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INSPECTORS OF SCKOOl « rOURTH IMPRESSION LONDON CONSTABLE & COMPANY LTD. 1919 ^ saos^^ PREFACE Some apology seems to be needed for the publication of these lectures. They were prepared for my own pupils, and are here printed, except for a few slight changes, as they were delivered. They formed part of a long series of lectures, accompanied and, I trust, illustrated, corrected, or re-enforced by observation and practice in schools — a. series intended to direct the attention of students, presently to become teachers, to some of the main problems with which they wiU have to deal. It may be said with truth that the best way to learn to teach is to try, to teach, and that the best way to train students for teaching is to give them oppor- tunities for practice. Arid practice has in fact always formed a large patf of the " training," whether that process has been regarded as limited by student-days, or more happily conceived as extending through life. But though practice yields much, it yields less than all that is needed. I do not speak now of studies of high value for a teacher, arid necessary indeed if he is to enter into his full inheritance of knowledge and of power — studies, for example, in the history of Education, or in Ethics, or Psychology. In addition to practice and concurrently with it the student must get advice. He has to do certain definite things — he has to teach, as we say, certain subjects ; and he asks, not unnaturally, how he is to do them: he asks how this and that 6 PREFACE subject is to be taught; he asks, in a word, for a method. Is it possible to show him what he wants, to give him a plain answer to his plain question? There are some men and women who can teach some things well, and know it; there are others, distrustful of themselves, who can point here and there to those who achieve what is desired. Is it right, in the former case, to say, "Do what I do "; or in the second, " Do what you see this or that successful teacher doing "?> 1 believe that it is not right to make this reply. From example much may be learnt; from an analysis of the procedure of skilled practitioners, and the attempt to systematise what appears to be the prin- ciples which guide them, much may be learnt. But if this is all, all is in vain. The springs of action must be sought and discovered within each person for himself. I say that I try to direct the attention of students to some of the problems of their profession. Let a student enquire, not of others, but of himself what these " subjects " which he purposes to teach really are. When he makes that enquiry he will find that any subject which he may hope to teach is not some- thing external to himself, but an activity in which he may be himself engaged, and that he cannot truly begin to teach it until he is actually engaged in it. This discovery at once limits the number of " subjects " which he can decently attempt, and gives a previously unsuspected range and depth to the remainder. This remainder will include everything which is vital; the " subjects " which fall within it will prove themselves aspects of character, modes of intelligence, essential parts of life. PREFACE 7 The student who asks himself, " What is this that I am doing?" will go on to enquire, " Why am I doing it?" and then " How am I doing it?" The third question cannot be usefully asked till some sort of answer has been given to the two first, and no complete answer will ever be given to it. Let him learn what he can from others, but let him be sure that there is no method for him but his own, fashioned for his own needs, with the help of example and experience and of tested skill, yet not without the aid of Fortune, Nature, God — ^by whatever name he knows the strange force that carries him beyond the scope of his measured powers, making him other than his exemplars and greater than himself. My thanks are due to Mr. D. J. Sloss for reading the lectures, and making many useful criticisms. E. T. CAMFAGNAC. Liverpool, April, 1 910 LECTURES ON THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION LECTURES ON COMPOSITION To give you must have: to teach you must know. But if the gift is worth offering or receiving the giver strengthens his hold upon what he has in the act of imparting it. Not only, so, but he necessarily receives something new and fresh' as an addition to what he had though quite akin to it. For indeed it is impossible to give anything which the receiver does not already in some measiu-e possess. He woiild be unable to accept it if this were not so. You may of course give a penny to a man who has no penny, or boots to a barefoot traveller; but if the gift is of a more subtle and spiritual kind, the transaction which takes place is of a different order. You caimot give kindness or sympathy or imderstanding to a person whb has none of these, any more than you can give anger or hostility to a person who is incapable of anger or could not possibly become an enemy. We have to make a distinction between the things of whidi we may be regarded as the legal owners and those other things which we hold by a more essential claim — ^between formal and effective ownership. We aflfectively possess what we have acquired under stress 10 LECTURES ON of necessity in the fulfilipent of some natural desire, and have made vitally our own by ase; and the use which we make of such things is rendered precise and characteristic because it is directed and governed by emotion. In other words, we possess the things which we not simply hold against the world, but care for and value and enrich by our affections. Legally and formally we are the possessors of many other things which we acquired by accident or caprice; which we once wanted or thought we wanted, but now want no more. So we possess furniture which we put away in lumber-rooms, clothes which we do not wear, books which we do not read. It is in quite a different sense that we regard ourselves as possessing the furniture which we like to see about us, the garments we are pleased to wear, the books which we read again and again. A like distinction may be made between formal and effective knowledge. Most people have consider- able stores, if not of useless knowledge, at any rate of unused knowledge, information which they have picked up casually here and ithere, which remains unrelated to the main and ruling interests and occupations of their lives. Sometimes such information may be put con- veniently away, but often it is a real hindrance to the fruitful and productive use of other sorts of information which bear a real part in the business and affairs of life. Effective knowledge is what a man has got because he needed it, and has made his own by use, and its use is directed by his emotions. Formal know- ledge may be bought and sold; it may, if we are careless enough to misuse our words, be said to be given away; but effective knowledge alone can be truly communicated from mind to mind. Effective knowledge is the proper food of a nattiral appetite, and because natural, common. It is the result of an activity of which we are capable as human beings, and it is appropriate not only to ourselves but to those who share our nature. A discovery early made by an intelligent teacher is that the subject which he is THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION ii hoping to teach is already in some measure in the possession of his pupils. It is often a disconcerting discovery, but experience and reflection show that this is a necessary condition without which teaching and learning would be impossible. COMPOSITION Our first duty as teachers is, I think, to take our- selves, and our pupils not less, for human beings, and to consider what we and they need for the proper maintenance and development of our life, and for ful- filling the relations which we have to bear towards one another in the world. If we set out from this we are more likely than if we start from any more professional standpoint to arrive at a just view of our real needs, of the things which we really require for our equipment in the world, and to arrive at them in the proper order. We may consider the question of composition in this way, and consider it in the first place in regard to ourselves rather than in regard to children whom we may have presently to teach. Let us call composition the expression in words of whai we have in our minds — in words written or spoken ; and include both the process of composing and the finished result of composing — composition as a thing achieved. We ought then to ask ourselves. Why do we seek an expression in words for what we have in our minds? There are many reasons, but they may all be grouped 12 LECTURES ON in three classes, which for the moment we may dis- tinguish from each other, though, as we shall see, the barriers between them often break down. Our first object is to convey at once to other people something which we desire to give them or to share with them. For example, we give a messenger our instructions; he is to take our letter to a certain place; we give orders to the cook or to the gardener. In such cases we are giving to other people something which we have in our mind and which we desire should be in their minds. Or, again, we are pleased with the freshness of an autumn morning, or relieved at the brief cessation of the rain and the cold wind, or annoyed at the loss of a pet rabbit, and we tell a friend of our pleasure, our relief, or our annoyance. We are sharing with him something that we have in our mind — a. feeling, a piece of observation. Such a feeling or observation is the possession of the moment, which we hand on at once — the small change of conversation. But we deal often in more important and valuable things, and we seek expression, in the second' place, in order to record some information, or some emotion in a permanent form, whether for our own tise or for the use of other people. Quite simple examples of this will serve: we write down something that we want to remember, some notable event of the day, or of the year; we keep accoimts to loiow what we have done with our money, and to find out after a period has passed how we stand with the banker; or, whtere we travel beyond our own private and personal concerns, we keep records of events, we have minutes of meetings, because we do not trust to our memory or jto the memory of other members of a committee — but feel the need of a statement in lasting! and trustworthy form, to be preserved, of what has taken place. To advance from that to still more important affairs, history will come under this head. The passage of time removes many monuments of what men have done, or robs us of the meaning, of them even when they stand in some THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 13 oUtwaxd and tangible shape, and so again, we like to have a record or an explanation in words of what these things are. Or once more, we want a record or a permanent memorial