Cornell University Library The original of tliis book is in tlie Cornell University Library. There are no known copyright restrictions in the United States on the use of the text. http://www.archive.org/details/cu31924013572965 JOHN WILSON'S Pbose Style ^n ®lit&cr0raUuatf Eij^sis; , FANNIE W.-McLEAN WITff .dJV JJtTMODUCFldJV -ALBERT S. COOK pROPXiSSOB OF THE ENGLISH LaNGUAGB AN15 LiTERATUBB 'iN THB USiVBBSITT OF CAIiIFOENIA ' o}«-matter. His poetic temperament and natural love of music insured for him a musical flow in the sincere and natural expression of his feelings. The fol- lowing extract is from Christopher- in his Sporting Jacket : — "But oh! that Craig-Hall hawthorn! and oh! that Craig-Hall broom ! They send their sweet rich scent so far into the hushed air of memory, that all the weary worn-out weaknesses of age drop from us like a garment, and even now the flight of that swallow seems more aerial — more alive with bliss his clay-built nest — the ancient long-ago blue of the sky returns to heaven — not for many a long year have we seen so fair — so frail — so transparent and angel-mantle-looking a cloud ! " Xaste. Many of the quotations already cited are sufficient to prove that Wilson possessed an innate sense 60 CHEISTOPHEK KOETH. of the beautiful, and a delicate artistic judgment. How- ever, his writings have too much the character of spoken thought not to have lead him into transgressions of the artistic rules of composition. Defects of this kind are all owing to his impetuous, passionate nature, and to his hurried, careless manner of writing. We have already mentioned the most important of these violations of art principles. To summarize, they are slang words and phrases, unwieldy sentences, coarse figures of speech, scathing invectives, and boisterous humor. These faults taint but certain portions of his work; therefore those portions alone are to be condemned, and to be denied a name among works of standard literature. The main body of his works is pure in sentiment and artistic in form. KINDS OF COMPOSITION. DESCRIPTION. E:sternal Nature. — With the name of Wilson is indis- Solubly associated the beauty and charm of Scottish Highland scenery. Not until William Black do we find any one who approaches him in picturing that country, and their manner of description is entirely unlike. How is it that Wilson has gained such fame as a descriptive writer? It is not that he has any clear and concise method of description; for, by an analysis of those works where it were natural to look for some such plan or ground-work of description, we find an en- tirely arbitrary mode of procedure. The delight created in us by his pictures must be accounted for otherwise EXTERNAL XATURB. 61 than by system and order. The source of his winsome- ness is found in the intense feeling breathed into and through his sketclaes of nature, and in the fehcities of his speech. His descriptions of external nature are usually con- nected with some sentiment or thought. He loves the beautiful places of this earth because they are the scene of human joys and sorrows, and because they are sug- gestive in their varied aspects of the different phases of human nature. His frequent personifications speak this feeling of a bond of sympathy between man and nature. His descriptions are limited to such portions of Scotland as he had visited many times and had grown intimately acquainted with. On account of this lim- itation, the spirit in which he writes is more enthusiastic. He is rich in the store of personal memories clustered around the scenes he describes : — "Ye fields, that long ago we so often trode together, with the wind-swept shadows hovering about our path — Ye streams, whose murmtir awoke our imaginations, as we lay reading, or musing together in day-dreams, among the broomy braes — Ye woods, where we started at the startled cushat, or paused, without a word, to hear the creature's solitary moans and murmurs deepen- ing the far-off hush, already so profound — Ye moors and mosses, black yet beautiful, with your peat-trenches over-shadowed by the heather-blossoms that scented the wilderness afar — where the little maiden, sent from the shieling on errands to town or village in the country below, seemed, as we met her in the sunshine, to rise up before us for our delight, like a fairy from the desert bloom Thou loch, remote in thy treeless solitude, 62 CHEISTOPHEE NORTH. and with nought reflected in thy many-springed waters but those low pastoral hills of excessive green, and the white-barred blue of heaven — no creature on its shores but our own selves, keenly angling in the breezes, or lying in the shaded sunshine, with some book of old ballads, or strain of some Immortal yet alive on earth — one and all bear witness to our undying affection, that silently now feeds on grief I " The blending of these recollections with scenes of nature is not conducive to clearness or vividness ; but it does increase one's interest, and thereby spur on the imagination to picture the scene for itself. He seldom describes any place or object without men- tioning the associated feelings; that is, he is seldom