 1836. Knebworth Park, Stevenage, Herts. Ill May, 1836. My dear Sir : It is not for me certainly to interfere with your C53 LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON arrangements, which I am sure are for the best. But I think it perhaps as well to say that I have met with 5 families who, balancing what play to go to, were decided by the Domino Noir — agst their first inclination towards Cov. Garden. 2 of these were for next Wednesday. — I cannot but think that despite the abridge- ment, the said Domino will be injurious. I see you have a play of Talfourd's in prep- aration, & for this (whatever the success of mine [Xa Valliere^] — were I to give my name it would necessarily curtail and interfere with its run ) I think the announcement would be now useless. Y rs truly E. L. B. IV Knebworth Park, Stevenage, Herts. Nov!: 6, 1836. My dear Sir: I enclose you the Epilogue I propose for Far- ren if he take Montespan [Ta Valliere]. I think it has some points that may be successful on the CO TO MACREADY stage. — There are two allusions of which I am doubtful: one the two lines in which Spring Rice is mentioned by name, the other about the Duke of Brunswick & the Balloon. I mean as to the taste of them. Whenever you write about the rehearsals, you can let me know your opinion on these matters. I hope the Epilogue may go toward strengthening the part of Montespan & there- fore hasten to send it. I have also written a prologue, but it is a very commonplace affair. I thought it might do well just to allude to the copyright Law, but I have not done it neatly in the prologue, & I shall keep the creature by me for a few days to see whether he will grow up any hand- somer — which ugly babies sometimes do. I heartily wish you could have given my Mother & myself the pleasure of your com- pany here for a day or two. But I suppose just at this time it would be impossible. I was extremely gratified by your kind note, which was most encouraging. Ever yr obliged E. L. Bulwer. P. S. When you write please to return the Epilogue with any suggestions. C7n LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON Knebworth, Stevenage, Herts. Nov. 7, 1836. My dear Sir: 1 send you something which I propose as a sub- stitute for the " horns. "I think the idea is comic without the farce of the Scene [Xa Valliere^] as it now stands. But I am a little in doubt whether it may not be un peu tropfort to make Lauzun pay his envoy to Montespan's wife with her Husband's jewels — I mean not tropfort in it- self, but trop fort for the starch of the audi- ence. Pray consider and let me know: if it does — the Old Lady must be drest with due re- gard to the comic. Will you also see if there are any five or six lines that could be omitted, as it is a little too long to supply the place of the 2 pages to be cancelled in the printed copies. If nothing can be well omitted, it does not signify much, as in that case I must cancel 5 pages instead of 2, to gain the blank part of the last page of the Act. Please when you have read, to return it — with any suggestions. I will then return you a copy for the Stage and have it printed in the CO TO MACREADY meanwhile. Excuse all this trouble. — The idea is amusing enough, but I fear I have not done as much as I might with the Execution. Ever yrs truly obliged & faithfully E. L. B. VI Knebworth, Nov!; 8, 1836. My dear Sir: I have again to trouble you. Having received, today, a letter from Farren which seems likely to disconcert all our arrangements. — In it he says that on seeing the play [Xa Valliere] he never could have had the slightest hesitation as to the part he should fix on — viz; de Lau- zun. He then proceeds to dwell on what he con- ceives the spirit of the character, & concludes with saying: "it is the only part in the play I could act with justice to you — or your humble servant W m Farren \" — I have only one con- solation in thinking, from the bearing of his letter, that even without my most unlucky & rash note, he would have equally pitched upon Lauzun. CO LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON What is to be done? — can I be of any use writing, & in that case what shall I say, what points insist upon? — I hope it will be managed. But probably ere this you have heard Far- ren's choice, tho' I hasten to apprise you of the contretemps. Y rs most truly E. L. Bulwer. VII Knebworth, Stevenage, Herts. Nov. 9, 1836. My dear Sir: By the enclosed notes you will see I do all in my power to correct the first faux pas of writing to Farren, & I have as earnestly, yet as civilly, as I can, pressed on him the part of Montespan. I have adopted your hint as to the threat of withdrawing La Valliere. If you like the notes, please to seal & send them. You can give Osbaldiston the one for him when you see him. Farren's can go by the two penny Post. For the rest I leave a carte blanche entirely in your hands. Whatever you do — c 10 ^ TO MACREADY either in omitting Farren altogether, or even, if you judge right, withdrawing the Play ( tho' that would be awkward) — will be entirely approved by me. — If my presence is neces- sary in town, I can come on two days' notice. But I think my note to Farren will do at least as much as seeing him would do. — Could the matter be compromised by Farren's taking the part of Montespan at first & Lauzun here- after ? This as you like. Or I would promise — if LaValliere succeed — to write him a thor- oughly effective & prominent part in some fu- ture play. In that I will do all I can to smooth the obstacles. I agree with you that Farren could not fight with Bragelone,& thought that must be altered if he took that part. Fighting with Farren would be burlesque. The scene with LaValliere he might do better. — But we had better dismiss all thought of the possibil- ity of his doing anything but Montespan, tho' without piquing his self love by considering him unfit for Lauzun, & putting him in as good humour as we can. Y rs ever E. L. B. P.S. Thanks to your kindness in saving me already from all the annoyances I have been brought to consider ignominious with acting LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON a play. I cannot — despite Farren — agree yet with Smollet or Le Sage. VIII Dec. 1836. My dear Sir: I send you a copy of La Valliere. Is there any thing you would object to in the advertise- ment that follows the preface? I do not let it be printed till you have seen it. As Bunn gives out, I hear, that he refused the play, I thought something of the kind necessary. But I am not quite pleased with the thing I have drawn up. I have managed with the Publishers, to print La Valliere, & Cromwell when altered separately, & am thus enabled, without much loss, to keep back the Publication of La V. till the day of performance provided it be within 3 weeks or a month at farthest. I have now only to repeat the thrice-told tale of my thanks for all your kindness. — I only wish I had been an Achilles that you had brought to the War. Y r f Ever E. L. B. C 1* 3 TO MACREADY I expect a stormy party ag? me the first night. P. S. If you could suggest any verbal altera- tions in the last scene, they can be done. I am just leaving town, but a line to the Albany will find me. Shall any copies be sent to the reviews the week before performance, or shall all be kept back ? IX 1836. My dear Sir: I send you the prologue & epilogue [Xa Val- liere]. The printers are waiting eagerly for them; & therefore if your better tact can sug- gest any verbal amendments, I will have them effect d now; on hearing from you. Can you say whether I may depend on the play being pro- duced Wednesday because of alio wing the pub- lishers to complete their arrangements ? When are the rehearsals ? Yours most truly, E. L.B. C is 3 LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON The copies for the stage will be sent to M' Os- baldiston to-morrow Evening & I shall send you one also — the vanished of Montespan be- ing altered for the ruptured, &c. I have rewrit- ten the Prologue & think it may do. Albany, Tuesday, 1836. My dear Sir: I have received your kind note. What you pro- pose in the second act is already done. What you propose in the fourth I am about. Now for the first Act. The intermediate Scene required to break the suddenness of the transition ( which suddenness I acknow- ledge) is attended with great difficulty — not to incur the same suddenness. Two scenes only occur to me, one between Bragelone & the mother — or one between Bragelone & the King — if the last, Bragelone must not disclose his love, which is incompatible with the sub- sequent conduct of the Play. Should neither TO MACREADY of these please you, can you suggest any domi- nant emotion or passion to call forth? I do not see my way clearly to strong effect — I don't know, in fact, what to make the talkers say ! any hints would be very acceptable. Now to the grand difficulty of Act 5. After much consideration I am not able to persuade my- self to the introduction of the King in the scene of the taking the Veil. Not that I care about the Historical truth. But I do not think the more sacred Law of the Probabilities would allow the evident breach of the Probable — in Louis delaying so long his interference — knowing by the Presence of the Queen & publicity of the occasion — the very day of the ceremony. Either he would come before, or I must prepare the way for him by painting his struggles in a separate Scene which the limits of the play w? not allow. I fear too that the audience could not get over the Pub- licity of so great an assemblage & so solemn a scene, to an interview that should be so private. Louis would naturally ask ( if he did come ) to see her in another room. — Moreover, the effect is taken from the dread repose of the Ceremony, & perhaps — if Louis's grief were powerfully painted — the sympathies would be diverted to him from Bragelone & c 153 LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON La V. Should we therefore defer his parting interview with LaV., we might do it thus: Scene ist as you suggest — Montespan, Lau- zun, &c. Scene 2. Chateau. Bragelone & La Valliere & his exclamations over La V. when insensible. Then we might introduce the King seeking her at the Chateau. The next scene — the exterior of the Convent, Lauzun & Montespan. Last scene as it stands. Or else Instead of seeking her at the Chateau there might be a scene before she takes the veil — of a cell in the Convent — andthe King com- ing to her — followed by Scene the last. I have thought of another alteration or addition that might doubtless be affecting in itself — as it would fall in your hands. But I fear it would take from the sterner points of Bragelone's character, and mar the harmony of the De- nouement. However, I mention it at present merely as a suggestion — Between the last interview of Bragelone & La Valliere and the Convent scene — Suppose that we introduce one of a burial ground in view of the convent & a gravedigger employed at a grave. — Bragelone — ill and declining — purchases that C 16 3 TO MACREADY grave which is directly in front of the Convent windows. — Then, instead of ending the Play with the Present Ceremonial, to follow that scene by one of Bragelone's Death by this grave — as if he had only survived to fulfill a duty, & had no further business with life. By curtailments as to the Queen & King XI Albany, Jan. 9, 1837, Sunday. My dear Sir : There is one point in the last words you say in La Valliere which have been so generally mentioned to me, that I venture to name it to you. The two words — " Heaven bless her" — might be rendered more striking by the least alteration that might convey a moral or clap- trap to the audience, & I suggest, therefore, that it should run thus : Madame La Valliere as at present : "Yes." The action \ Bragelone : "Accept O signifying the I Heaven Earth's worthiest offering — a blessing J repentant heart ! " LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON This, which is only the addition of one line, will I think make a more complete and satis- factory impression on the whole audience and seem "to point the moral." Having made this suggestion, I leave its consideration to you. In your new scene occur these words, "Heaven is less merciful" — suppose we get rid of the additional Heaven by substituting "Fate." Forster tells me the Sunday papers were more favourable than could be expected — that the"Observer,"commentingon the Saturday's performance, even augurs a long run. Ever most gratefully y? E. L. B. XII Albany, Jany 10, 1837. My dear Sir: In the second Act instead of "Lord of Hosts" perhaps it will be better to say, "Merciful Heavens ;" it makes the same metre & is more safe. C 18 3 TO MACREADY To-night, I fancy & am given to understand, will decide whether La Valliere is to be with- drawn at once or not. In the former case allow me to say that my deepest regret will be that it did not do more justice both to your wonder- ful acting & to your most friendly services. For the rest I must say with the murdered Lauzun: "My future calls me back To rarer schemes" — or content myself with parodying the lines of a greater man : "A double sorrow waits my luckless lot, My play is damned — and William Farren not." Tout a vous E. L. Bulwer. XIII March 25, 1837. My dear Sir: I trust that you are quite recovered from your long & severe indisposition. I heard yesterday from our friend d'Aguilar, who speaks in rap- ture of your acting in Bragelone & who was c 193 LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON also pleased with the play. I wish to know whether there is any chance of its again ap- pearing at Cov. Garden. I hear from Forster that there is some hitch as toFarren& Vanden- hoff. Now that the neck of the run is broken, I do not think their loss very serious. I leave this, however, to your judgement. For my own part I am very little curious about it. I have written to M. r Osbaldistone a short line merely to inquire his intention. Y r . s most truly E. L. Bulwer. XIV Albany, April 7, 1837. I am extremely obliged to you, my dear Sir, for your kind letter, which I delayed answer- ing in the hope that I might hear from M. r Os- baldistone, announcing a definite decision re- pecting La Valliere. I have not yet done so, but conclude he declines it. I need not say how much I have felt your kindness throughout — 1 20 ^ TO MACREADY and my regret now is that I was unable to se- cure to your genius a longer triumph — greater for the time it could not be. I have heard many Opinions of La Valliere — I never heard but one of M. r Macready's Bragelone. Y r . s Ever most truly grateful E. L. Bulwer. XV [Private and Confidential^ 8 Charles St., Berkeley Sq., 1837. My dear Sir: Tell me frankly — Do you really wish for the hazardous experiment of my assistance? I admire so much the stand you are making & I sympathize so much with your struggle, that if I really thought I could be of service, you might command me at once. I have been con- sidering deeply the elements of Dramatic art, and I think I see the secret. But I may be mis- taken — nothing more probable. However, if you sincerely and thoroughly LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON desire it, I will make the experiment. — And submit it to you — Act by Act — as it proceeds. I am aware that in this case, to be of use to you I ought to go to work soon. If you wish it, I will name the time — as soon after Xmas as you like when you wish the Ms. and you shall have it. But before you answer let me impress this upon you. Waive all compliment — if you think the chances are that I should not succeed, it is better for you not to try and much better for me. I must suspend undertak- ings of moment and value — which I would delightedly do to serve you and the Drama — but not, I own, merely from restless curiosity, or the speculations of that tempting adven- turer — Vanity. Secondly, are you sure that you shall continue your enterprise beyond Xmas ? Is it not too severe a task ? Were you not Manager, I would not be a second time Dramatist. If these questions should — as I pre- dict — be not answered quite favourably — for I know I may trust to your candour — accept the will for the Deed. But if otherwise, tell me which you prefer, Comedy or Tragedy. I think the former in itself a safer speculation, but where are the Actors? — Whatever sub- ject I select, you may depend on domestic in- terest and determined concentration up to the TO MACREADY close. This letter, as the attempt to which it refers would be — is strictly confidential. Wishing you all success — believe me, Most truly y r . s E. L. B. Don't answer this till you are quite at leisure. XVI February, 1838. My dear Sir: You will excuse my observing that it may be well to leave M? Clifford the lighter points I added to the part — unless she prove unequal to them in rehearsal. I do not think they re- quire much skill in delivery & they round and polish the composition £Lady of Lyons]. Another thing — can you give Miss Faucit any instructions to speak more clearly, to let her voice travel out of her throat? For she was perfectly inaudible in Cordelia. It is a great pity. Pardon this. Y r . s truly , T „ J E. L. B. C *3 ] LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON P. S. I shall probably hear from you on Friday, the result of what I cannot see. XVII Monday, March, 1838. My dear Macready: With pleasure on Saturday at six. — Just as you please about Forster. I have no ideas to communicate with regard to myself. But wished to suggest to you an opera, that you might make a National hit. In haste, y: E. L.B. XVIII Charles St., March 22, 1838. My dear Macready: I am fully sensible of the generosity of your C 24 3 TO MACREADY proposal £to make a payment on account of Lady of Lyons J. But our compact was not of an ordinary nature, and on consideration, you will see that it is impossible to lower it into a pe- cuniary arrangement. It was a compact based upon feelings worthy of the Art, which in our several lines we desired to serve — let me add that it was worthy of ourselves. On your side was a zeal for my reputation — on mine a sym- pathy with your cause. Can the feelings each of us experienced in success, ever be reduced into a matter of pounds & shillings? I do not return this money to you — you, per- sonally, have no concern with it — I return it as a Contribution toward the Expences of an attempt, in which as an English author and a lover of Art I have as deep an interest as yourself, & the risks of which never ought to have fallen upon one individual. Do not imagine me guilty of the arrogant vanity of supposing that I confer a favour. I know that my effort has been of no pecuniary profit to yourself. The most it could do was, perhaps, to lighten losses at a period when luck ran strong against us. And fear not that you have not already overrequited me. The bal- ance between us leaves the obligation on my side. I gave you but a fortnight, of time I LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON should not have otherwise employed to advan- tage — you gave me a victory over enemies, and restored me to confidence in myself. — Neither money nor any other kind of remunera- tion which money purchases, can I accept — or you propose. My guerdon is the boast to have served, not as a Mercenary but a volunteer, in an enterprise that will long be memorable in the Literary History of my time. I will not sell my Waterloo Medal. I trust & I believe that you will triumph eventually over all obstacles, & that at the end of this Season, you will feel encouraged to a new Campaign in which the hazards may be less and the rewards greater. If then, either on your own part, or that of others, you ask me again to tempt Gods & Columns, I will not scruple to talk to you of Business. But now my confidence in the Nature of your own pride convinces me that you will sympathize with mine. Believe me, my dear Macready, Y' sincere well-wisher & obliged friend E. L. Bulwer. C 26 3 TO MACREADY XIX March 28, 1838. Many thanks to you, my dear Macready, for your most kind & generous letter — which pays me a thousandfold for all my good in- tentions, & small exertions. May I ask you to direct & send by the earli- est 2 d . post the inclosed letter to Miss Marti- neau, whose address I know not — it touches the Copyright Bill. Ever, my dear Macready, Your sincere admirer & cordial friend E. L. Bulwer. xx March 31, 1838. My dear Macready: I came to town purposely to attend the dinner yesterday — but was so poorly w 7 ith the dis- abling complaint in my head, that I was quite unequal to going. I postponed sending an excuse thinking to c 27 3 LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON the last moment, I might get better, which I sometimes do suddenly. But all in vain & I am at last reluctantly obliged to remain at home. I am very sorry to hear you, too, have been unwell, but trust you are now recovered, & that your dinner went off well. I shall be happy whenever it suits you, to consult as to the best mode of meeting the present dramatic difficulties. I have long been of opinion that a subscrip- tion Company might be got up to start a The- atre & elect you Manager — & if you think this, should be glad to cooperate in starting it — or if there is anything else in which I can practically assist in restoring your career, pray command me. Y T . Evr E. L. B. XXI Note : This letter, preserved in the Dyce and Fors- ter Libraries, was printed by J. Fitzgerald Molloy in his essay on Lord Lytton's Plays in his book, Famous Plays, ' ' published by Ward and Downey. London, 1886. E>8l TO MACREADY It is reprinted here to complete the story of ' 'Richelieu." September, 1838. My dear Macready: I have thought of a subject. The story full of incident and interest. It is to this effect. In the time of Louis XIII. The Chevalier de Maril- lac is the wittiest and bravest gentleman, cele- brated for his extravagant valour and his en- thusiasm for enjoyment; but in his most mirth- ful moments a dark cloud comes over him at one name — the name of Richelieu. He con- fides to his friend Cinq Mars the reason, viz., he had once entered into a conspiracy against Richelieu; Richelieu discovered and sent for him. "Chevalier de Marillac/' said he, "I do not desire to shed your blood on the scaffold, but you must die. Here is a command on the frontier; fall in battle/' He went to the post, but met glory, and not death. Richelieu, re- viewing the troops, found him still living, and said," Remember, the sword isover your head. I take your parole to appear before me once a quarter. You can still find death. I will give you time for it." Hence his extravagant val- our ; hence his desire to make the most of life. c 29 3 LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON While making this confidence to Cinq Mars, he is sent for by Richelieu. He goes as to death. Richelieu receives him sternly, reminds him of his long delay, upbraids him for his profligate life, etc. Marillac answers with mingled wit and nobleness ; and at last, instead of senten- cing him to death, Richelieu tells him that he has qualities that make him wish to attach him to himself, and that he will marry him to a girl with a great dowry, and give him high office at court. He must marry directly. Maril- lac goes out enchanted. Now, Richelieu's motive is this : Louis XIII has fallen in love with this girl, Louise de la Porte, and wishes to make her his mistress. All the King's mistresses have hitherto op- posed Richelieu. He is resolved that the King shall have no more. He will have no rival with the King. He therefore resolves to marry her to Marillac, whose life is in his power, whom he can hold in command, whom he believes to be too noble to suffer the adulterous con- nection. Marillac is then introduced, just married, with high appointments and large dowry, the girl beautiful, when, on his wedding-day, Cinq Mars tells him that the King loves his wife. His rage and despair — conceives himself duped. r so 3 TO MACREADY Scene with the girl, in which he recoils from her. Suddenly three knocks at the door. He is sent for by the King, and despatched to a distance; the bride, not wived, is summoned to court. Marillac, all pride and wrath, and casting all upon Richelieu, agrees to conspire against the Cardinal's life. The fortress where Riche- lieu lodges is, garrisoned with the friends of the conspirators. Just as he has agreed, he re- ceived an anonymous letter telling him that his wife is at Chantilly ; that she will sleep in the chamber of the Montmorencies ; that Louis means to enter the room that night; that if he wishes to guard his honour, he can enter the palace by a secret passage which opens in a picture of Hugo de Montmorenci, the last duke, who was beheaded by Louis ( an act for which the King always felt remorse). This Montmorenci had been the most intimate friend of Marillac, and had left him his armour as a present. A thought strikes Marillac, and he goes off the stage. Louise alone in this vast room — the picture of Montmorenci in complete armour — a bed at the end. She complains of her husband's want of love, and laments her hard fate — dis- misses her women. The King enters and locks LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON the doors ; after supplication and resistance on her part, he advances to seize her, when from Montmorenci's picture comes aery of "Hold! " and the form descends from the panel and interposes. The King, horror-stricken and superstitious, flies; Louise faints. The form is Marillac. While she is still insensible, the clock strikes; it is the hour he is to meet the con- spirators. He summons her women, and leaves her. Richelieu alone at night when Marillac en- ters to him, tells him his life is in his power, upbraids him for his disgrace, etc. Richelieu informs him that he has married him to Louise to prevent her dishonour, that he had sent the anonymous letter, etc., and converts Marillac into gratitude. But what is to be done? The conspirators have filled the fortress. They (Richelieu and Marillac) retire into another room, and presently the conspirators enter the one they have left, and Marillac joins them and tells them the Cardinal is dead, that he will see to the funeral, etc., and they had bet- ter go at once and announce it to the King, and that there are no marks of violence, that it seems like a fit (being suffocation). C 32 ] TO MACREADY SCENE IN THE STREETS OF PARIS The King, who had always feared and hated Richelieu, hears the news and is at first re- joiced, the courtiers delighted, Paris in a jubi- lee. But suddenly comes news of commotion, riot; messengers announce the defeat of the armies; the Spaniards have crossed the fron- tiers, his general, de Feuguieres, is slain ; hub- bub and uproar without, with cries of " Hur- rah ! the old Cardinal is dead," etc., when there is a counter cry of "The Cardinal, the Car- dinal ! " and a band of soldiers appear, followed by Richelieu himself in complete armour. At this sight the confusion, the amaze, etc., the mob