of some feeling or emotion. We have felt something with more than ordinary keenness and vividness. So people have often kept journals and notes of their holidays, specially of their travels — an Easter in the Lakes, a visit to Switzerland^ — such things as these, which stir us deeply at the time, we probably, all, especially in youth, like to record, not merely with the detailed observation of one who is looking out with the eye of a naturalist or a scientist upon the scenes which' are before him, but as one who looks inward and makes a conscious note of his feelings, remarking how these outward things impress him. We read such memorials of our own past with pleasure or amusement, or sometimes with pain. That is the second reason which I should suggest for expression. The third reason is more difficult to describe. We all have at times a desire for expression for its own sake; a desire which exercises a specially strong in- fluence on ;js when we are imder the sway of some very powerful emotion. We may distingooish this from the other two objects, the object of conveying informa- tion and the object of recording knowledge or feeling, because here we have expression sought, not for any ulterior object, but because expression in itself is desirable to the person who seeks it. This kind of desire for expression is most easily seen — I will not say that it is most powerful — in children, because, as we know very, well, when they are happy, or when they are sad, they express themselves quite spontaneously and quickly, not merely, and not only, and sometimes not at all, with the desire of conveying information or recording an impression ; their speech — or shall we say, their utterance, for often it is no more than a shout or a cry — ^is itself an end, is itself the object of their desire. It is not their purpose to tell anybody any- 14 LECTURERS ON thing; they, are driven irresistibly to utterance, and their expression is as much desired' as the emotion which caused it was natural arid strong. Now let lis look into those three objects of speech again. For the first, what we need is clearness. We must make ourselves intelligible. It is no use to give a boy a message unless we make him understand quite clearly what he has to do, or where he has to go. For the second, that is to say for recording informa- tion, or for giving, a permanent form to some emotion, what we need is accuracy. If we are to preserve information we must record the whole of it, we must set it down justly, in right propprtion, without undue emphasis here or there, almost witlwut colour; and still more if, dealing with a more delicate matter, we are to record in permanent form an emotion, we must be qiiite scrupulously faithful, severely true. But to say this, is at once to indicate one of the points at which our divisions merge into one another. To be clear in the simplest statement which we make to another person, we must first be quite clear in our own minds as to what it is that we desire to convey to him, our facts must be well grasped!— we must, in fact, be accurate. And on the other hand, accuracy, if it stands for a complete, but colourless statement of the facts of a case, is not clear. There can be no light iii human utterance, if there is no warmth, no heat of pwsonal feeling to weld and fuse into a single idea the details, the elements of experience. For the third, where expression seeks no other obj.ect than itself, we need a complete sincerity governed by a proper reserve. Let us see what is meant by that. A strong emotion of love, or fear, or hate, or admira- tion—whatever it may be— takes different expressions in different natures. In some, expression is so quick and so complete that the emotion as it were blows itself away in an outburst of words; it is quickly felt, it is THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 15 qtiickly expressed, and it is quickly gone. In others, on the contrary, expression, though it is desired, and felt to be necessary, is won with difficulty, sometimes even with pain ; it is not complete ; it is laborious ; and the very fact that it is not complete may ha,ve the result of warping, or embittering, or in some other way spoiling this emotion, whatever it may have been. We are familiar with the contrast between people who, so to speak, give their hearts away at once and people who can never give themselves away. There are, of cotorse, many varieties and stages between those two extremes. What we want to find, and what we are sometimes happy enough to find, is a nature where expression is sincere, but where the frankness of utterance is temj)ered and modified by the self-restraint of simple dignity. We like people — to put it in other words and in a more concrete form — we like people to be ready to make friends, but we do not want them to be too ready: we like to know about their concerns; we do not want to know everything. The charm of conversation, and indeed of the most intimate friendship, lies very largely in the conscious- ness of the fact that behind what is given in words or in deeds there is infinitely more which is held in reserve. We know that though we may go far with a friend there are some regions of his mind and his heart upon which he would have none enter, and which we do not wish to ejq^ore. If in speaking or in writing we are putting out into the world for other minds to use or to reject, to accept or to throw away, what is in our minds, obviously we are making some sort of a self-revelation, and it should be made with a certain wholesome shyness, a certain vigorous modesty. Now, let us look more closely still at this noatter. I suppose that one of the most striking ways in which we differ from what we call the lower animals is that we are much more self-conscious than they. Your cat can walk across your room, and completely ignore you and your friends who are sitting there. She is intent i6 LECTURES ON upon her own- affairs ; , and she pursues thetti — ^rapidly chasing a reel with playful miu-der in her eye, or washing her face with leisurely fastidious care, or re- treating to her own Nirvana to gaze in passionless contemplation upon nothing. She pursues her ends without reference to you, forgetful of your existence or indifferent to it. A dog, of course, is much more aware of you; he is a much more self-conscious creature; so again is a horse; but these too can forget us. But a cow pursues her avocations, we may surmise, without regard for us ; the birds care very little for us, or care only to avoid us: and though no doubt beasts and birds are sensitive to the criticisms of their fellows, and have deep sympathy with them, they achieve a detachment from convention, they stand at times in a splendid isolation, which is rare among men. They are egotists sans pear et sans reproche. But we care extraordinarily for each other. We are self-conscious, too, in another sense which the word more justly bears. We are not only aware of each other, but we are, some- times painfully, aware of ourselves. We are actors be- fore a double audience, the audience which is in front, so to speak, of the stage, and the audience which is on the stage and seated indeed in the very, heart and brain of the actors. So that even in thfe simplest form of expres- sion, the giving of a message, to take the example used just now, or the most businesslike kind of expression, the recording of minutes ; still more, of course, and pre- eminently where we are pouring out into a spontaneous and necessary expression, some powerfxd feeling of our hearts, we care much, very, much; not only for what we say, but for the manner in which' we say it. In speech not less than in other forms of self-expression, we quickly become aware of the need of style. Almost we might say that style is conscious beauty, sought and achieved in obedience to conscious want. Almost, but not quite; for most persons, we may imagine, most children cer- tainly, discover the fact of style before they discover the need of it. They find that they have actually done a THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 17 thing so that the doing of it has given them a particular and recognisable pleasnrCj quite distinct from that of any result which follows the doing. And this pleasure, exquisite and elusive, is sought (how often vainly I ) and sought again. But when the form of expression has become valuable in itself, there is danger on one side and advantage on the other. There is danger, on the one hand, of affectation. We see plenty of instances of that; of people who are so much concerned about the figure they make that they hardly move at all; so much concerned about their form that their form is often empty. And, on the other hand, the side of advantage, there is this; there is the deepening and clarifying of the emotion which is felt, and the illuminating and the strengthening of the information which we want to record. In plain words: When you feel, you speak ; and when you speak, you come to feel more clearly. Let us take an image which may help us — as old an image as could well be chosen — ^the image of style as the dress of thougbt. Style presumes thought just as clothes presume a body. It is a disappointment, when we have expected a man, to find a mere suit, moving but otherwise not calling to oiur mind anything human. It is disappointing to hear words which decoy and deceive us by a pleasant sound, but in which, when we listen more attentively, we discover no meaning. Our image is not only, venerable, but sturdy, and we may make more use of it. Dress is at the same time the mark or the sign of understanding and of sympathy, and also (and not less) the proof of division or individuality. We dress for our equals, or for those who in the main are like ourselves. A man can talk to his dog, with equal comfort to himself and to the dog, whatever he is wear- ing, at any hour of the day. or night ; he could talk, once more — supposing he had the language, and they were good enough to refrain for a moment from eating him — to a group of cannibals in any dress or none ; but when he is talking to people like himself, he wears clothes like 1 8 LECTURES ON theirs, or, at least, in the main like tlieirs, because they expect so much of him and understand him best so ; it is a kind of uniform, a general imiform, which means that he belongs to a particular country; it means even more, that he belongs to a particular, let us say the northern part of it ; and, more still, that he belongs to a particular class or group in society; he may be a tinker, a tailor, a soldier, a sailor — ^he may, be what is called a gentleman, or what is called a working-man. His clothes bewray him. And the clothes which we and our friends wear are all fashioned in deference to these general conditions. Happily, we do not wear each other's clothes, but our own, to fit us, and of a colour which for various reasons, and rightly or wrongly, we think suitable and appropriate to ourselves. Yet al- ways in the choice