what is called purely descriptive : — "A pensive shade has fallen across May-day." " A Sabbath stillness is in the air." "On such days suicides rush to judgment." " It is a cloudy but not a stormy day." (1) These associated feelings and circumstances add to the charm, but not to the vividness of his descriptions. His success in pictorial art is dependent upon other characteristics. In analyzing his descriptions to discover these characteristics we are obliged to confront the fact that he violates the chief rule; — to include with the enumeration of the parts a comprehensive statement, or general plan of the whole. He makes up for this lack of an introductory, comprehensive statement, by the suggestiveness of his pictures. He dashes on bright bits of color, and makes minor trifles conspicuous : " the blue eye of a violet looking up from the ground," " the sheep-nibbled grass, smooth as silk," "the far-off song of the cushat," or " a child shaking his sunny curls iu EXTERNAL NATURE. 63 glee." In a few expressive words such details are men- tioned ; and from these the reader imagines the scene for himself. Therefore picturesqueness is the first ele- ment of his pictorial success. (2) The second element is " Celtic Magic," as de- scribed by Matthew Arnold. It is the power to infuse into nature a life, mystic and supernatural. Wilson produces this effect when he speaks of a " knoll, whis- pering and quivering through the twilight with a few birches whose stems glitter like silver pillars in the shade." (3) Wilson understands the art of individualizing his descriptions. He is careful to designate the season of the year, and often the time of day, when any particu- lar scene was witnessed. A fine example of his power in individualizing pictures is the Shepherd's desci-iption of Noon Hour, in the valleys of Scotland. (4) The peculiarly delicate words he uses in descrip- tion we have already noted in speaking of his Vocabu- lary. His exquisite exactness in the adaptation of words to objects atones for all irregularity and careless- ness in his mode of procedure. (5) We have said that Wilson possesses no plan of description. He sometimes makes an exception by pro- ceeding, for a short period, according to the Traveller's point of view. We find several examples in his Re- marks on the Scenery of the Highlands, where he approaches the nearest to pure description. We qiiote one passage : — " The moor is crossed, and you prepare to scale the mountain in front, for you imagine the torrent by your side flows from a tarn in yonder cove, and forms that 64 CHRISTOPHER NORTH. series of waterfalls. You have been all along well pleased with the glen, and here at the head, though there is a want of cliffs of the highest class, you feel nevertheless that it has a character of grandeur. Looking westward, you are astounded to see them rang- ing away on either side of another reach of the glen, terrific in their height, but in their formation beautiful, for like the walls .of some vast temple they stand, roofed with sky. Yet they are but as a portal or gateway of the glen. For entering in with awe, that deepens, as you advance, almost into dread, you behold, beyond, moun- tains that carry their cliffs up into the clouds, seamed with chasms, and hollowed out into coves, where night dwells visibly by the side of day ; and still the glen seems winding on beneath a purple light, that almost looks like gloom." Human Kature. — On account of Wilson's warm hu- man sympathies, we expect to find in his writings many descriptions of human feelings. Such there are, and we notice in them this characteristic. He deals with ex- ternal appearances and visible results of certain " feel- ings. Like De Quincey, he arrives at motives by close inspection of every expression of the face and every action. He thus depicts the resigned grief of a mourn- ing family ^ — " Another hour of trial passed, and the child was still swimming for its life. The very dogS' knew there was gri§f in the house, and lay without stirring, as if hiding themselves, below the long table at the window. One sister sat with an unfinished gown on her knees, that she had been sewing for the dear child, and still continued at the hopeless work, she scarcely knew why : and often HUMAN NATURE. 65 often, putting up her hand to wipe away a tear. ' What is that?' said the old man to his eldest daughter: 'What is that you are laying on the shelf?' She could scarcely reply that it was a ribbon and an ivory comb that she had brought for little Margaret, against the night of the dancing-school ball. And at these words the father could not restrain a long, deep, and bitter groan; at which the boy, nearest in age to his dying sister, looked up weeping in his face; and, letting the tattered book of old ballads, which he had been poring on, fall out of his hands, he rose from his seat, and, going into his father's bosom, kissed him, and asked God to bless him ; for the holy heart of the boy was moved within him ; and the old man, as he embraced him, felt that, in his innocence and simplicitj'-, he was indeed a comforter." This is a typical example of the great