changes humours, and there is a cry of "Long live the great Cardinal!" SCENE, THE KING'S CHAMBER The King, enraged at the trick played on him, and at his having committed himself to joy at the Cardinal's death, hears that de Marillac had announced the false report, orders him to the Bastille, tells the Count de Charost to for- bid Richelieu the Louvre, and declares hence- forth he will reign alone. Joy of the anti-Car- dinalists, when the great doors are thrown open, and Richelieu, pale, suffering, sick, in his Cardinal's robes, leaning on his pages, enters C 33 J LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON and calls on Charost ( the very man who is to forbid his entrance ) to give him his arm, which Charost tremblingly does before the eyes of the King. Richelieu and the King alone. Riche- lieu says he has come to tender his resignation, the King accepts it, and Richelieu summons six secretaries groaning beneath sacks of pub- lic papers, all demanding immediate attention. Richelieu retires to a distance, and appears al- most dying . The King desperately betakes him- self to the papers; his perplexity, bewilder- ment, and horror at the dangers round him. At last he summons the Cardinal to his side and implores him to resume the office. The Car- dinal, with great seeming reluctance, says he only will on one condition — complete power over foes and friends ; Louis must never again interfere with public business. He then makes him sign various papers, and when all is done the old man throws off the dying state, rises with lion-like energy : " France is again France — to the frontiers. I lead the armies/' etc. ( a splendid burst ) . Louis, half enfeebled, half ashamed, retires. Richelieu alone, gives vari- ous papers to the secretaries, and summons Marillac and his wife. He asks her if she has been happy, she says " No/' thinking her hus- band hates her; put the same question to C 34 J TO MACREADY Marillac, who, thinking she wishes to be sepa- rated, says the same. He then tells them as the marriage has not been fulfilled, they can be divorced. They wofully agree, when turn- ing to Marillac he shows him the King's or- der that he should go to the Bastille, and then adds that in favour of his service in saving his (Richelieu's) life, he has the power to soften his sentence, but he must lose his offices at court and go into exile. On hearing this Louise turns around, her love breaks out — she will go with him into banishment, and the recon- ciliation is complete. Richelieu , regarding them , then adds: "Your sentence remains the same — we banish you still — Ambassador of Aus- tria." Now look well at this story, you will see that incident and position are good. But then there is one great objection. Who is to do Richelieu ? Marillac has the principal part and requires you; but a bad Richelieu would spoil all. On the other hand if you took Richelieu, there would be two acts without you, which will never do ; and the main interest of the plot would not fall on you. Tell me what you pro- pose. Must we give up this idea ? The incidents are all historical. Don't let me begin the thing if you don't think it will do, and decide about £ 35 3 LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON Marillac and Richelieu. Send me back the pa- pers. You can consult Forster of course. XXII Rockford, September 16, 1838. My dear Macready: Many thanks for your letter. You are right about the Plot — it is too crowded & the in- terest too divided. — But Richelieu would be a splendid fellow for the Stage, if we could hit on a good plot to bring him out — con- nected with some domestic interest. His wit — his lightness — his address — relieve so admir- ably his profound sagacity — his Churchman's pride — his relentless vindictiveness & the sub- lime passion for the glory of France that ele- vated all. He would be a new addition to the Historical portraits of the Stage ; but then he must be connected with a plot in which he would have all the stage to himself, & in which some Home interest might link itself with the Historical. Alas, I've no such story yet & he C 36 J TO MACREADY must stand over, tho' I will not wholly give him up. — I know Volpone well & have been often struck with the force of the very situation you point out. I wish if you could lay your hands on U aventuriere oubliato — & the stories in Mar- montel you allude to — that you w d send them down directed to be left at the P. O. Rock- ford. — Depend on it,I don't cease racking my brains, & something must come at last. I see many subjects, but not the one which ought to be popular. You are quite right that we ought to have lightness & comedy, unless indeed — A second "Venice preserved " should ever be sent by the miraculous interposition of Apollo — It shall be as you like about Forster. But I think on talking it over when the play is done you will see the impossibility of con- cealment from him. — Is there not some col- lection of Italian nouvelettes by Roscoe which might suggest a plot? Y r ever E. L. B. c 37 n LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON XXIII Knebworth, Stevenage, October 23, 1838. My dear Macready: You will be pleased to hear that I have com- pleted the rough Sketch of a Play in 5 acts — & I hope you will like it. I have taken the sub- ject of Richelieu. Not being able to find any other so original & effective, & have employed somewhat of the story I before communicated to you, but simplified and connected. — Tou are Richelieu, & Richelieu is brought out, ac- cordingly, as the prominent light round which the other satellites move. It is written on the plan of a great Historical Comedy, & I have endeavoured to concentrate a striking picture of the passions & events — the intrigue & am- bition of that era — in a familiar point of view. At present it is all in prose, & for my own part I should prefer leaving it so as being bet- ter suited to the careless strokes — the rapid effects — & above all the easy & natural light which I desire & design to cast upon the large passion & dark characters brought upon the stage. But as I suppose blank verse will be more likely to ensure solid & permanent sue- C 38 J TO MACREADY cess, I fear I must recast several portions into that form. — Let me know your opinion. The comic vein in Richelieu himself is produced by the irony that he really loved, his easy confidence & the brilliant charlatanism of his resources. I cannot say there is much wit anywhere, but there are some situations of Humour — & much I think that somehow or other will get a laugh, & keep the audience in constant play. Now, for the rest, I am obliged to bring in many characters ( I am putting a reign upon the stage — tho' condensed into the usual unity of time— & I cannot help it). 2 ndly I shall put you to the xpence of a mob — a mob — & a large one too, I must have! Do you mind this? — I have avoided, however, overweighting any part except that of the Lover, which I suppose will fall to Anderson. And here I want the bril- liant Frenchman witty, but passionate — irreg- ular, yet noble — with one foot on crime, the other on virtue. Mr. Anderson will spoil my conception. But I cannot help that — How- ever, I am running on as if I were sure you would like & take it after all — which, after my false conjectures as to my beloved Orestes — is sheer credulity. — As lam beginning to copy out and retouch, let me know — an plutot — if LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON you have any general hints or suggestions toof- fer, and what you think about the blank verse. Truly y r . s E. L. B. P. S. Do what I will, & I avoid all long speeches, Richelieu will be, I fear, half an hour longer than the Lady. Does that signify? The Lady is very short. I see you have turned the Happy Family into the Foresters. As Forster knew of the Richelieu plot, I suppose he must now be taken into confidence. If so, send for him & enjoin all caution. XXIV Charles St., November 14, 1838. My dear Macready: I hope you will be able to read my scrawl. I send you the Play complete. Acts I & III may require a little shortening, but you are a mas- ter at that. The rest average the length of Acts in the Lady of Lyons. I hope the story is clear. And if the Domes- C 40 3 TO MACREADY tic interest is not so strong as in the Lady, I trust the acting of Richelieu's part may coun- terbalance the defect. For the rest, I say of this as of the Lady — if at all hazardous or uncertain, it must not be acted, & I must try again. Let me know your opinion as soon as you can form it. Yours truly E. L. B. XXV November 29, 1838. My dear Macready: On hearing the play [[Richelieu] read last night, one thing struck & surprised me more than anything else, viz., the prosaic and almost bald cast of the general Diction. This I say sur- prised, because I knew I had written a Poem, and yet by some alchemy — the poetry was subtracted. On consideration I find it is to be accounted for thus : ( As in the Preface I stated,) the busi- ness part was purposely left plain and simple, prosaic in words — in order to throw the whole C4l J LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON vividness of contrast and light upon those pas- sages, where thought or passion, as in real life, burst spontaneously into poetry. The con- sequence of this adherence to the Grandeur of Nature has become a melancholy defect on the Stage (owing of course, to some error in treatment) — for every one almost of these passages is struck out, as not essential to the business, and the rati nantes that remain will undergo the same process by the further con- densation requisite. So that at last there will remain a stripped & gaunt skeleton of prose robbed of all the bloom & purpureum lumen of the Poetry that it once possessed. And the Play as I wrote it & as you first read it will no longer appear on the Stage. This bareness of dialogue is much more de- structive to the effect than you would imagine. And I observed that the parts most effective in reading were ( as in the 4th act ) where the mutilation had not yet reached. — Now, to ob- viate this — when the Play is once condensed — the Dialogue of the retained parts should be rewritten and the business part rendered poetical. A fearful vice in composition (ac- cording to my conceptions of Art ) , but which I suppose is nevertheless essential — since I now see why more experienced Dramatists C 42 3 TO MACREADY — Knowles and Talfourd — have studiously sought it — I say, when a Door is to be shut, "Shut the Door/' Knowles would say, as I think he has said somewhere, "Let the room be airless." Probably he is right. — Now, this change in style will be tedious work — invitd Minerva. I doubt if I can do it at all. At the same time, farfrom complaining of the omission of the poetical passages, I see the necessity of their still more ruthless suppression & I begin at length to despair both of the play & of my- self. — Unless , therefore r on consideration, you see — what at present you deem doubtful — the triumphant effect of the Portraiture & ac- tion of Richelieu himself, you had better return me the Play, & if I can form myself on a New School of art — & unlearn all that toil & thought have hitherto taught me — I will attempt an- other. But for this year you must do without me. Meanwhile I will beg you not to consult Forster farther. Nor to listen to his sugges- tions. The disposition, certainly not that of par- tial respect, with which he came to the reading — broke out in spite of himself very early in the first scenes of the Play, & the [^page torn here} Manque d'egards at the close, altho' I do not suppose it intended as an affront, & tho' C 43 ^ LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON Heaven knows I have as little over-suscepti- bility on such points as most men, was only of a piece with a certain spirit of disparagement — which I have of late observed in him towards myself. Of course I can blame no one for mea- suring me according to the standard he hon- estly forms, nor would it disturb my regard for him generally. But I must be permitted to dis- pute the accuracy of the measurement, tho' I have all respect for the integrity of the Gauger. Believe me, my dear Macready, fully sen- sible of your consideration for my own credit — & confident of the soundness of your ulti- mate judgement. Yours as ever obliged and truly E. L. B. XXVI Charles St., November 27, 1838. My dear Macready: I am very sorry you have been unwell, & hope you are restored. You are right, indeed, in C 44 3 TO MACREADY supposing that I do not perceive the existence of any relation between us in which any little service I may ever have rendered to you has not been most amply repaid. But even were some figures on my side the Balance, not rubbed out, your present letter would indeed be "the moistened sponge" of Aeschylus, blotting all the record. — I fully appreciate the manly & generous friendship you express so well. I have only one way to answer it — I had intended to turn to some other work before me. But I will now lay all by, & neither think nor labour at anything else until something or other be done, to realize our common object. Send back Richelieu, with any remarks that may occur to you. If it seem to you possible — either by al- terations or by throwing the latter acts over- board altogether — to produce such situations as may be triumphant — the Historical charac- ter of Richelieu is not to be replaced, & there- foreis worth preserving. But if neitherofus can think of such situations, we must