of what in shape and in colour is suitable to ourselves, we are restrained, and guided by what other people do and what other people expect of us. Now, to hit the mean between the right tribute to what others expect of us, and the proper obedience to our own character and idiosyncrasy is a difficult thing, and is indeed a high art. Some people n^ster it; they are well dressed, they are dressed distinctively, their dress is characteristic ; , and yet they are in the fashion ; not beyond it, nor behind it;, they are like other people at the same moment that they are completely and splendidly themselves. Now, that is true of this other kind of dress, the dress of thought. Here again we dress for our class; we do not throw our thoughts naked upon the world, or half clothed, but prepare them to meet company, to engage in the commerce and traffic of the world, by clothing them suitably. And this clothing implies a certain measure, at any rate, of understanding and of sympathy —the common form of sentence, of paragraph, of page; or of speech, is one which is governed in part and prim- arily, no doubt, by the general conditions under which: the human mind does its work — it is governed also by the conventions of the particular country ajid people and THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 19 class to which we belong, and which we as speakers or as writers are addressing. Yet it mtist be a form worn by ourselves, shaped to our service, coloured by our taste. We must be accurate and faithful in what we say. We must be imderstood by our fellows, we must be clear to them. Correctness and clearness are essential, and fundamental. These are necessary, but no man is content with what is necessary. Every man seeks something in addition; and in speech or writing, beyond and above the necessary qualities, there is beauty. Style, we may now say, is the fair offspring of sympathy and individuality — of generous under- standing and proper egoism. And style is beauty. It was these three qualities which Quintilian, that vigorous but temperate critic, claimed for the orator: Correct- ness, clearness, and elegance— eicgscncc last, because it is worthless, and indeed not to be had, where the other two qualities are absent. How near of kin elegance in his judgment is to correctness and clearness we may remind ourselves, by naming (and we here need but name) the considerations by which he would have us guided in our pursuit of it. We must be guided, he tells us, in the first place, by reason, by the logic of thought; in the second place by tradition, the custom of great writers ; next, if we desired it — and he felt that we should (writing for Romans, he here comes close home to English people) — ^by a use, judicious and sparing, of the language, of the words, of ancient writers, which have a flavour of their own, like that of old wine; those who have tasted it do not immediately desire what is new; and then coming to the most practical consideration of all, he says that thte beginner should study and adopt the habit of what he called the best people. Who are the " best people "? He does not look for such a question. What is their " habit " in words? He does not define it; he reckons upon our sensitiveness. He appeals to fashion, and enjoins a liberal servitude to il-s power — ^the appropriation, under the strong urgency of personal feeling, in the light of 20 LECTURES ON genuine experience, of a mode current and common, yet individual and oiu- own. No textbook will give us rules for this. To acquire this sense of fashion, to win this habit of the best people, we are, of course, to familiarise otu-selves with wha,t they, do both in speech and in writing. II The speech of children, we shall agree, springs from the same main causes as our own. Our own speech, as we saw, comes from a desire to convey something from our own mind to other minds, whether in the form of some simple command or statement, or in something more elaborate: it may be a record of past events, or an expression of some feeling; or finally, expression may be artistic, that is to say, it may seek no other object than itself, content in its own perfection. That would seem to be the highest achievement of human utterance. Yet when we come to consider the speech of children, we are bound to put this expression for the sake of expression first of all. It is remarkable that though artistic speech is speech at its highest de- velopment, yet speech at its first beginnings is, in its selfless self-seeking and self-realisation, artistic too. Of a little child, an infant, it is sometimes paradoxi- cally said that when he cries or shouts, the truth is not so much that he cries because he is imhappy, or shouts because he is happy, as that he is happy because he shouts, and he is in pain because he cries. At any rate, it is a nice question whether the expression or the thing expressed comes first in such simple instances as that. The fact is that the child is as yet unconscious of himself, he has not yet developed what we call self- consciousness. He is at one moment a little imiverse THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 21 of pain; at another moment he is a little imiverse of happiness or amusement: he and his feelings are one thing. He has not yet learnt to say, / have a pain, or, / feel a himger, or, / am this, that, or the other — ^he has not yet learnt to say that or to think that; he is what he feels, and what he feels he is. Accordingly, as at that stage his needs and appetites are of the simplest and largest kind; so his utterance is elementary and comprehensive, and for those at any rate who cire attached to him, either by affection or by natural ties of blood, his expression even if inarticulate, is com- pletely intelli^ble — ^they know exactly what he needs. But, presently, the child becomes aware of himself; and as he becomes aware of himself — ^it is part of the same process — he becomes aware of the world; he dis- tinguishes between the world and himself, between me and not me, and as he does that he comes to analyse both — himself and the world — ^and finds in each an infinite variety. This is the stage at which he learns to say, I am this or that, I have, or, I want, or, I feel; he distinguishes between the self, which is per- manent, and the wants, or desires, or sensations, which are but passing aspects of this unchanging self; and similarly as he looks out upon the world he recog- nises no longer a simple whole, but a manifold thing, and witnesses the changing aspects of this world, from which he distinguishes himself, and against which he places himself. Now, we may say of speech, that like other activities of human natvire it may be regarded as the expression of a need or of an appetite, or of an impulse. And, more than that, we may say, that the expression of a need is the proof of capacity or power. If you enquire of a child why he did this or that — why he broke the vase on the table, why he licked the paint off his sister's doll, why he did anything you will, good or bad — in the last resort he will tell you that he did it because he " wanted to." He felt, as we may say for him, that the action was at that moment the supreme and necessary 22 LECTURES ON expression of himself. He could throw himself into it at the time when he did it. We do not act in any, way imless we want to act. There must be some want (or desire or purpose) to make us act at all. Now, want is only another name for a need. How does a need spring up? We must ask ourselves what we mean by a " need." What is it " to need "? The word is used in two senses, one of which is appropriate to living organisms, while the other is not. An instance or two may malce this clear: my supply of coal is exhausted, I need more coal; my coal- cellar is emptyr^it needs refilling. " Old Mother Hubbard Went to the cupboard To fetch her poor dog a bone. When she got there The cupboard was bare, And so the poor dog had none." No one will deny a connection between the emptiness of my cellar and my need of coal ; between the bareness of the cupboard and the unhappy state of the dog. But there is also a distinction for us to make. I need fresh coal, because I have used up what I had, and must have more to cook my food and warm my house — the cellar needs coal, merely because it is empty. My need is positive and active ; the cellar is merely deficient. Again, my need is definite and special; it is coal that I want, and I should not be satisfied by a gift of a ton of potatoes, with which the cellar might quite well be filled. So with the dog, if, as we may assume, his mistress rightly divined his condition. It was a bone that he needed — not a book or a bicycle or even a cranberry tart ; and he needed a bone because he had used up the food he had previously received, and must have more to keep himself living. The cupboard was bare; it pre- sented a naked vacuity to the well-meaning old lady. The living organism needs actively, discriminatingly, and for a purpose — ^the inanimate thing needs passively, THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 23 without selection, and for no purpose of its own. We are weary of silence, and we must speak ; we are weary of sitting still, and we must walk. But it is not oiu- silence wMch calls for speech, but our speechfulness (as we must call it) ; it is not our motionlessness which calls for movement but our pent-up capacity for move- ment. Whatever we do, whatever changes of activity we engage in, all is dictated by a power, a force which we feel in ourselves, calling for the appropriate action or expression. Thus there seems to be, so long as we live, a kind of seesaw or perpetual motion from one kind of activity to another, because each thing that we do is on the one hand the result of a force, and on the other generates or releases a new force which calls for some corresponding and balancing activity. And as life advances and we come to the full development of our powers, all through youth and early manhood or womanhood, and perhaps %vitli regard to some of our capacities even later on in life, the expression — to use the same words again — the expression of a need (which itself is the satisfying or obeying of a force within ourselves, which calls for an outlet) at the same moment uses up this force and exhausts it, and produces a new force which in its turn calls forth a new activity. Or to put that into still other words: you feel a need of some kind, that need prompts you to a certain sort of activity, and that activity as you piirsue it and complete it reveals to you a new need of which you had not been conscious before. I take the simple iexample of the succession of our meals during the day. We wake, and, if we are in satisfactory health, we want our breakfast; and then we go about oiu: daily tasks, walking to this place or that, talking, or listening to other people; and pre- sently, by one o'clock or earlier, a fresh need has arisen, which in its turn is satisfied; and