stress Wilson placed upon actions as expressive and indicative of the feelings. Although Wilson was a philosopher, there is very little of metaphysical analysis in his descriptions of hu- man feelings. Neither does he trace the gradual devel- opment of traits of character. He can give a wonder- fully true and vivid account of some manifestation of anger or of jealousy ; but he never attempts to trace the . birth of these passions in others of less ugliness, and their gradual development into worse passions. His power lies in the individualization of his descriptions, in his vivid pictures of certain feelings in play rather than in an abstract treatment of these. He greatly adds to the force of his descriptions by his original and strik- ing figures of speech. In the delineation of character he describes by means of outward signs : — " You see at once that the man 66 CHEISTOPHBE NORTH. who lives here, instead of being sick of the world, is attached to all elegant socialities and amities ; that he uses silver cups instead of maple bowls, shows his scallop-shell among other curiosities in his cabinet, and will treat the passing pilgrim with pure water from the spring, if he insists upon that beverage, but will first offer him a glass of the yellow cowslip-wine, the cooling claret, or the sparkling champagne." He seldom gives any comprehensive statement of the character of his heroes, but leaves the reader to build it up for himself out of the narration of his actions. He seldom indulges in speculation or minute analysis when setting before us the characters of celebrated men. He dwells on their most familiar characteristics, and to bring these out forcibly uses all his literary skill in telling figures of speech, and in daring hyperbole. NAEEATIVE. Wilson wrote no sustained historical work. The nearest approach to true narrative, that is, to a sys- tematic account of events, is the biographical portion of his essay on Burns. After extricating this from the critical analysis, we find even then no remarkable display of methodical skill in narration. He obeys the first principle of narration by following the order of events from the childhood of Burns to his death. At the same time he is wise in his selection of the most im- portant and significant of these events, and clear and penetrating in his philosophical explanations of their relations to Burns' character and genius. Another notable characteristic is his frequent interspersion of NARRATIVE. 67 concise summaries. In his recital he stops for a mo- ment, and to make sure that the reader is ready to con- tinue with him, he condenses into a few words all the preceding details, then makes a fresh beginning. He thus summarizes Burns' childhood : — " His childhood, then, was a happy one, secured from all evil influences and open to all good, in the guardianship of religious parental lore." His return to Mossgiel is introduced with these words : — " Burns has now got liberated, for ever, from stately 'Edinburgh throned on crags,' the favoured abode of philosophy and fashion, law and liter- ature, reason and refinement, and has returned again into his own natural condition, neither essentially the better nor the worse of his city life ; the same man he was when 'the poetic genius of his country found him at_ the plough and threw her inspiring mantle over him.' " His references to past events are frequent when en- deavoring to bring out forcibly some particular point: — "And here we ask you who maybe reading these pages to pause for a little, and consider with yourselves, what up to this time Burns had done to justify the con- demnatory judgments that have been passed on his character as a man by so many admirers of his genius as a poet?" These are the only laws of narrative obeyed in this biography. Its end of instruction and interest is at- tained otherwise, through picturesque effects, touch- ing scenes, and philosophical comments. We have no means by which to discover whether Wilson was capa- ble of writing a scientific history ; for in a biography the writer does not meet with the same necessity of systematizing. There are not so many contemporaneous 68 CHRISTOPHER NORTH. events to relate, nor such complexity in any particular subject. Wilson's narration of simple tales possesses a peculiar charm due to its easy and graceful style. His essays are composed mainly of descriptions and narrations, and he has written a whole volume of Scotch stories. These imaginative tales do not make instructive studies in the science of narrative excepting as models of delicate beauty and simplicity. There is no intricacy of plot requiring skilful manipulation of many different inci- dents. There is but one simple theme in each story, one absorbing event, sometimes intensely thrilling fod again pathetic or humorous. The only concurring streams of events that he has to follow are the opera- tions of nature and the actions of human beings, and, although the due subordination of the one to the other would seem extremely simple, Wilson often goes astray by giving too great prominence to the one or the other in the inappropriate place. The characters of his stories are few, and therefore only such as play important parts. The emotions that direct their actions are natural and familiar. Since interest in Wilson's narratives is not sustained by a systematic ordering of important events, or by a skilful dramatic plotting, we are convinced that he owes his power as a narrator to his felicities of style. These are eloquence, wit, pathos, conversational ease, metaphorical and musical language. EXPOSITION. Wilson could scarcely be called a successful exposi- tor. We should not consult him for information on any particular subject, unless it were to find a clear EXPOSITION. 