lay his Emi- nence on the shelf & try for something else. You may still count on me — Health serving & God willing — no less as "a lance at need" than as, my dear Macready, Y\ sincere & obliged friend E. L. B. C 45 ] LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON P. S. Forster has just written me a very kind and handsome note, which entirely exonerates him from anything worse than the mauvais gout de rietre pas charm'e de moi-meme. Who can complain of being in the same Boat with Richelieu himself? But I acquit him even of the mauvais gout, if he wish it. And after all, you and I know that it is only Tyrants & Cardi- nals who never sleep. I would make the alterations you hint at in Richelieu — But I fear they would not suffice after all — The mob might be done away with altogether — & in Act 5, the bell a deep ring- ing for De Mauprat's execution. But even then I fear the mysterious something will be wanting. C 46 1 TO MACREADY XXVII November 27, 1838. Anquetil. Les Intrigues du Cabinet: Vol. on Louis XIII. Voltaire. Hist. Gen. : Vol. containing Admin- istration de Richelieu. Testament politique, by Richelieu (Apochry- phal!). Memoir es de Richelieu. de Brienne. Journal de Richelieu (I have never seen it). Histoire du Pere Joseph. Memoires du Montglat. Hist, de France. My dear Macready: Above I send you a list of Books relative to Richelieu. Eno' to consult if you were going to write his History. But I do not think you will obtain from them much insight into his manner, at least very few details on it. Scat- tered anecdotes that may seem trivial, when collected, furnish a notion of his raillery — his address — his terrible good humour. His vin- dicti veness — his daring — his wisdom — his genius are in the broad events of his history. In France there is a kind of traditional Notion of his Personnel much the same as we have of Henry 8th or Queen Mary — or almost of C 47 ^ LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON Cromwell, viz: a Notion not to be found in books, but as it were, orally handed down. And this seems general as to his familiarity with his friends — his stateliness to the world — the high physical spirits that successful men nearly always have & which, as in Cromwell, can almost approach the buffoon, when most the Butcher. For the mere trick of the Manner, I fear you will have to draw on your own genius almost entirely. Your note has just arrived. I shall be in (here) from eleven to two. If inconvenient to call here, I will call on you, wherever you like, after three o'clock. But as I rather wish to leave town, if you can call here, it would be a little more convenient to me. In that case you had best bring his Eminence with you. Yrs. truly E. L. B. XXVIII Nov. 30 & Dec. 1, 1838. My dear Macready: I will send you back your play. I can make l 48 } TO MACREADY nothing of it. It seems to me that no improve- ment could give the outline stuff & volume eno' for a 5 act play — tho' it would make a very pretty 3 act piece. — I see nothing else at present, but shall continue to think and read for it. It is no use beginning with a plot that does not both catch my fancy or suit your no- tion. Only I warn you that the former object will not be effected without it be grounded on some conception that may satisfy me as an author as well as a Dramatist. I propose meanwhile to complete Richelieu. You can then read it, as we settled, to a select few & abide by the issue. I have very little heart for it, I own, but I see nothing else to be done & for anything else I have still less heart. Let me know what you mean about omitting altogether the scene at Marion de Lorme's. Do you mean to have no substitute for it? What think you of merely the outside of the House? Franfois coming out with the packet and making brief use of Huguet and Mauprat. Remember you wanted to have the packet absolutely given to Francpois. I propose to end Act IV by bringing on Ba- radas at close — & a stormy struggle in Riche- lieu — between his rage — his craft & secret design — his tenderness for Julie, &c. — & at C 49 ] LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON last so to overpower him with all these rapid emotions that he shall fall back in their arms. I will answer for the effect of this to close the act, & besides it will prepare for his illness in act 5. — But if you don't fancy it, let me know, as it will save me much labour. Y r f truly E. L. B. If you or Forster have any scattered & desul- tory remarks to make, let me have them for consideration, as I shall go over the whole play. I have thought that one reason why the con- spiracy & plot seem arrested at Act 3 is that Richelieu has the pack et — & even subsequently the audience feel that having the packet, he can save himself at last. The interest might be greatly heightened by delaying the receipt of the packet till Act V. Thus — Scene before Marion's House, Act 2 or 3 — Mauprat about to enter when he sees Francis coming out with Marion — & hears her telling him to give it to the Cardinal. He, not knowing what it is, but suspecting it to be a betrayal of the plot, wrests it from Franfois, who does not recog- nize him in the dark — in his subsequent scene with the Cardinal he is too agitated to recur to it. He is arrested next day — & it is only in c 50 ^ TO MACREADY Act V — when in Prison with Joseph — that he remembers it. Still unaware of its importance — he gives it to Joseph, who opens & rushes out with it. — This it is that recovers the Car- dinal, & the loss of this packet in Act 4 will greatly increase the apparent desperation of the situation. The only objections I see to this are — 1st, Is it natural that Mauprat should have delayed so long giving it? sndly, will it not entail the loss of some fine passages in act between Fran- fois & Richelieu? (The sword may be kept in, however. ) If this plan be adopted — & the actual im- portance of the packet kept in view through- out — the suspense may be very great. I tell more perhaps — if, without giving the scene before Marion de Lorme's, Francis may re- turn to Richelieu to say that it has been reft from him — he knows not by whom — & leave the audience uncertain till Mauprat produces it saying how he came by it. Another effect of this will be tightening the connection be- tween Mauprat & Richelieu. — Another thing I should like would be to keep Julie on the stage during Act 5 — Scene with Richelieu & the king — she would augment the interest. But would this be possible ? Think over what C5i 3 LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON I have written & give me your thoughts. If you like what I suggest, I '11 talk it over with you — I fear Richelieu must be settled one way or other ( even if for delayed representation ) before I can go with free mind to anything else. In fact, in Act V Joseph may visit Mauprat to ask him what he knew about Beringhen's person as discovery of that is the last hope. Mauprat replies that he is quite ignorant of it. Joseph gives him up for lost when he men- tions the word packet — this reminds Mauprat that he had overheard Marion & Francis — had seized the packet, which had no ad- dress — imagining it solely the exposure of the plot ags. 1 Richelieu's life. I fancy I see great strength in all this, but it is too long to enter into minutiae — by letter. XXIX Charles St., Wednesday, December 14, 1838. My dear Macready: I sent you last year an afterpiece taken from TO MACREADY Vathek and another called, I think, Marriage a la Mode. They were by a Miss Tallent, a Constituent of mine. — Could you lay your hands on them, & return them if among the rejected addresses? You said they were kept in order to be looked over in the recess. When you inform me on Monday of the fate of our old friend The Clergyman, could you oblige me by sending your note here be- fore 2 o'clock — as at that hour a person will be going down to me at Knebworth and I shall have the ultimatum a day sooner. I am per- fectly prepared for stern truths, and the more I think of it, the more I feel convinced of the advisability of not making the experiment — unless opinions sh d be decidedly in favour of the success — the more so, as very consider- able portions of the play are carried on in the absence of the Clergyman, & may therefore be yet more doubtful on the stage than the closet. In Act 5 there sh d be a little alteration. R. says to the Sec?, " Free pardon to the Pris- oner Huguet." — This interrupts the grander order — let him say it to the officer at the time he snatches away Mauprat's death-writ — as the officer is following Baradas out. If Richelieu gives the Despatch to the King instead of the Secretary, he must be seated C 53 J LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON so near Louis that by a little " mutual stretch- ing "it can be done without rising ; in that case, when the Sec! says, " Designs against your life," alter to "Designs ags! yourself '." Louis Myself most urgent. Richelieu {giving the Despatch) Sire, in this department There is one matter. Here — most urgent — Take The Count's advice in't. If you think Joseph's advice about resigning, Act 4, not effective, you have but to omit it & follow up the Exit of Courtier with lines to the following effect: [Exit Courtier Richelieu God help thee, child — she hears not! look upon her — The storm that rends the rock — uproots the flower — Her father loved me so! — & in that age When friends are broken. — She has been to me Soother, Nurse, plaything — daughter — Are these tears? O shame — shame — dotage — Joseph Tears are not for eyes That rather need the lightning which can pierce Thro' barred gates & triple walls — to smite Crime where it cowers in secret. I 54 3 TO MACREADY The Despatch ! Set every spy to work! The morrow's sun Must see that written treason in your hands Or rise upon your ruin. Richelieu Ay, — & Close Upon my Death ! ... I am not made to live. Friends, glory, France, all reft from me — my star Like some vain holy day mimickry of fire Piercing th' imperial Heaven, & falling down Rayless and blackened to the Dust, — a thing For all Men's feet to trample! yea — to-morrow France or a grave — Look up, child — Lead on, Joseph — Julie Baradas & De Beringhen, etc. The effect of this is to confine, consolidate the intent on the Packet & on Richelieu's Death as the consequence of its probable loss. I leave town to-morrow at 2, if you have any suggestions to make before. Y r ? truly E. L. B. C 55 ] LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON XXX December 14, 1838. My dear Macready: I enclose you a new Design for the early Part of Act 5, by which we heighten the suspense and avoid — the going from — to return to the Louvre — making Francis (as you once seemed to wish) come with the packet at the critical moment. Should you prefer the scenes first written, Francis, if you think it advis- able, can still come in with the Despatch by a little alteration. As I have not the copy of the Play — & go by memory — one or two little points for alteration in the last scenes, if my proposed alteration please you, I may have for- gotten. But I think I have guarded ags*. most. If you take the New Scenes, you will dispense with Baradas being led thro' the file of Cour- tiers & the words, " My Lords take warning." In this >2 sheet I enclose a few general amend- ments. In the other envelope — the principal one — Let me know how you like it — I was anxious you should have the option before Sun- day's reading. Y" truly E. L. B. C56^ TO MACREADY P. S. You do right to omit the speech about France, Act 4 — any cuts that don't interfere with the natural development in the only 2 long Acts, viz : Act l-Act 2, would be season- able, especially where you are not on. Alterations {passim) In act 5 — when Julie comes to the King and says anxiously ," Be his Bride ?"Louis answers, "A form, a mere Decorum. Thou knowest / love thee." I fear the effect of this open avowal of adultery and connivance on an English audi- ence. What say you? — it would be softened by his merely saying " Yes " — if you think the Audience will sufficiently understand by that — the consistency of his loving her & yet wish- ing her to marry another. In Act V — when Joseph says, "Fall back, Count" he should say, "Fall back, Son!" In act 4 — in my last alteration, when Riche- lieu is pitying Julie — says, "I could weep to see her thus — But" — the effect would, I think, be better if he felt the tears with indig- nation at his own weakness — thus: "Are these tears? O shame — shame, Dotage" — At the end of that Dialogue before Baradas enters he says, " France or a grave — the Pur- c 57 3 ~ LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON pie or the shroud," which is tautology ; more action in the following words, "France or a grave — Look up, Child — Lead us, Joseph." In Act 2 — towards the close when Richelieu says all forsake him save the indomitable heart of Armand Richelieu — it would be well to allude to Julie as she now plays so prominent a part also to Mauprat — thus: "Of Armand Richelieu. Joseph Naught beside — Richelieu Why, Julie, My own dear foster Child, forgive me ! yes, This morning, shining thro' their happy tears Thy soft eyes blest me ! & thy Lord ; in danger He would forsake me not ! Joseph And Joseph — Richelieu You Well, I believe it — you like me — are lonely And the world loves you not : & I, my Joseph, I am the only man who cared," &c. The last alteration in words to Joseph is to soften the coarse words not discerned in the play of " All who do hate & fear