after lunch we go on once more: and so on, through the day and the days. But the original need — ^we may go back and back upon it — ^the original breakfast-time need could not have 24 LECTURES ON arisen unless there were force, power, present in us ; it is because we have strength that we feel the necessity for more strength, because we have life thkt we feel the need for reinvigorating our life;, indeed, the measure of a man's vigour and capacity can very well be gauged by, the urgency and the variety of his needs; just as, on the other hand, as soon as you come to need nothing you are dead. A child's speech, for we can call it speech', even at that earliest stage which we are considering, is a mere cry or a shout, announcing that he, the whole of him, needs something which he is not able to define. Later, he learns a little more clearly to give names to the things that he wants. And here more obviously than before the older people who are about him can help him> because, though he distinguishes, he distinguishes very imperfectly. He will call things by their wrong names ; or he will use one general name for a great variety of things, and as you give him in answer to his request, not precisely what in words he asked for, but what you know or discover that he reaJly wanted, you do two things for him: you of course satisfy the particular need of the moment, but you also teach him definition, you also give him vocabulary,. He is dependent partly on himself and partly, on us for the simultaneous in- crease in his observation and his power of naming the things which he observes. We are in advance of him. We have been in the world longer, and know the names of things; he is learning the names of these things, fitting them with increasing, exactness to the things, which he thus learns to distinguish, and using them so far as they satisfy various needs of his nature. Accordingly, as you give him the things which he really needs in response to his imperfectly worded re- quests for them, you are not only teaching him some- thing about the world outside, but the world inside— himself; you are giving him, at the same time that you, offer him an analysis of the world, an analysis of his own feeling, of his own nature, of his own self. You THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 25 will often hear imperfect speakers say after perhaps a long paragraph, " That is not what I mean," or, " What I mean is " — ^we are often falling into that kind of phrase ;i and the reason for it is just' this, that though we think we have tried, and may have actually tried very, deliberately, to say exactly what was our intention, we are baffled in the attempt, for two reasons: either that we did not know when we set out precisely what was in our mind, we had not analysed ourselves : or else that we had not the appropriate words for casting this image of ourselves out upon the world and into the mind of the person to whom we were speaking. Now, children are in that position more often probably than we are; certainly they attempt speech more often than we do in such circumstances. But here a practical question of great importance for teachers arises: How far, we must ask ourselves in teaching our pupils, and particularly in helping them to write, must we wait upon them, and how far may we, being in advance of them, anticipate their needs. Of coiu^e we are in general in advance of them in ex- perience; and so our general knowledge of the world is likely to be more extensive and accurate than theirs ; though it is necessary to remember that our particular knowledge of the special part of the world in which they happen to be peculiarly, interested may not be either so large or so intimate as theirs. We may know, for example, a good deal more about England and the world than boys of eight or nine years of age. On the other hand, their knowledge is very much more intimate than ours is (or perhaps ever was) of air-guns, or slugs, or rabbits. If, therefore, we are to converse with them on these topics, which are more interesting to them than they are to us, though not, we may hope, devoid of interest for us; even though our general knowledge of things is (as we may presume) better, our special know- ledge of the subject in hand is not so good. Yet to be just to ourselves we must make a reservation: though we may not in recent years, or indeed ever. 26 LECTURES ON have observed so many details in the construction and use of the air-gun, or the stickiness of slugs, or the rapidity and cunning of rabbits, yet we have learned to generalise, we have a sounder logic ; we can think more clearly and reason more carefully than these youthful (Experts, who are full of information, but information often disorganised and xmrelated and incomplete, about their own special subjects. As we read children's compositions in school, we are constantly struck, not I think by any, want of colour and interest in what they are saying, but by their inability to think consecutively, to make a whole of the matter upon which they are engaged. Their observa- tions are made disjointedly, unconnectedly — attractively if lyou will, but yet not in such a way as to make one complete and permanent impression upon the mind of the reader or the listener;, and that because they do not correspond to a single complete and coherent im- pression in the mind of the children themselves. Here, then, the teacher can come, and must come, to help his pupil. He can take his points, gladly receiving them, offering his own, which on a particular theme may be of less moment even or less numerous than those of his pupils, but offering them in such a way that what he has to say and what his pupil has to say together may make a system, a whole, an order in the treatment of the subject. But all this, of course, presumes what I have hitherto taken for granted, but what must now be definitely claimed, that in what we call composition, the child must be talking, about some- thing which he has in his mind— and which' for some reason or other he desires to express out of his mind and to put into your mind or someone else's. There can never be any rational or any attractive speech unless the person who is speaking has something at least fairly clearly developed in his own mind, and also has the desire, the unfeigned and spon- taneous desire, to express this thing which he pos- sesses. This might seem to be an unneeded counsel" THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 27 yet perhaps because it is so obvious, it is what we often neglect or forget. Look at sdiool exercises in the light of this simple maxim, and you discover immediately a reason why many of them are so unsatisfactory both to the readers and to the writers. These children are writing, not because they want to write, but because their teachers want them to write ; and often enough they are writing about things of which they have no special knowledge, not even that rudimentary knowledge which! prompts a desire for more, but on subjects which their teachers like, or oftener still which the teachers think that the children ought to like. If so, can we wonder that the whole process becomes dullpJ Compositions, forced and imnatiu-al, upon subjects not specially attractive to the writers, are demanded by and created for critics who do not look in what they, will receive from their pupils for anything delightful, and read, not because they want to read, but because they must. All through this dreary business, there runs the British sense of duty. England expects not only every, man, but, it would appear, every school child as well, to do his duty. It is, of course, an admirable claim, as we feel in our patriotic moods; but there are other claims to be recognised and fulfilled with it. Unless the notion of duty in some perfectly real way, corresponds with the notion of happiness, duty is deadly and happiness an empty, word. And with regard to this work in school I am quite sure that the conception of duty has gone too far. What is necessary and right must not be too severely distinguished from what is desirable and pleasant. What is " necessary " and " right ".'' It is that which is demanded by a living, creature for the ex- pression, the fvurtherance, of its own life. What is " desirable " and " pleasant "? It is that for which a living creature has an appetite or taste. But can a child make the proper demand?. Can he justly divine his own need?. Is his appetite a sure guide? His demand may be inaccurate;: his taste may be mis-^ leading; both no doubt need sympathetic interpretation. 28 LfeCTURES ON To force is not to interpret; and far oftener than is commonly admitted what children like is apt to be what they actually need, what is good for them. If, then, a child is interested in something, we know very well that he hkes to talk about it. If he thinks that we also are really interested in it, his zest and delight in talking are doubled. If he thinks that we have a quite considerable knowledge of it, he will seek lis out and diligently exploit us for what we may, be worth. This relationship is possible between the teachers of young children and their pupils; and this relationship is essential, if good, which means natural, composition is to be had. The earliest stage is that at which a child can, with very little premeditation, but only wanting to be in- telligible to a sympathetic listener, talk about things which he cares for and has in his mind. As his interest increases — ^and this is the proper order — in the subject that holds him, his desire for exactitude in expression also increases. A vague expression, a rough description, represents, of course, a rough and only general or superficial observation; and as the child comes to know more minutely how his toys are made, how his pets play or eat or sleep, or how various things which have some charm for him, go on in the world — simultaneously with that growth of knowledge there comes to him the desire for a more complete and accurate record of those things which he observes. He will aim at such an expression, and he will seek help in discovering it; but the interest and the knowledge and the desire are the conditions of a more just and a more complete form of expression. I do not think that deliberate attempts should be made to cultivate style in writing, except in so far as a good style depends upon accuracy and truthfulness: accuracy in regard to the thing which is written about, and truthfulness as regards the person who is writing. By accuracy I mean a just and, so far as may be, a THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 29 complete accoimt of the matter in hand; and by truth- fulness I mean that this account must be coloured quite faithfully by the character, the personality, of the writer. For instance, children are sometimes told to write essays about rodents or mammals or what not — dreary subjects which are set with an inexplicable perversity, when it would have been so much easier for their