69 criticism • of some author. The graces of his style, which we have already studied, are such as to lead him away from exposition into other fields. His glittering brilliancy of language and of thought, together with his imaginative speculations, detract from the solid worth of all his philosophical papers. By exposition we mean a systematic treatment of a certain subject with the primary aim of instructing. Of this we find but few examples in Wilson, although we do meet with wise and beautiful thoughts and opin- ions strewn through his essays, and presented in fasci- nating forms. He gives us instruction in Natural History in Christopher in his Aviary. His expositor}' essays are confined entirely to critical analyses of authors. Not all of his critical essays would come under this head, for some are merely rambling disserta- tions. In others, however, his diction is plain, and his mode of treatment direct and simple. His essay on Burns is his best example of exposition. In it he seems not to appreciate the benefit of frequent iteration in making a subject clear. The only way in which he repeats is by summaries. In general he passes from one statement to another, trusting to the simplicity and clearness of each statement without repe- tition. In this particular he resembles De Quincey. In like manner he seldom resorts to the statement of the counter-proposition for the sake of emphasis. His nearest approach to this is shown in the following sentence : — " So far from detracting from the originality of his lyrics, this impulse to composition greatly increased it, while it gave to them a more touching character than 70 CHRISTOPHER NORTH. perhaps ever could have belonged to them, had they not breathed at all of antiquity.*' In comparison with his usual flowery language there seems a poverty of figures of speech in these expository essays. But a close examination proves that they are frequent, but more modest than his customary figures, and in this respect appropriate to serious subjects. They are apt, concise, and elucidatory. The new charm which he can impart to an old sub- ject is made evident in the Nodes. These dialogues, however, cannot be called works of exposition, because they touch upon so many unallied themes at random, and treat none exhaustively. Whatever instruction the reader gains clings to him, without any effort of his own, by reason of its novelty, its graceful beauty or sympathetic association. It is in this pleasant way that Wilson best performs his part of expounding and teaching. PEESXJASION. Wilson displays his oratorical powers in numerous passages. Indeed, all his essays are persuasive in that they fill us imperceptibly, by their own beautj' and sincerity, with love and reverence for the beautiful and good. Instead of a disquisition on obedience to conscience and its good results, we find a passage conveying this sentiment : — " But a still, small voice is heard within my heart — the voice of conscience — and its whispers shall be heard when all the waters of the earth are frozen into nothing, and earth itself shrivelled up like a scroll." PERSUASION. 71 In the two essays On the Punishment of Death and The Education of the People he seeks to persuade by logical reasoning. He moves the understanding by a clear statement of facts and by a reasonable deduction of results from known causes. There are no highly colored pictures nor exaggerated speech such as are usually characteristic of Wilson. His art of persuasion, however, is most irresistible in its power w-he'n addressed to the feelings. The causes of his success are : — (1) Intense Absorption in the Subject. Enthusiasm calls forth enthusiasm. He seeks to persuade only in matters that come near to his heart ; as in the Lights and Shadows of Scottish Life and in many essays where he preaches loyalty to the Scottish Highlanders. (2) Intense Sympathy. This lies at the foundation of all his literary success. (3) Felicities of Style. The most effective in persua- sion are copiousness and vividness of illustration. (4) Indirect Methods of Persuasion. He never exhibits his intention to persuade, but wins us over to his opinions through some charming narrative or choice description. As a political leader his influence was transient. The reasons for this are the one-sided and prejudiced nature of his arguments and his free use of sarcasm and invective. f rcss of Igerfnitk & Smt% |!ostort. Cornell University Library PR 5838.M16 John Wilson's prose style; an undergradua 3 1924 013 572 965