you!" 58 J TO MACREADY XXXI Hertford. My dear Macready: I enclose my note for s£ Haynes Bayley of whose distress and illness I am truly sorry to learn. I should rejoice to aid in extending the subscription but I really hardly know whom to apply to — having once before vainly sug- gested relief for the same person. Lady Bless- ington might. Yours truly E. L. Bulwer. XXXII Knebworth, December 18, 1838. My dear Macready: Many thanks for your kind consideration in writing so late at night & collecting so many written opinions. The result of them is encour- aging, but at the risk of seeming over-fearful I must add also— that it is not decisive. Fox's is c 593 LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON the most enthusiastic. But he is an enthusiastic person , & kindhearted — Idoubthisj udgement . Serle's assurance that it will succeed better at the beginning than the end occasions some misgivings — for after the first night or two, the end is much more important and excites more attention than the beginning. Brown- ing's short line of " the play is the thing" is a laconism that may mean much or little — be- sides he wants xperience. Mr. Smith's is alto- gether chilling, the more so that he has re- peated a criticism of your own. I doubt whether he hits the right nail in saying that the fate of a mistress of a minister was the real interest of La Valliere or Richelieu, or that great hu- man Questions are not involved in both plays. But the fact of his opinion that the latter wants interest as a Dramatic work is startling and clear — & we need not inquire if he be right or wrong in guessing why it wants it. It may be said that the interest of Richard Iin is only the fate of a bloody tyrant — not greater in it- self or results than the fate of a mighty states- man. But Richard III certainly does not want interest; and in Richelieu — it is the fate of France, of the heart of Europe, as embodied in the Packet and the success of Baradas, which makes the grander interest. But if that inter- C 6oJ TO MACREADY est is not perceived, there is a want somewhere in the execution. To my mind the real defects in the play are two-fold — I s ! , that the tender interest as in Mauprat and Julie is weakened and swallowed up in the fortunes of Richelieu ; &2 ndly , and I think this graver — that the final triumph is not wrought out by the pure intel- lect of Richelieu, but depends on the acciden- tal success of Franfois — a conception which wants grandeur, & if the play were unmixed tragedy, would be very much worse than it is now. I wish this could be obviated. But I don't well see how. For if I were to create a new agency for the recovery of the Despatch & make that discovery the result from the be- ginning of the unerring machinations of the Cardinal, he would retain from first to last — that calm certainty of success which would be fatal to the struggle, the uncertainty & the pas- sion which at present create the pathos of the play & the suspense of the audience. I would not go the least upon the mere lit- erary merits of the play — ist, because they don't depend upon poetical wording of which everyone can judge, but upon somewhat naked intellect of which few are capable of judging & upon the variety and individualization of the characters, the effect of which must depend C 61 ] LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON upon the actors. What I feel is this — that if I myself were certain of the Dramatic strength of the play, which I was in the Lady of Lyons, I should at once decide upon the xperiment from the opinions we have collected. But I own I am doubtful tho' hopeful of the degree of Dramatic strength, & remain just as irreso- lute now as I was before. I fancy that the effect on the stage of scenes cannot be conveyed by reading. Thus in the 5* act the grouping of all the characters round Richelieu — the effect of his sudden recovery, &c, no reading, I think, can accurately gauge — & in the 4 th act the clinging of Julie to Richelieu, the protection he gives her, will have, I imagine, the physical effect of making the audience forget whether he is her father or not. There they are be- fore you, flesh & blood — the old man and the young Bride involved in the same fate & creat- ing the sympathy of a Domestic relation. More than all my dependence on the stage is in the acting of Richelieu — the embodiment of the portraiture, the work, the gesture, the per- sonation which reading cannot give. But still I may certainly overrate all this, for if the play do fail in interest, the character may reward the actor but not suffice to carry off any tedi- ousness in the play, especially as he is not al- C 6 2 3 ' TO MACREADY ways on the stage. On the whole, therefore, I am unable to give a casting vote — and leave it to you, with this assurance that if it be with- drawn, you shall have another by the end of February. I hope you received my alterations for Act V, &c, which you ought to have done Saturday morning — If so, pray tell me whether they are adopted or not — or if you can think of any plan to make the seizure of the Packet arise more from Richelieu's intellect and yet not disturb the previous passion and suspense. I think, too, that the effect of Richelieu's rela- tion to Julie w d be infinitely increased if we could introduce, however briefly, more fond- ness between them. Either in Act 1 when she is introduced, or 3 when she escapes the King — something more to put into action what he says in Act 4 when he calls her " Nurse, Soother, Plaything, Daughter/' &c. Tell me also what omissions and minor alterations are suggested. If we should decide "on inducting the Clergyman," I must have the Play again before it is copied out — with such cuts as you may think needful. So as to weave up and repolish the whole. You say a Ml" Lane was present, you have not sent his opinion. I shall be here for ten C 6 3 3 LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON days longer, if you like to send it down — in that case I will subjoin the Direction. What I much want to know is whether the jury knew or guessed whom I was. I fancy it from the wording of their criticisms. And there is eno' in the mannerism to be- tray me. I don't feel very sanguine in Blan- chard's judgement — as he thought both Miss Landon's & Hunt's plays were of brilliant suc- cess. To tell you the truth, it is rather your letter and what you say of the opinion of M r . s and Miss Macready that encourage me than the pencil notices. Yours most truly E. L. B. P.S. Have you ferreted out Miss Tallent's play yet? Direction if the Play be sent down : To go by the Bedford coach (no other) leaves Holborn George & Blue Boar at 2 pre- cisely. Directed to me at Kneb worth Park, near Cadicote (Not Stevenage) Herts to be left at the Lodge by the 28 milestone. As there is no hurry it need not be sent till you have had leisure to decide on the cuts and reconsider the whole matter — perhaps it may keep till I return. Was Act III felt weak? C 6 * 3 TO MACREADY XXXIII December 22, 1838. My dear Macready: I am very sorry I could not return the play £Mrs. Fanny Kemble Butler's^] — this Even! Not having received it till late in the Noon & not being able to work at it till 1 1 at Night. — Of its talent I say Nothing. — It has some xquisite touches — & some great power. But I agree more with Serle than Forster & for your sake & hers I say, " Pause — Reflect," before you make a very dangerous xperiment. Try the ordeal of reading it to women, & a few plain (not literary ) men. Honestly I think that without great alteration — the 3rd Act would close with hisses. At all events, the Pa- thos depends on the Judge not Anne — and if Vandenhoff does the Judge — why — Yours very truly E. L. B. P.S. I should not have said so much about the play — if you were not Manager. I fear the result might be a shock upon your manage- ment among a widish class. Moreover, I fear that as Acts 2 & 3 end with the strongest l 65 2 LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON (viz: most indelicate) positions, & yet with the feeblest agents ; there will be no respect for the actors to stifle the revolt at the situa- tions. xxxiv December 24, 1838. My dear Macready: I send the play as you wished. I make the fol- lowing suggestions: In Act 1st — about the Play. I think the effect of his grave kindness to Mauprat and Julie is heightened by the comic contrast of reading his play to himself. This may be as follows : Richelieu Go! When you return I have a feast for you — The last great act of my great play. Joseph {going out hastily) Worse than The Scourge! 1™1 TO MACREADY Richelieu (taking up his play) These verses. Gone! Poor Man! ( Seats himself with his play) Sublime : Enter Mauprat £«f Julie & as follows. Act III In the scene after Huguet is sent to Bastile — I have put some lines into DeBer's mouth — as an excuse to go out. As he must not see Francis, otherwise he would recognize him at the Bastile. I mention this, for the lines are no great things & you might otherwise cut them out as superfluous. Act II You have cut out about the Pigmies & Her- cules, but better retain. Bah ! in policy we foil gigantic danger. By giants, not dwarfs — the statues of our stately fortune are sculptured by the chisel not the axe. Because they connect themselves with his employment of Marion & Francis. In Act V — when Francis and DeBer go out struggling for the packet, DeBerighen must not cry out loud, lest it should seem odd that they are not overheard — the struggle should be rapid, intense — but not noisy. If any blades LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON used, Daggers not swords — as more commo- dious for close struggle. Act 3 — still ends weakly. But I have done all I can. In the play as printed, I shall add more Elaborate analysis of Richelieu's character & Louis's so as to remove ground for the criti- cisms I referred to last night. And if on the stage he stand out too amiably, it will be seen that he does so from the omission of touches too minute & subtle or scenes too lengthened for the action of a Play. — I shall long to know how it comes out in the green room. I feel very sure of Act V & think better of the inter- est for our time and labour. Fortunately I had done my corrections to-day before the news of poor L. E. L's death, which I have just seen in the paper. It has quite overcome me. And I cannot write now many little things that occur to me. So young, so gifted & I found a letter from her yesterday in high spirits. I have not been so shocked for years. — I hope I shall hear a good acct. of M rs M. Most truly y r ! E. L. B. Since writing the enclosed — it occurs to me that if you adopt my suggestion, Act 3 & show the Bed &c. — it would add to the suspense & C 68 ] TO MACREADY surprise by omitting Richelieu's words, "You have slain me — I am dead/' &c, & leave the audience in expectation till Mauprat returns, as to what his device really is. There are unfortunately so many papers used by way of writs, despatches &c, that we must distinguish broadly between them; the Writs of banishment & Death for Mauprat should be short scraps of Parchment & Riche- lieu's conditions of power which the King signs should be in a small portfolio or pocket-book with clasps. If I remember the History rightly, the Document containing these & other arti- cles of Richelieu's power was absolutely found ( after R's death ) in a red & gold morocco book . The Despatch must be distinguished from the writs, but I hardly know how. I should add about Dress. That I think in the pictures of Richelieu, he wears the colour & order of the Saint Esprit — that Louis never wore any colours but black & orange ribbons — that Mauprat must wear black for his first dress as Julie alludes to that colour, & that the general costume is very like Bragelone's, with trowsers to the knee, bows & a mantle. You will see, Act 5, that I have made the King say he promised to hold Baradas' life sacred — i s . 