teachers to ask them to write about rats or rabbits, or about cats or dogs. We read these essays, and find them planned out with a quite wonderful detail ; sometimes facts which we recognise, but had long since forgotten, are marshalled there with the precision of an auctioneer's inventory; but we know perfectly well that such an arrangement and such a completeness do not correspond to anything real in the child's own experience; and so, though this list of facts Tvith which we are constantly presented, may be accurate, it is not true — not true to the writer. There must be accuracy, and there must be truthfulness; and the sense and the desire for style will arise from the difficulty which the writer will feel in making a harmony and equipoise between accuracy to fact on the one hand, and fidelity to himself upon the other. About that something will be said later. At the moment we may be content to agree that progress is prompted by the sense of a need, and that the sense of a need is in itself the sign of power or capacity which had hitherto been used up to the point indicated by the development of this new need. Ill Supposing that we are agreed upon the qualities which we should think good in children's writing, or in children's speech, the question for us teachers is, how we are to get this good work done? We should be agreed, I suppose, that children's language should be simple and 30 LECTURES ON direct and clear, and suitable to their age. If it has all those qualities, it will be interesting to us who hear or read it, because it is interesting to them who use it ; but how are we to secure that these qualities shall appear in their work? Let me offer some suggestions. In the first place, I should say composition, whether oral or written, must be rarely, if ever, in school regarded as an end in itself. As a rule, when we speak, it is not for the sake of talking, but in order to say something for our own benefit, or for that of others. Even in those instances of which I reminded you earlier, where expres- sion is its own reward, and where in speaking or writing a man shows himself an artist ; even there, though it is not his business to carry some information or thought from one mind to another, yet, if the words are mere words we are dissatisfied ; and, indeed, that highest type of expression is so far from being an empty form, that it is an act of creation; the speaker, who is seeking for his own relief and delight an expression for some over- mastering thought, makes for himself and for others a new thing ; it is not enough even to say that he finds in his expression the embodiment of a thought, which was previously in his mind;, rather his thought springs into a fresh existence as the words come to his lips. The poet not only, records an emotion that he has felt ; he not only describes some scene upon which his eye has rested, but in the process of recording or describing he makes for the inward eye a new scene, and for the reflective mind a new thought or emotion. But children have not the experience to be able to vn-ite and to speak in this way, and using speech in a simpler fashion, they speak in order to say something to somebody. In that two things are implied; first, that there is something in their minds, of their own, to be said ; and second that there is an audience sympathetic, understanding and ready to listen. Now, the most natural audience for children is children. They like to speak to each other; and in many homes, probably, they get enough practice in speech by talking to one another, and THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 31 they may learn from one another at the nursery age more than from their elders. But it may be said that in the elementary schools, where, at any rate, in some instances — ^in some quarters of our great towns, for example — the children come from poor homes, with no pleasant nurseries ; or, in a sense, may be said to have no homes at all, they have not these opportunities of talking to one another. They talk indeed in the street, and I should be the last to undervalue the education of the street. No doubt they get dirty in the street — dirty in body, and perhaps soiled not less in mind — ^but they acquire a good deal of quickness and strength and independence there too ; and, seeing many things, discover the need and win the use of words. Still, even so, a noisy street is not the place for talk. You naist have a room for shelter, and a certain degree of quiet ; and these little children who lack quiet shelter elsewhere naturally desire to talk in school, where both are provided. The youngest teacher will have noticed that, already, in his first attempts at teaching and keeping order. Often the children want to talk when he wants silence, or when he may wish, perhaps, to talk himself. It is quite likely that what they are saying to each other is more interesting to them than what he has to say. Teachers are not always ready to see the pro- priety of this desire in children. In too few schools is easy opportunity provided for the children to talk to one another. There are debating societies, to be sure, in some schools for the older children, but these are often something formal, and often conducted out of school hours. For the most part in school freedom for conver- sation among themselves is not granted to the children. But why not? To grant this privilege would save the teachers in some ways a good deal of effort, the effort of iKing their voices, the effort of sometimes finding what to say ; it woidd not save them, of course, in intelligence and sympathy and power of control. In some rare and charming, instances one may find children in school talking to one another about matters that they have in 32 LECTURES ON hand— not necessarily about school matters— but things in the world they care for, and quite easily and naturally appealing from time to time, when they wish, to their teacher as an older person who knows more about these things and is sufficiently interested to listen and con- tribute to the talk. If we can get children in school to talk thus— keenly, politely, with proper submission to one another, in a tone of voice grateful, pleasant, lively^we have done far more than we can at that stage in any other way, for enlarging their vocabulary, for strengthening their hold upon it, for giving them versatility and quickness in the use of speech. If they talk for five minutes, they certainly use more words than they would if they wrote for twenty. But talking involves listening: they are learning reply and answer, the fitting in of thought with thought, the curtailing, the enlarging, the adjustment of sentence to sentence because of idea to idea, in a way, which written work hardly permits. With the youngest children in our schools it is perhaps easier to get this kind of speech upon a proper level than with those who are older. In most of our schools the youngest children are allowed (some- times they are made, and then the whole thing goes wrong) to play, and of course they talk because they want to explain to each other, and indeed to themselves, what is going forward. Now, take another point. I said if children are allowed rather than made to talk, the essential thing is gained. You see, naturally they want to talk. What we too often do, I think, is exactly what the photographer, let us say, or the too eager hostess does to us when we are grown up. We are pleasant people, but when the photo- grapher tells us to look pleasant he paralyses us at once: when the hostess begs us to talk she makes us dumb at once. We want to look pleasant, of course, while we have our photographs taken;, we want to talk— ^but when we are told to do these very things which we want to do,'the springs of action are checked and benumbed, and we cannot do either of them. THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 33 That is precisely what happens to children in schools. We tell them, " You must say these things," and that must spoils the whole matter for them. You never greet a man with " How are you?" and threaten him with a pistol, while you say, " You must tell me how you are." But that is what we do to children. We ask them what they are thinking about, how they are getting on, and they are under some sort of compulsion to tell us. Now, imagine a class in school where the teacher is sitting by as a sort of umpire or referee in case of need, and the children talking quite naturally and easily, just as you yourself would do at your own fireside. You see the teacher is listening — allowed to listen — in a sense, a privileged person admitted to their society. Exactly what happens in the case, let us say, of birds, or of cats, or dogs, or horses, happens in the case of children. If you sit very quietly and watch them while they are engaged in their own affairs, they let you after a time approach ; they will come half way to you, and perhaps really malce friends with you ; but if you go with a firm and resolute hand, and try to catch them, they have their various ways of either escaping or eluding you. The teacher who waits to find out what the children are talking about, and does not disturb them too much, will gradually be drawn into their society, and will be en- couraged to talk to them, because they will want to ask him what he thinks, what his views are about the things of which they are talking. Already, while he has been umpire they have been able to ask him for words, and he has been making clearer the ideas which they have been trying with imperfect success to express. Now, they want to hear him talk, and he will talk upon things which attract them, but with a larger experience, which means with a wider vocabulary, with a more penetrating insight, because he has not only known and seen more, but lias felt more deeply the significance of the things upon which they are, with him, engaged in their conversation. He exhibits in his own speech, not by way of example, but spontaneously and inevitably, just tliat quality which 34 LECTURES ON more than any, other it is the desire of the teacher to find and to encourage in his pupils' speech or writing — ^the note of personal feeling. Not statements of fact, but statements of fact tinged and coloured by a genuine and original emotion are wanted if speech and writing are to be alive. Indeed knowledge is not had or proved without emotion, and emotion witnessed. The pupils must know the things of which they are writing or speaking, because in some way or other they have put them to the test of use, and made them their own by feeling them. For what, when we come to think of it, is the difference between the hosts of attractive and useful things which we see set out in a shop, and a few similar things as we find them at home? In the shop they are put out for show, and not for use ; at home they have been soiled, or crumpled, or damaged by use, and yet by use they have received a meaning, and with meaning value and beauty. So in the speech of children