1 , because that will account for the Vindictive and C69 3 LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON ruthless Cardinal not killing him; 2 n . d , because at the Commencement Richelieu saying he had another bride, the Grave for Baradas — unless some such obstacle arise at the close, there would be no reason in Baradas' subsequent conduct for the Cardinal's changing his mind. By the way, Richelieu lived more splendidly than the King. Can the scene of their respec- tive rooms convey this idea? As they are in each other's arms, happy, Richelieu looks coldly at them & mutters, "After all our pains as Ministers, Kings & Courtiers, Human happiness still goes on." END. Now look well at this story ; you will see in- cident & position are good. But then there is one great objection. Who is to do Richelieu? Morillac has the principal part & requires you. But a bad Richelieu would spoil all. On the other hand, if you took Richelieu, there would be two acts without you, which will never do, & the principal intent of the plot would not fall on you. Tell me what is to be done. Must we give up this idea? Y rs Ever E. L. B. The incidents are all Historical Don't let me begin the thing if you don't think c 70 ] TO MACREADY it will do — & decide about Morillac & Riche- lieu. Send me back the papers. You can consult Forster, of course. You will find much of this story in "Une Maitresse de Louis 13," by Sain tine. xxxv 1838. My dear Sir: Lord Conyngham suggests strongly, that if possible, The Omnibus would be represented first — it might be said " By particular Desire" — without absolutely saying that it was by Royal Command It is understood in the upper circles that the Queen is coming, therefore such a hint would be understood. I know not how far this is pos- sible. The Queen will arrive at 8 — I hear from Serle that he has disposed of all his boxes [The Lady of Lyons]. Webster has written to me to ask me to write him a play for the Haymarket, so I hope we are getting up. Y rs truly, E. L. B. C 71 3 LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON The Queen wants to read the Play. I have ordered a copy to be made up and sent to you at six — will you see it placed in Her M's Box. — Don't forget it. xxxvi February, 1839. My dear Macready: Many thanks for the tickets. I cannot find any substitute for Francis, tho' I have been hunting thro' all the memoirs of the next reign for some Son of Fortune brought up by the Cardinal, whose character would correspond. He must therefore stay as he is at present. Let me have back my MSS., as soon as they are copied. They ought to bear the motto, "Cut & Come again/* If there are any lines to be altered or strengthened, let me know. We will fight up every inch of our way. Don't give Louis to Serle without mature thought. He would look it well — & walk it well. But would he do the passage where he discovers the treason & reads the scroll with C 72 3 TO MACREADY sufficient fire and strength? for the Cardinal's effect would be much impaired if Louis's ag- ony & dismay were not forcible — also is he distinctly audible? There are so many allusions to the youth of Francis & so much of the interest of the character depends on his being young, that I have very great doubts of the Audience be- ing sufficiently conscious of the great youth of Elton! Wig him as you will. When does Jerrold's play come out? Y - S ever E. L. B. P. S. I am in a deadly rage Having just rec'd the accounts for The Lady in the Provinces 17 '£ 3s ! ! ! — the Agency at the Dramatic Authors must be shamefully done. I should like to remodel the whole thing. I am the only man of Business of my whole tribe. XXXVII February 27, 1839. My dear Macready: I am glad the tag does. With regard to the c 73 n LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON Business part of your letter I can only say that it seems to me that the terms had better be regulated by the success. And that all I shall expect is that they may not be so estimated as to defeat my primary object — that of being of service to your enterprise. Will you kindly have copied out & sent to me tomorrow, the 4 first lines said by Baradas — Act 1st, Scene 1st, immediately following Orleans: "Well, Marion, see how the Play prospers yonder." These 4 lines have been lost by the Printer and I have no other copy. Pray let me have them Wednesday — tomorrow. E. L. B. XXXVIII March, 1839. My dear Macready: I cannot devise any change for the metaphori- cal line act III, & must leave it to your own abrupt inspiration. May I beg you to guard me the first night from a race who have previously c 74 3 ■ TO MACREADY declared themselves my most bitter persecu- tors. — They are always found in the shilling gallery the first night of my plays & carry on their malignant discords under the innocent but delusive appellation of "Babies"! Pray ordain that all such implike armfuls may be interdicted to the youthful matrons — who sit amongst the gods. May I beg you to give the enclosed to Warde, whose address I don't know — it re- quires the alteration of one word in Act V, his dialogue with Julie : instead of" dark — dream- ing eyes," let him say, "inspiring eyes." "yrs E. L. B. XXXIX March, 1839. My dear Macready: Several persons have told me they did not understand how Huguet got the packet, & in the bustle of the scene ( the guards being be- tween the audience & Mauprat in going out) the words "to Huguet" & the previous ques- c 75 n LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON tion to Huguet were not heard distinctly. I hope this will find you at Rehearsal and that you will make this as distinct & emphatic as possible. So much depends on it. Y r . s in haste E. L. B. XL March, 1839. My dear Macready: There was a little point I forgot to mention today. In Act II d , Scene with Berighen & Mauprat (the part that's left after Julie's exit), DeBerighen in going out also says — " Don't stir — no form," &c; the effect of this was destroyed by Mauprat's remaining sea ted! whereas he ought to be bustling about in an- gry agitation. When DeBerighen says, " Don't stir," he ought to seem as if making at DeBer. — So with "no form" — it is Mauprat's action here that should give point to the other parts. Please just to cast your Universal Eye — Riche- lieu-like — over this, as tho' a trifle, it is an C 76 -} TO MACREADY important one & worth the postage of this — from our House. Y rs ever E. L. B. I hear at the House nothing but admiration of your acting. XLI March, 1839. My dear Macready: If de Beringhen must have another jest, I can think of no better than "St. Denis travelled without his head. I'm luckier than St. Denis." [Exit. In Act II, when Mauprat rushes out for the first time thro' the gardens saying, "I loathe the face of Man/' Baradas exclaims, "I have him ! " This must be allowed for in the very next scene between you & Joseph — you use thesame xpression," I have themnow — I have them." Let Baradas say instead: "Go where thou wilt — the hell hounds of Revenge Pant in thy track, & dog thee down." C 77 n LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON Baradas ought to be longer & more florid expressing his exultation than Richelieu, whose simplicity of phrase comes from the ease of superior power & uniform success — with whom in fact what raises all the Devils in Baradas' heart is mere Child's play. Ward will, I trust, understand that the char- acteristics of Baradas are prodigious energy, restlessness — with youth — love — j ealousy — hate put in contest with the vast & dark move- ment of the old Statesman's intellect — & con- cealed vindictiveness. — Much will depend on his forcing out this contrast. Let me have a list of the Dramatis personce — the names of the actors for all — to print with the play to- night or tomorrow morning as early as con- venient. Let me know exactly what part in the Soliloquy, Act III, you speak, that they may be referred to in the printed play. How do you spell Ruelle? The old way was Ruel — I find it was the place where Richelieu entertained the poet. E. L. B. C 78 ] TO MACREADY XLII March 13, 1839. My dear Macready: Pardon one more 2 penny post, to suggest 3 small cuts, — which seem to me important. After Miss Faucit, act III, exclaims: "More royalty in Woman's honest heart Than dwells within the crowned majesty And sceptered anger of a hundred Kings," she now adds, "Yielded — Heavens yielded/' Omit that" yieldedHeav ens yielded. "It comes weak after her effect & interferes with the sud- denness of your " To my breast, close, close ! " Act5. When Julie rushes toMauprat &says, "Do with me as you will," omit Mauprat's "Once more ! why this is mercy, Count ! " & let him come at once to "Think, my Julie, life at the best is short — but love immortal." In the same act, when Baradas sees the pa- per in the King's hand — and rushes forward, crying, " Hold," & is put back by Joseph. Omit "Death the Despatch" — the audience know what it is — & the familiar & hackneyed word becomes almost ludicrous & hurt the effect to- night. His action suffices to paint his despair & let the King run on. I had forgot to say that sev- c 79 n LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON eral persons round me thought that Richelieu should say more to Franfois — something in reward — & declared themselves disappointed that he did not. If you don't object, you might say, " Tour fortune 's made, brave boy; never say fail again/' I am very glad you kept in the lines, Act III, "Strange while I laughed" — they were effec- tive & wanted for the after line, " My omens lied not/' Yours truly E. L.B. XLIII April 24, 1839. My dear Macready: I delayed answering your note in the hope of calling. But have been prevented. I really feel many scruples & much reluctance touching the Enclosure, since I hear that these Goths — the Proprietors — have seized on the Sur- plus, & that after all your success, you may be defrauded of its just gains. Under these circumstances I feel as if I were swelling the CscO TO MACREADY tribe of Barabbas, in appropriating to myself any farther portion of profits inadequate to your own just demands & claims. Nor should I prevail on myself to do so had I not an equal scruple with regard to your pride & a feeling that, were it not so, you might be deterred from applying for any assistance I could give you at some future period — the experience of one season at Cov*. Garden will place that Theatre at your own terms — the next — and I feel convinced that you will live to complete what you have so nobly begun. I met Young last night, who spoke with enthusiasm of your exertions, &c. Will you dine with me on Sunday May 1 2th, to meet Lords Lansdowne & Wrexham, 1-2 past 7. Truly yours E. L. B. C 81 3 LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON XLIV Hertford St., Tuesday, July 15, 1839. My dear Macready: I was extremely vexed not to be able to come to you yesterday Evening, having been un- avoidably & long engaged to dinner. But I have taken a box for tomorrow — an occasion which inspires me with the most melancholy interest & the deepest regret that my wish and effort to assist your struggle were so unavail- ing. I hope yet that some happy event may con- sistently with prudence & profit, retain you at the head of our suffering Drama. Most affec! & truly yf E. L. B. XLV September, 1839. My dear Macready: As I am prevented going to Kneb worth, TO MACREADY write about the play ^Norman] to Hertford St. I shall trim up your first act with a little more poetry. I think that Act 2 should end with something comic — even if you object to the veil — it gives more buoyancy & life to Caesar & contrasts the later acts. E. L. B. I hope to see you in Shy lock. As I happen to be a peculiar Miser in paper, I have been very unhappy at the loss of the y 2 quire I sent you by mistake & humbly request to see it once more. " I 'm very poor — a very poor hidalgo ! " XLVI Hertford St. 1839. My dear Macready: I send you Norman — the only parts of con- sequence between Mother & son omitted are in the 5th act on his second surrender of his birthright — which the present Plot — that will be far more popular & safe — does not per- mit. — I feel certain of your own effects as the C83] LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON most powerful &empassioned you have had yet in any play of mine — during the first four acts \jwords here entirely gone^\ think to strengthen your 5th act if possible — Tho' I think you will grantthatyour joiningthe hands of the parents over Violet's form as if over an altar will pro- duce a much greater effect on the stage than you might suppose in the Closet. I hope cer- tainly, that you will not entertain doubts as to the Play generally — for if this won't do, I can do no other & M r . Webster must look elsewhere — It is literally, "Aut Caesar out nihil." But I hope on second reading you will think better of it. Any suggestions towards brightening up Gain's part & others — of course I should be most happy to receive. I am going on to Herts on Saturday & hope something will be decided ere then. Ever yours, E. L. B. C 84 ] TO MACREADY XLVII 1839. My dear Macready: I beg to acknowledge your draft for =£100. I can only express my reluctance to be the cause of any diminution from your inadequate profits, but I feel that you would not listen to a bashfulness of this kind — & that any scru- ples from me might only be an obstacle to any future assistance I can have it in my power to afford you as a "Professional Author." I have the fullest reliance on the intention & good wishes of L d f Lansdowne & Nor- manby — I am just returned from dining with the former, where you & your xcellencies & talents were the subject of general conversa- tion & sympathy. — Whenever your request is drawn out, will you suffer me to see it? — & whenever it goes before the P. Council, will you apprise me, that I may have an interview with any influential persons. I sK be very much obliged if you would read Norman even hastily, at your early lei- sure, as I shall soon go abroad — & there may be much to alter — supposing you like it as C85 J LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON a whole. Time therefore w*! be a great object to me. I am in the middle of a sentimental Modern Comedy — a good subject — in case Norman does not do. But I find Comedy xceedingly difficult & get on very slowly — I dare say I shall write it over 3 or 4 times. — There is a great deal of dramatic pathos & passion in the part designed for you, & a very good low Comedy, old gentleman part, for Farren. I am most sorry to hear the fiends are still at you. I hope to see the [Henry] V* next week when we will talk of these matters — I am enraptured at its brilliant success. I hear nothing can equal the splendour of the pageant xcept the greatness of the acting. Ever E. L. B. XLVIII Fulham, Monday Morning, 1839. My dear Macready: I am extremely obliged to you for your frank C 86 J TO MACREADY communication. I can say unaffectedly, my only wish was to bring you some aid, in a struggle with which I heartily sympathize, & my only regret is now not to have succeeded in that object. Will you have the goodness to send the Ms ^Norman] sealed up to 36 (a) Hertford St. Y r . s truly E. L. B. XLIX Craven Lodge, Fulham, Sept. 25, 1839. My dear Macready: I send you the play £Sea Captain, afterwards known as The Rightful Heir] founded on Nor- man, but entirely changed, & I think so much of it that I regret it is not at your own theatre it is to be produced. You will find your part greatly strengthened — &also the comic relief you wanted — Elvira (that Woman), tho' still strong, is toned down. But there are 2 other LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON characters, Gorper & the Inquisitor — whom I fear we shall be put to for suitable actors. I can't do better than this — I am sure. I should be greatly obliged by your opinion as soon as possible. If you can suggest no alterations, tant mieux. — It will want my last verbal revision. Perhaps too in the last Act — you may sug- gest means for an earlier entrance for Don Caesar. Pray write me a line as soon as you can. I stay in Town or at Fulham for your judgement. E. L. B. Knebworth, Wednesday, October 23, 1839. My dear Macready: I have made some alterations in the diction of the earlier acts, & to save time I enclose you the proofs £Sea Captain^] — which when you have read, please to send to Saunders & Ott- ley. The principal are as follows: C 88 ] TO MACREADY Act I. 1. It seems a little too abrupt. Norman's entering & Violet so immediately after Prudence goes out. I have given her therefore a few pretty lines which strengthen her part, p. 18. 