we want, not a show but an array — or shall we even say, a disarray?, of things in use — damaged perhaps, certainly colotired, by use — but receiving from use a personal and special significance and charm. What I am describing is thie effect, the influence exercised upon children (who are all the. time unconscious of what is going on) by the speech of their age-fellows and their elders. They receive whlat they did not seek. It is worth remark that the teacher often gives what he had no thought of giving, a better thing than he imagined hie possessed. No doubt he must give thought and labomr to this question of the training of children's speech— he reahses pretty clearly that he has to sharpen and strengthen the instruments of thought and expression which his pupils must use all their lives long. He generally realises all this, and he does good work- good work, but not his best. For he will be making his deepest impression upon the minds of his pupils when he is not thinking of their minds alone, but using his own mind in an absorbed and delighted way upon some topic which is of common interest to them aiid to him. And THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 35 the deepest impression, so made, is also the quickest to be received and the most enduring. Of course, what I am saying might involve for many schools a very considerable reconstruction of the time- table, and perhaps a renaming of many, of the things which find a place separately marked out upon it. What I am asstmiing throughout is that in any class you have a group of people who, sooner or later, and the sooner the better, have come into some measure of sympathy with each other, who like each other (for children by nature, and teachers by grace, are full of affection). Here are these people talking to one another about the things which on both sides seem to be useful and interesting; and varied and nmnerous as these things are, they are not unrelated to one another, for in all of them the speakers are, not professionally, but naturally, concerned. Here is the real groundwork and basis of any vital correlation of school subjects ; the fact of a himian interest, the fact that all the members of a particular group of people, in this case called teachers and pupils, are warmly and unitedly interested in a variety of things. Apart from this all talk about correlation is arid and mischievous. You are surprised at the variety of interests of your friends ; but you do not seek to explain their interest in, let us say, the lyric poetry or the drama of the Restoration and also in the Wesleyan Revival ; or their interest both in horse-racing and in re'igious pictures, by drawing painful analogies between those di\'erse subjects; you do not ask them to explain this variety of interest ; you are satisfied that these things have some interest, diverse as they may seem to be, because as a matter of fact they are manifestations of one mind which you know. The progranmie, the ciuriculum, springs, if it springs from its proper root, from the mind of the teacher in harmony with that of his class. I said roof deliberately, because if you press the image I should have to go further and say that the soil out of which it springs is the soil of the community's sentiments and ideas. On such a programme, teacher ^nd pupils talk and write, and be 36 LECTURES ON must help them to talk and write well. Though his work in this respect may be partly unconscious and unpremeditated (and often at its best it is so) it must be wholly so ; he must try deliberately at times to help the children in their speech, and the first thing he will do for that end — ^and it is a difficult task — will be to choose his own words with care and precision. It is an ejrtraordinarily difficult thing to talk to little children with care. For if you plan out in advance very carefully what you are going to say you are confronted with two difficulties. The first is obvious ; that if you give the children the least chance of joining with you in your talk you are sure to be diverted by what they have to say, and the lesson you intended may prove imfit for the occasion ; because, as you question them, or allow them to question you, you discover more and more of their minds and find that all your preparation has to be done with immense rapidity over again, or at least that you have to adjust and change your treatment of the matter you have in hand to suit the new need of the moment. But supposing that does not happen ; let us suppose that you do what it is not bad to do sometimes — ^talk continuously yourself for a while. What then? I know very, well it is a commonplace in criticism to say that a lesson should not be like a lecture. Believe me, a lecture, if it is a continuous and coherent piece of speech, pro- vides no bad discipline either for the speaker or for the hearers. Very often in school children are wearied to death by the desperate efforts which are put forth by their teacher to make things pointed and sharp— rapid question provoking breathless answer— this point, that point— given all staccato, till you can conceive that the pupils must be quite beAvildered. Do not fear to speak sometimes continuously and without interruption, so long as you do it deliberately, correctly, counting the cost, and knov/ing enough about your pupils to justify the attempt. Do not be afraid of a lecture form. No one who lectures well will lecture much. But there are those who lecture badly. Remember, then THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 37 that in a lesson which is given more continuously, and copiously than is ordinary, it is easy to fall into a stiff and stilted manner, and to get a set of words, a vocabularly, which is really not your own, but which comes to you by some ciurious artificial convention. You are not talking like yourself, but, as we some- times say, like a book. Now, of course, that is wrong; you must not talk like a book, even if it is your own book. There are two difficulties then to face. One is that the prepared lesson — ^in which the actual phrase- ology is thought out beforehand — may be shown to be uinsuitable to the occasion if you allow the children to have a great hand in what is going on; the other, that if you speak more continuously, you may drop into an unnatural type of language. But these difficulties give a teacher his best opportunities of achieving a rare success. To be careful and to avoid the appearance of artifice, to be yourself, with proper reserve — ^to be yourself, and yet to be intelligible to other minds; or to put it again in another contrast, to be unaffected and conventional at the same moment; to achieve those two things, is the necessary task of any speaker or teacher: you must be conventional if you are to be understood; you must be imaffected if you are to be enjoyed. If you are not en- joyed as a teacher, at any rate with children, you are a failure as a teacher. Children must have from themselves, from each other and from you who are teaching them, plenty of talk; they must hear words, but not idle words, words used in the treatment of topics which are attractive to them and attractive to you. Now, I should like to emphasise that, because that is really at the bottom of true and satis- factory conversation. If you seek about in your mind for something which will be interesting to your hearer, you are likely to bore him almost beyond endurance; if on the other hand, and to take the other extreme, you laimch out upon some subject which is engrossing you, but which you have not considered for a moment from 38 LECTURES ON his point of view, then again you may beconie insuffer- able ; but if you are just yourself, and hit with careful aim or by happy chance upon something, which is at the moment interesting to you and from whatever point of view attractive to your listeners, then conversation is possible ; it is a two-sid^^d thing. So in school it is idle to talk about things which you imagine are interesting to childrrai ; you do not know what things are interesting to children unless you are interested yourself; and the things which you believe ought to be interesting to children are of all things precisely, those in which so often they are not interested at all. So much then for conversation, talking. You see your pupils have not been getting what are called composition lessons in anything that I have described ; they hlave been composing, but not having lessons about the business;; they have been doing it unawares and unconsciously. Let us next consider the service to which we can put books in teaching composition. The use of books is justified by the same reasons which make conversation proper. We talk and we listen in order to get someQiing which conversation offers, to satisfy some interest; and we read books for the same purpose. It is for this very purpose that we direct children to books — ^partly for their profit, and partly, in- deed, in self-defence. Our own knowledge and our own patience and our own physical endurance fail the demands of the children's growing intelligence and curiosity. We should perish with fatigue if we answered all their questions ; we shoiild come to an end of our knowledge perhaps before we came to the end of our strength. In either case we cannot keep up with them; and besides we have our own lives to live. That is a thing which teachers constantly forget in school. Think what an effect it would have, especially upon the older children, if after a lesson „ ven with all the vigour that a man was capable of, and with some feeling and sympathy as well, he said " Now you have got your books ; read them, and I will sit down and read mine," and they saw him sitting THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 39 at ease and manifestly, enjoying a book for half an hour. That would be worth many lessons on the use of books — followed by a composition on " What we ought to read," or " My favourite book." Children must read books, because we cannot go on for ever talking to them, and because they, cannot find out from their conversation with us or with one another many of the things they would like to know. The books that you choose will be chosen I think, in the first place, because of the suitability of their subject matter; not according to the length or the difhculty of the words, but according to the interest and propriety of what is contained in them. A good many books, of coiurse, have been manufactured for children, specially in the last twenty-five years by zealous people who wanted to teach them to read, and who knew a great deal, they felt, about the development of the child's mind, and graded these readers according to the gradiial growth of the child's intelligence. At the age of five you would have the words of a certain length, and sentences of a certain length. At seven, nine, eleven, and so forth, you would have sentences and words longer and more difficult. The intention was to include spelling and grammar and vocabularly all in one dismal performance. Now, children do not want to learn a vocabulary, they want to hear about things; and when in their reading about things which interest them, they come upon a word which they have not met before, they will do one of two things, and both of them are good things in their right place. What will commonly happen is they will glide over the hard word at the time, and go along just as you or I would when reading a French or Latin book. If we were con- scientious and curious about our work, when we had made the general sense, we should go back and try and fit in the puzzling word. That is what the child sometimes does. He may no doubt be less inclined than we to go back over the ground and fix that word in its place and in his mind. He may be content with the general sense. 