2. Your comedy with Prudence is improved by being put into blank verse — it makes the change less abrupt — the words are very little altered, pages 20-21. 3- I have altered your final exit at close of Act. But don't know whether it will do. Scattered throughout this act, there are a few verbal alterations which you can attend to or not, as you glance over them. Act II. By a very trifling alteration in words, Sir Maurice's Dialogues with Lady A. & Percy are put in blank verse. It will not give them any more trouble. But some actors do not act blank verse so well & easily as they do prose. If this be the case with Strickland, better per- haps not disturb him. I leave this to you. One or 2 verbal alterations in this act which you will see in the margin. c 89 j LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON Act III, page 59. I have given a very happy point to Sir Maurice which I should like inserted, if you see no objection. Give me a line to say if you like these corrections, and if yourclosing lines, Act I, will do. Ever y rs E. L. B. Pray let Saunders have the proofs as soon as possible. LI November, 1839. My dear Macready: Pray have the papers dipp'd in spirits of wine. The delay in burning marred the effects yes- terday. I think I shall propose a few more cuts Act 5 £Sea Captain]. But shall try and see that last scene again to-night. E. L. B. C90} TO MACREADY LII Heme Bay, Sunday night, Nov. 4, 1839. My dear Macready: It seems to me that if it were possible you would tear the proofs instead of burning them, you would greatly heighten the effect. Each time I have seen this, I have felt the effect de- stroyed by the comparative tameness of the physical agency — the delay in taking fire & the awkward struggle & no struggle of Ash- dale. In my earliest sketch of the play £Sea Captain J I had introduced a watchfire, which would have had a very different effect , but which I omitted as too evident for the purpose. The action of tearing the paper is far more forci- ble — it is in fact making the actor the agent; whereas when fire does it, he is only passive — the Fire is the agent. I don't know whether you will like to venture this experiment one night. I must leave it in your hands. I should like much to hear if Knowles swamps us — a single word on that subject sent to Craven Cottage will be forwarded to me. Y r . s ever E. L. B. C 91 3 LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON LIII Dublin, Nov. 30, 1839. My dear Macready: I shall be glad to hear how the Sea Captain gets on tho' judging from the House I last saw & from the newspaper accounts of the crowds at Cov. Garden, I am fearful that I shall not have a very favourable answer. — It wants 6 weeks to the 15th January. I can hardly im- agine that Webster can find it answer to run it on every night till then. — Do you think during the recess it would be advisable or safe to alter the play — substitute in the 3 d act some other agency for Onslow's death — get rid of Gaussen — and study some new strength for Act 5 ? To do so would unfortunately in some measure justify the Hostile critics. Richelieu has been brought out here with great success. Calcraft plays it better than you w? suppose and the mise en scene is xcellent. Calcraft copies your Cardinal of course — and to those who have not seen the original it is effective. Y r . E. L. B. I 9* 3 TO MACREADY LIV Hertford St., Tuesday, 1839. My dear Macready: A foreign Lady of distinction, known to a most intimate friend of mine, has written the accompanying play. She makes it a particular request, that you w d glance over it & accord her 2 minutes interview. It is probable ( I have not seen the play myself) that it may not suit the English stage, but I should feel peculiarly obliged, in that case, by such an intimation as may most soothe disappointment, & if more- over you could spare the time to receive her visit it would be an additional favour ; should the latter be possible — will you be kind eno' to fix the day & hour, & as I am leaving town will you send your reply to me, to the R. Hon b ! e C. D'Eyncourt, 5 Albemarle S l . who will be good eno' to communicate its purport to the Lady. Y rs truly E. L. Bulwer. I 93 3 LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON LV Hertford St., Dec. 20, 1839. My dear Macready : W? the office of censor ( Dramatic ) be one either agreeable to yourself or which as being still on the Boards you could with propriety ac- cept? I say this, for in consequence of C. Kem- ble's health, applications are already being made for the post. J. Kemble jun. has applied. Now I have learned to-day that there w d be every disposition to give you the preference sfr! you wish to apply — and that being the case hasten to tell you so. Yours in hurry E. L. B. The subscription to the testimonial is very good. At all events keep this secret. C 94 ^ TO MACREADY LVI December, 1839. My dear Macready : I am very glad I wrote to you. But do you not overrate the salary of the censor? Is it more than 2 or 3 hundred a year? I cannot see the least necessity for your implying any pledge as to leaving the stage, and since you see no objection to being censor while you act, I am sure no one else ought. Nor could any voice be raised against your appointment. — Since you ask my suggestion, I earnestly entreat you to write at once to the Lord Chamberlain (Uxbridge). Don't lose a moment — ask for the vacancy — should it occur. Kemble's health the natural excuse — others are applying. I should state the reasons you suggest in y! note to me why actor and censor are not incompati- ble, but you might also add that rather than lose the appointment, you w d . resign altogether. This they w d . never dream of wishing — quite the reverse. But still the offer might be made. Send me at the same time & as soon as pos- sible a duplicate of your Memorial that I may 1 95 3 LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON make proper use of it. I have secured Lord Uxbridge's brother-in-Law, the vice-Cham- berlain George Byng, your great admirer & friend — & I am now going to write to him to say you will accept the appointment. In dreadful haste — but in the sincerest de- light to serve your views in every way. Y r . s ever E. L. B. My haste is to catch Byng before he leaves town. LVII Hertford St., Wednesday, 1840. My dear Macready: A M: Richardson, the geologist & translator of Korner, has sent me the accompanying Ms. of an afterpiece to transmit to you. He says it is a translation of a piece that makes the greatest effect in Germany. I have looked over it — there is a great deal of fun in the idea, but it evidently wants a great deal of curtailment & a great deal of dressing up for the English Stage ; in fact it £96 1 TO MACREADY should be put into the hands of a practised farce writer. Howbeit at all events you will do me the favour I know to send a kindly answer to the Author if declined altogether. His address is Geological Department British Museum. Y r . s very truly, E. L. B. LVIII Craven Cottage, Fulham, Friday, 1840. My dear Macready: Many thanks for your letter. I have been en- deavouring in vain to recall my notion of the Heautontimorumenos, but all I can gather is the impression that it will afford one very fine scene or even Act — but I cannot see help for more. The German story from Mrs. Opie will make a very pretty Inchbald sort of play — but lacks brilliancy, depth & effect for long & pro- found sensation. The more I thiqk, the more I am persuaded, that since you dislike Tragedy, 1 97 3 LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON Pure Comedy would be the thing. And all, in this, I will ask you to do is to give me an idea of the sort of Comic Character which will suit yourself. No doubt, in your Stage xperience — you have often said — "If I could get such or such a character fully elaborated, I could make a great hit in it." Think but of this, & give me the fullest conception of it you can. What I want is — that all its pathos & height should not be apart from the comic, but belong so essentially to it (as in Don Quixote) that you should almost laugh & weep, ridicule & admire in a breath. My fault is to separate the comic from the grave, but I think I could do much if I once saw how to blend the two in one conception. If I were writing a comedy for Farren, I should soon knock it off. But strange to say, you are my stumbling-block — I cannot raise myself up to that grave high Humour which would alone suit your dignity. My forte in comedy would be Farren Characters — I think it should be modern life — & introduce popular scenes — Kensington Gardens — the Stock Exchange Gradgrind agent etc. Yet I have often medi- tated on Athenian Comedy — & for the first time in Dramatic History, place the scenes & the life of that People on the English stage. The Law C 98 3 TO MACREADY on which Plautus builds so largely gives half the Plot at once — viz: that the Nearest Rela- tion must marry or find a Husband for, an orphan girl — once I thought of Pericles him- self, who after passing a law to illegitimatize the offspring of the foreign women , intrigues to legitimatize his own Son by Aspasia. But this would require an Aspasia ! & besides would be called Immoral. Athenian Comedy abounds in character. The Parasite, the Demagogue, the plotting slave — the gay profligate termed Dandy — Philosophy & whoring — still, it would be an xperiment! This is all I can say — I shall have one Month of Leisure — from the middle of September to the middle of October ( my best period for the vein ) — after that time, I have a most arduous engagement & shall be tied to Time. — Calom- nie is excellent, but I have been so often ac- cused of borrowing from the French that I had better avoid the charge, & unless I borrowed largely from Calomnie I should fall upon the School for Scandal. Yours most truly, E. L. B. C 99 1 LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON LIX 1840. My dear Macready: I should have answered your letter before, but was in hopes that something might occur. Alas ! the vein is still barren. Forster will tell you how he returns to my old Idea of The Public. He fancies he sees dignity and pathetic interest in the situations & his ideas seem very good. But I cannot find a clue to any plot. If you talk over this with him, some outline may suggest itself. It might embody a part of Calomnie. I have thought a little of a mixed comic clas- sic play — Terentian — Scene Athens & subject taken from the favourite distress of the Greek Comedians — viz: the Law which obliged the nearest relative to marry an orphan. I think something serious & pathetic might arise here — & the Greek slaves parasites & boasters may furnish comic characters. But I don't see my way farther. Unless a very good comedy suggest itself, a mixed play is safer, especially where the comic company is not so strong as the grave, which I fancy must be your case & indeed the C 1GO 3 TO MACREADY case everywhere. A mixed play may centre itself like The Lady of Lyons in 4 characters. Yours ever E. L. B. LX May 24, 1840. My dear Macready: I was summoned to Kneb Saturday, return this evening & find by mistake all my letters have been forwarded to me ; if therefore you have written to me, I have not had your note. Did you, then, make any appointment with me to- morrow evening, if so, when and where? Truly y" E. L. B. C "» 3 LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON LXI June 27, 1840. My dear Macready: I have thought of a comedy & will show you the first two acts when in a state for it before I proceed further. But what I wish to know is — whether it would be possible to get Farren at the Hay market, also Anderson. I hardly know how I could in any way get on in my present plan without them. I have an old gentleman whom Strickland c d not make effective, but who w d suit Farren ... & I have a young Lord with a dash of wit & sentiment about him whom Webster or Lacy w d . ruin. W* Buckstone & Elson be at the Hay- market? In short, tho' my Comedy may not do at all — which I can soon see — it won't do at all events without quiet force — the characters, yours excepted, are very equal. My proposed title is "Appearances" [afterwards called Money], the idea a genteel Comedy of the present day — the Moral, a satire on the way appearances of all kinds impose on the public, C 102 ] TO MACREADY you a rogue playing the respectable man — & the Intellect of the play. I repeat that as yet it is very uncertain whether it will do. But if I can achieve the first acts, I think I see my way thro' the rest. — Lastly. When w d . it most be wanted & best come out? Pray get me minute & faithful answers touching Farren, Anderson etc. Y r . s truly E. L. B. I still continue in a very bad way. Hope to get over to Carlsbad. LXII September, 1840. My dear Macready: Do you still want my Play £Money] ? Frankly yes or no. I can now copy it fairly. I have heightened the individuality of your character — by what I think a happy afterthought & given to the whole play a purpose & philosophy it wanted C 103 3 LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON before. This you may conjecture by the Title I now suggest "The Egotists" or The Sin of the Century. I propose carrying Egotism thro' many of its various Shades. Y r . s very truly E. L. B. I have been ill again. LXIII Aix, September 13, 1840. My dear Macready: I sent you 3 Acts of the Comedy [Money] by the Bag — from Brussells I send now 2 by the Post. A thousand pardons for taxing you so heavily. But I have no choice of any other con- veyance — &amjust leaving Aix. I know, how- ever, that you will not grudge it if the thing is good. As I have little time to write now — I come at once to my critical remarks. 1 st. The Scotch of Macfinch &c had better TO MACREADY be looked over by one more learned than I am in that Athenian tongue. 2nd. The reading of the will — & the serv- ing the execution & arrest. Dramatic Vraisem- blance of this I am not an adequate judge. 3d. Is Doleful too much the name of a Farce — if so, change it. 4. I think in the first 3 acts you will find little to alter. But in Act 4 — the 2 scenes with Lady B. & Clara — & Joke & the Trades- men don't help on the Plot much — they were wanted, however, especially the last to give time for change of dress & smooth the lapse of the theme from money to dinner ; you will see if this part requires any amendment. Would it be possible to introduce another Scene of Passion here with Clara & Evelyn? I fear not. 5. Are the Acts too long ! They are shorter than in the Jealous Wife. 6. And principally with regard to Act 5 I don't feel too easy. The first idea suggested by you & worked on by me was of course to carry on Evelyn's trick to the last — & bring in the creditors &c when it is discovered that he is as rich as ever. I so made Act 5 at first. But I found these great objections: 1st. The trick was so palpable to the audi- ence that having been carried thro' Acts 3 & 4, LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON it became stale in Act 5 — & the final dis- covery was much less comic than you w d . sup- pose. 2ndly. From the conviction of the Audience that Georgina supposing him poor w d . decline his hand, all the interest in the strong scene between Evelyn & Clara was weakened — whereas Sir John having discovered — & his having got a supposed letter from Georgina after that discovery — the audience might think him again deceived & entangled & therefore take adeeper interest in the position with Clara. 3dly . After Georgina ( whom I then brought on the stage still supposing him ruined) de- clined him for Frederic, he of course rushes to Clara. But his burst is spoilt by the presence of the crowd of vulgar creditors, Glossmore, Kent, &c. waiting for their money — & some- how or other in short I found that in this con- ception the grave & the gay spoilt each other. My present idea of Sir John discovering the trick has given much more interest to the act. Yet I am not pleased with it still altogether. I think it wants coup & completeness. But you are the best judge. I am sure on the whole that we have ample stuff for a better comedy than I ever thought I should write, thanks to your suggestion to which I have but given a form. TO MACREADY I have only got a rough copy of bits & scraps. Therefore Pray let me know very early at Frankfort that you have received the 5 par- cels. They will probably arrive the same day or within a day of each other. Yours in haste E. L.B. Direct Poste restante Frankfort. I propose "Money;" a Comedy for the title. I had thought of Money makes the Man or Men & Money. But I think Money the best & prettiest. LXIV This address till Nonnewerth, I reach Coblentz, The Rhine, Frankfort on Maine. September 15, 1840. My dear Macready: I write to tell you — from Nonnewerth — the Gem of the Rhine — the Isle on which Roland's mistress lived, a Nun — the isle on which when I was younger I wasted a world of enthusiasm C 1Q 7 ] LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON in the Pilgrims of the Rhine — before me the Drachenfels — beside me Rolandseck — and such a Devil of a cold room as I am in! ! ! No fireplace — no curtains, & my beast of a servant has lost my Nightcap ! And yet it is Nonnewerth — I ought to feel romantic — I'm sure I'm freezing. And Mon Dieu, Mon Dieu qu'oifaire — for a Nightcap! Out of my win- dow, the prospect is enchanting, except that there is a great deal of dirty linen hanging up to dry. Schiller wrote his finest ballad on the legend of this spot ( I wonder whether he generally slept with a Nightcap). Revenons a nos moutons. Last Night as I was travelling — between Aix-la-Chapelle & Boulogne — much too cold to sleep ( tho'then I had a Night- cap!) — & smoking a cigar of more than or- dinary merit — the moon & stars bright in Heaven & myself considering how many Tha- lers de Prusse I had thrown away in the vain search for health — my mind by a natural di- version settled itself on the Comedy of Money ( you've no notion how cold I am ! ), and I was more & more persuaded that Act 5 wanted shortening — tho' I find it difficult to suggest the precise alteration. I take it for granted that two objects are necessary — 1st, to keep the audience in some C 108 3 TO MACREADY suspense; sndly, to give as much interest as possible to the scene between Evelyn & Clara. Hence I imagine that Sir John ought to dis- cover the trick ( that discovery effecting these objects). But on the other hand, this a little lowers the intellectual dignity of Evelyn, whose excuse for this trick ought to be its suc- cess, & makes the catastrophe turn not on his successful skill in outhumbugging Sir John, but on the accident of Sir John's punishment in the deceit of the dower. What think you of that objection? — I think also that the Audi- ence will want to see reintroduced & shamed that Chorus of Worldly Characters who have moved round the principals — thro the Play. This last I could effect with encreased comedy. Suppose Sir John knows that Evelyn is not ruined — but the rest imagine he is. Bring in Glossmore — tradesmen — several members of the Club, &c, whom he may be supposed to have borrowed of. And while they are insisting on their money, Sir John hugging himself in his superior cleverness & saying to Evelyn, " I '11 stand by you, my dear fellow." But in this Comedy Evelyn can have no share. It must suc- ceed his Interview with Clara and his convic- tion that Georgina had lent him the io,ooo=£. He therefore can have no spirits for any kind C 1Q 9 3 LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON of joke — otherwise the time to introduce them is when Sir John has dismissed Lady Beever for Georgina — then they come in — to them Sharp announcing not only the boro', but a vomit of things, showing Evelyn's opulence — the astonishment of the Dupes who are dis- missed by Evelyn's merely saying to Sharp as he is running on, "Pay these gentlemen, will you?" — Sir John's rapture & then the coup of Georgina's departure. But in all this, as I before said, what can Evelyn do? His part is not strong as it ought to be — already in Act 5. In short, you must well consider this act. — I think it \v d . be desirable, if possible, to reintro- duce the crowd of characters. But if the 4 acts do, we may consider the Play as settled, for we shall be sure to shape out the 5th which has some very good things in its position. — After your last speech in Act 5 as sent to you, I propose to add something to take away from its didactic tone & bring back both the comic spirit & the picture subject of the Play. It will run thus Doleful But for the truth & the Love when found, to make us toler- ably happy — we should not be without — Lady Beever Good health. TO MACREADY Doleful Good spirits. Clara A good heart. Evelyn {shaking his head at Clara & half gaily, half sadly) And enough Money! I write this taking it for granted you have ere now received the 5 acts & hoping to hear to that effect at Frankfort. I continue very poorly. The climate is dreadfully cold & I am now just going to retire to rest — without A Nightcap! If the play does generally, send me a de- tail of all the corrections you would suggest, & if I don't return to England, I will send it you thus amended & with its best polish. With regard to the terms — I take it for granted that Webster will agree to the same as for the Sea Captain — 600 £ down for 2 years — provided he continues the Haymarket. — But I must not count on the chickens, unless I hear from you that they will bear hatching. — Whoever does Blount must not haw-haw, but be perfectly simple & young & good looking & smooth. Doleful & Sir John require very good actors. c m 3 LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON LXV September 26, 1840. My dear Macready: Your letter of the 21st reached me this morn- ing (not the other — the Lost Unpaid). I am truly enchanted that the comedy [[Money]] seems to you good, & likely to succeed, & your congratulations are so warm & friendly that they make me insensible to the cold of this Barbarous Climate. I continue ill & am indeed worse than ever as to my principal malady. I shall return to England in a few days — and if you will then return me my copy or another — with all your suggestions — I will see to them during the few days I shall stay in Town; & leaving the Play & its fate in your hands, set out either to Italy or Cadiz. All the Doc- tors here concurring in the advice of a warm climate for the Winter. With regard to the Characters — would the interest of the Play be heightened by making Georgina more interesting & Blount more witty — more of the gay blood of the old Com- edy. His & her parts both are at present dis- agreeable & will require great skill in indiffer- C 112 n TO MACREADY ent actors to carry off. — So indeed will Sir John — for I recollect how Sir Maurice in the Sea Captain was spoilt because the audience will not sympathize in Humour when unconvinced unless the actor has great subtlety. Consider all this well. Consider also Act 5, thro' which I do not yet see my way to improvement. W d . it prolong the interest tomake Blount & Geor- gina return with Lady Bee ver — Georgina hav- ing declined to run off but refusing Evelyn be- fore Sir John can interfere &generally express- ing her regret at her deception? — So thro' their consistency Blount & Georgina must be elevated throughout from their present selfish insignificance. Does not the ending of Act 2 leave rather a painful impression & displease one with Evelyn — all the sympathy being for the girl? Can what Evelyn says in that 5 Scene with Clara be embellished & heightened ? Her part beats his there. Will you ag 5 ? I come to town have the Law points as to the vraisemblance of the will & the technicalities of serving the Execution & the Arrest looked up — one w d . not fail on these points. The Stage allows a certain looseness — but sufficient accuracy to satisfy a miscella- neous audience must be kept up. See also, I ■C 113 ] LETTERS OF BULWER-LYTTON entreat, to the Scotch of our friend Macfinch. I will have a little programme of the Scenes — of the Actors agst we meet. As for you, my dear Macready, whenever you can find me a Man with more thoroughly the air, breeding & person of a gentleman, I will allow that you may be diffident as to act- ing the man of fashion — not till then. Recollect — that Evelyn is always simple — I should suggest his first dress — a black frock buttoned up, black stock & no collar ( which always looks rather seedy ) , trowsers without straps & shoes; in his second dress — exactly your usual costume. Sir John should wear a blue coat with velvet collar, buttoned up — the Kings button. In the Evening — his or- der of the Guelph — breeches & silk stock- ings. Blount must be perfectly dressed — also Smooth. D'Orsay may be consulted here. Stout, with a little brown coat, blotting-paper trow- sers, coloured cravat & thick stick. Glossmore is a ci devant j eune homme about 45 , wears studs & plenty of shirt. Doleful ought to be hand- some, to account for Lady B — liking him. The Butler's pantry was meant, partly to give time to the others to dress, & partly to carry on the time from morning till dinner — otherwise it is superfluous. TO MACREADY I conclude the parts to be cast as follows : Lady Beever : Mrs. Sterling, whom Forster recommends Clara : Miss Faucit Georgina : Miss Taylor i.e. Mrs. Lacy Glossmore : Who? Smooth : Phelps — who better ? His part seems to me excel- lent. I sh