40 LECTURES ON But if, after slurring over a word and finishing the sentences or the page, he finds he is completely defeated and cannot discover what he wants to know ; if the loss of the word, or the set of words which caused him difficulty, makes the whole passage unintelligible to him, then he has to turn back again, and go over the passage more carefully, sorting out what he knows from what he does not know. Very, likely the difficulty may come not from any imfamiliarity in a word, but in an arrange- ment of words strange to hdm. In the effort to solve such a problem as this he is learning grammar, he is learning analysis. If after this interval of silence and repose, you return to your pupils, and enquire what they have been doing all the time — ^they. might say they have been reading about the capture of wild elephants with the help of the tame ones, but they will confess that there was just one thing which they could not imderstand. " What is that?" you say, and come to the rescue — ^you are wanted. That is success — ^not only as teachers, but as human beings, what we really covet is to be wanted. That is what you try to achieve in your class ; i you will wish the children at moments when they are in difficulty to turn to you readily and with a certainty, of response ; or when they desire to quicken their own delight in something that they are doingj to be sure you will share in it. The ordinary reading of children, only less — if indeed less — surely than their ordinary conversation with their age-fellows or their elders lays the foundation of any skill they may acquire in what is called " composition." Propriety, flexibility, grace, strength in the speech of children all are proofs that they have been accustomed, as an ordinary thing, to hearing good talk and joining iii it ; and if we may regard our commerce with books as a form of conversation, conversation njaturally sought, and sought again because unaffectedly enjoyed, it is to be expected that reading should mould the audible speech and also the written speech of those whose use of books is constant and familiar. But there must be use, constant THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 41 .and familiar, if the reading of books is deeply and justly to affect the speech and writing of children. An over -anxious student, making a strenuous begin- ning with a foreign language, is apt to listen too intently and copy too exactly, not the whole, for that would be impossible, but fragments of the speech of those to whom he listens, and on whose practice he desires to model his own. He catches the tricks and some perhaps of the nobler characteristics of their speech, but he does not make them his own ; he presents it in caricature, missing its native quality, which is a thing diffused through the whole, governing every paxt because residing in the heart, the thought-form from which speech-form takes its origin. Later, when the spirit of the language has possessed him, he is indeed more sensitive to the special notes of the speech used by one and another of his neigh- bours, but he does not reproduce and re-echo them ; he speaks the language of the country, and he has won mastery of it when he can speak it, correctly of course, fluently of course, but also in his own way. Reading is the most general form of composition lesson, all the more potent in effect because for the most part the effect is tmsought. Here, as everywhere, what is true of the moral is also true of the intellectual life.; Our traffic, such as it is, in ideas fashions us ; we feel and sometimes acknowledge at once or later — more often we feel without acknowledgment— the influence of those with whom our lot is cast ; we breathe the spirit of the group, the society, the nation in which we have our place, but we breathe it as imconsciously as we breathe the air. In- fluence deliberately exerted is too often influence which distrusts itself. It is weak men who try most zealously to win and wield influence over others. It is true they often succeed, but the influence they have is other than they fondly suppose. The great moralists have the splendid indifference, the serene and generous egoism of artists believing in themselves and in the ultimate and appropriate triumph of truth or beauty. In literature the best expression I know of this fervent tranquillity 42 LECTURES ON is that of the Psalm " Be still (or— a more vigorous retli deringr— ' Let be ') and know that I am God." And so, literature itself might, in a figure, be conceived to offer coiinsel to teachers of composition. It mi'ght say to them, " Do not interfere;, trust me;; I will do my, own work." We must be reserved in our use of models ; we must as charily and warily point out to our pupils the virtues of ow: favourite books as those of oiur favourite com- panions ; we must not advertise and placard either. But this is just what we are tempted to do, cheapening the very things the value of which we profess to set high. We do this, and we do worse than this — for we try, to foster in our pupils a desire to be influenced. It is as if we interrupted their ordinary breathing to give them " deep-breathing " exercises — or checked their ordinary appetite for ordinary food, by lessons, too well learnt, on hygiene, not content till breathing and eating had become fastidious and self-conscious. The intellectual epicure and the intellectual valetudinarian are sometimes, by a grotesque misuse of the word, called scholars, but they cannot write or spjcak, afid they have never learnt to read. IV We are agreed that if children talk, they must talk volun- tarily, about things in which they are interested, and to people who they feel sure will care to hear what they have to say on these things. Such talking is the basis of writ- ten composition. It is essentially of the same kind as written composition, though, of course, it is more rapid and comes more readily to children's lips than words come from their pens or their pencils. It implies both a happy relationship already existing, and a demand for THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 43 a greater degree of intimacy, with fuller knowledge and understanding. Now, we are apt to forget that in writing children should be dealing with things which are attractive to them, and writing about them in order to convey, to a reader now and not to a listener, something which they are quite sure he would like to faiow. School exercises do not always spring up in this dehghtful and spontane- ous fashion : and it is for lack of this natural initiative on the part of the writers that compositions are dull not only to them but to the teachers. In school, children are told to write, and what im- presses them first and most deeply is the fact that they are told: it is a command, the initiative is not with them. And they are told what to write : they are to write down some information ; that is to say, to put together in some sort of order facts which they have gathered on a subject which has probably been dealt with in a lesson which they have heard, or in a book which they have read. They feel at once that the whole process is unnatural ; they are called to write down, for the benefit of someone who is in possession of the facts, a selection of the facts which they have been able to gather. It probably occurs to them as little as to their teacher that they could write anything which was unknown to him, that hie should learn anything from them. It is a dull biisiness for them ; it cramps and paralyses them. Why should they tell us when Magna Charta was signed? We know that already ; we told them last week. Why should they tell us about the shape of the earth or the coiurse of the Amazon, when we have previously told them about these things? What need is there for them to tell us what we have already told them? It is a diJl business for us also ; for we who are teachers feel a great weariness when we have to read children's or pupils' work composed in that way. We know what they are going to say ; we can anticipate their mistakes ; and we are apt to assume that they will make mistakes where they differ from lis. Some minds have curious and perverted appetite for mistakes, but no teacher can 44 LECTURES ON live upon a crop of mistakes; he wants something dif- ferent, something^ more nutritive which his pupils can supply, if they are allowed and are encouraged to give it ; and the better thing which they can and ought to supply is just this : not the information which they have received from itheir teacher or from a book, but their view of it, their account of it, the facts as they have passed through, their OAvn mind, received colour and significance from that mind, and so become fresh and new to the reader, and to the writers alike. Then the teacher is not bored, because he is reading the productions of pupils who themselves are not bored. If we are to be interested in pur pupils' work, they must be interested in it. So much will probably, be agreed: the children must be acting volimtarily in speech and in writing; if they are acting voltmtarily they will be interested in what they do because they are interested in themselves. And in dealing with any subject thus they will do just what we do in the like case ; they will express themselves. History may be the r61e they wear for the moment, or geography ; it does not matter what dress they, put on ; it is them- selves which will be bodying out the dress and giving its form and its character. Here then is a further use which we may make of books in encoiuraging children to write — ^the rendering thfe substance of some passage which they have read in textboolcs or of some lesson heard from our lips. It is a useful practice, and attractive to them, provided always that we, who teach, know what may properly be attempted and they know what wie intend. If we are on natural terms with them, terms of sympathy, imderstanding and respect, they will do what we intend them to do ; which is to give the substance of the subject with which we and they have been dealing, as they have apprehended it. The Wars of the Roses will be other Wars, the Crusades will take on a brighter splendour of chivahy; and the daffodils will be clothed with a fresher beauty, as they are described in children's words which spring from children's imagination; for all these subjects or any THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 45 others, will have been fashioned, coloured, revitalised by the writers. But, a critic may urge, the fashion, the colour, which children give to their subjects may be a wrong fashion, a wrong colour, the life may be moving in a wrong direc- tion. Composition-exercises of the sort here considered, he may tell us, are set as tests of knowledge and of accurate statement : in allowing, in expecting, and even in fostering originality on the part of pupils in these exercises, we may be wilfully missing the object at which we profess to be aiming. He may beg us to consider the question of mistakes more carefully — let us yield to his desire. First it is to be remarked that mistakes are of two kinds, just as accuracy may be of two kinds — dead and living. If I throw an india-rubber ball at a wall, I can (supposing I am a mathematician) calculate quite exactly the angle and the speed at which it will rebound from the wall, and the distance it will travel before it comes to rest. If I cast a remark at a man who is like a wall, I can calculate quite nicely what his reply will be. If I cast a remark at a man who is not like a wall, he is quick to note my failure in manners or intelligence. He may dodge my remark, which either hurtles on, doing damage, or (if I am lucky) falls dead after a brief flight through the unresponding air; or he may catch it, and return it, I cannot guess with what velocity ; or keep it, as we keep, for curiosities, the missiles of barbarians. Some strong-minded children, with the quick sensitive- ness which is often taken for almost brutish stupidity, keep in silence and without response the observations which we hurl at them; they keep them and perhaps restore to us after many days some of the hard pellets of information or precept with which we, with dreadful accuracy, shot their hearts, mistaking them for targets. We have our reward, and they their titanic revenge I Others dodge, or deftly catch what we throw at them, and in irritation or bewilderment (the effects of which we cannot foretell) angrily or at random throw it back to uSj or at us, or anywhere away, from themselves. These 46 LECTURES ON are commonly less noble spirits than those who seem to disdain or ignore us. But there are those again, who being treated as if they were walls, become walk. At first, indeed, the walls may be soft, and the rebounld lack vigour, but they be- come hard by use ; or they, may have rough surfaces, and the rebound may be at an unintended angle; but they will become smooth, and at last give back with exact and measurable precision wllat they received, no more, no less. Accuracy may be dead ; the dead correct thing which the pupil returns may be just the dead correct thing which his teacher ofTered him. Mistakes may also be dead. We are at times distressed at the stiff and mortal coldness of a pupil's response, not recognising that what we gave him wore already, when it left our hands, the marks of death'. He did not kill it. But let us assume, what happily we may assume, that what the teacher or the book gives is something living — a thought, aglow with feeling, incarnate in word. To such a word, the response of children may be, and often is, full of mistakes. There are those who believe that the nature of children is such that they, will respond per- fectly to a perfect stimulus ; who lay upon the shoulders of teachers, not some but all^ of the mistakes of their pupils, or if they relieve the teacher of part of the burdai, cast it on the wide and tolerant back of environment! Teachers perfect in wisdom, and sympathy, and know- ledge, and skill are probably rare; not less rare, but more rare, are perfect children. Schools are not estab- lished and maintained in order that blind and bigoted adults may be illuminated and emancipated by young- eyed, generous-minded children. Children teach their elders much, but must learn more from their elders. Let us put down against teachers a large score of responsi- bility; but let us not shut our eyes to the fact that children make mistakes for which teachers cannot reason- ably be counted responsible— these mistakes spring from a variety of sources— perversity, obstinacy, carelessness, pride, timidity, slown^s of understanding, clumsiness, THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 47 stupidity. But if the mistakes are living mistakes they have this special value for observant teachers (in addition to the service they, render in chastening their character) — living mistakes reveal their causes. With them before their eyes, teachers are able to diagnose their patients, to prescribe with discernment what is good for each, and to vary or to continue the treatment as may, seem neces- sary, and desirable. And we need not shrink from this image, for thfere is a medicine of health as well as of disease ; and, with a single exception to be noted, there is one general name for all the sources, various as they may be, of mistakes — ^that name is immaturity ; and the name suggests three at least, for these are not aU, of the ingredients in the remedy — experiment, patience, and time. Improvement comes to those who wait, and work — in every, case, except that of stupidity, which is more en- during than brass, outlasting all forbearance, and out- doing all skill. For the stupid pupil teachers must be content if they do not make him more stupid than he was •,• to win that negative success is much, since the stupid is also a very fragile mind ; it is much', but not more than may be hoped for, since the stupid is often a very lovable creature — ^we commend him with heartfelt prayers, and some fellow-feeling, to his Maker. It is probable that words like authority, discipline, command, obedience, which stand, all of them, for good and necessary things, have taken on an improper and misleading significance. We may " set " exercises, and our pupils may " do " them, but unless they give some- thing more and other than we can demand, neither they nor we are content. The correct answer, the accurate essay, done formally and pimctually in obedience to command, may attest authority and give evidence of discipline, but they strike a chill to the heart, if they are only correct and only accurate. Accuracy is not sought, by childrai at any rate, for its own sake; it is sought, and slowly found, as diey discover it to be a condition upon which something else, which they, covet, 4S LECTURES ON depends. In writing, this other thing, the supreme object h:as three elements — self-expression, beauty, intelligi- bility. If these are attained, accuracy, of the kind which is legitimate because vital, is attained also. Of intelligi- bility, the reader may claim to be the best though not the only judge, but of self-expression the writer is the best, though again not the only judge. The writer not seldom, if a child, may not be quite intellig'ible to himself, and may turn to the imderstanding teacher for help in self-expression because the teacher realises the child-self which seeks expression better than the child who is at- tempting to write — even so, the criticism of children's writing mtist be a task in which they themselves take a share. In revising their own work (for v/hicli far more time should be allowed than is usual) they will discover, if the exercise has been the statement in their own words of a passage read from a book, that, their mistakes fall under certain categories. They will discover first that they have omitted, through forgetfulness or through the disturbance of thought which the physical labour of writing causes, some matters which were in their text; they will see next, tlrnt they have given an emphasis which the book, their source (in such a case) of informa- tion, does not warrant; and they will find, in the third place, that they have not been just to themselves, that they have not set forth what they saw as they saw it.. While they are comparing their work with the original, they may also compare it with that of their class- fellows; and they will learn what true acciuracy is. They will be providing themselves with a training not the less " scientific " for being " literary." The passages chosen for rendering have hitherto, I am assuming, been plain and simple narrative, accounts of deeds done, or descriptive passages. The teacher may now pass, but with infinite caution, to a subtler kind of literatmre, in which writers, dealing still it may be with tangible and visible subjects, are more intent with the impression which these tilings make upon- their own minds, treating them as symbols and images of THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 49 some finer and more elusive quality, for the sake of whicb they are prized, in embodying; which they have their function and their worth. Here, less than ever, does the teacher ask or bid his pupils to " reproduce " what he reads. He asks rather for an interpretation of it. He will not use the word, in speaking to his class. He may simply " tell " them to write out a story which he has read to them or with which he knows they are already acquainted. A fable, a fairy story, a highly-wrought, but boldly-imaged, piece of description will serve. Very young children will in- deed render a fable or a fairy story, if they, can remember it, all in the words of their book ; or where their memory fails, will leave gaps in theix writing, or silences in their speech. They, too, are interpreting, and not merely re- producing.; but it is from the brightness of their eyes. the glow of their cheeks, the catch of the breath, th« heightened or lowered tone, that the discerning teacher will guess at the spiritual significance which the piece has for them. Older children will achieve or attempt inter- pretation in their choice of words. Only slowly, and yet by. no painful, rather by a delightful process of experi- ment, will they learn that brightness, breathless ecstasy, high or subdued tone, all within the range of yoimger children in the physical region of expression, may be had and enhanced in the higher region, half physical, half supersensual, of words ; gaining, as they gain posses- sion of their own spirits, a mastery too of the spiritual medium of language. They will come, too, to know the special charm of written as contrasted with uttered speech, swayed by the rhythm, and held by the music of unuttered sounds. " Heard melodies are sweet ; but those unheard Are sweeter." They will learn so the ethics of good speech and writ- ing ; its clean, athletic healthfiilness ; its supple strength ; the great manner worn with dignity, bending or rising to the level of occasion, but never stooping below itself. so LECTURES ON or stretcMngi for what it cannot easily, and graciously readh'. The first, and for the best pupils the long- lasting, effect of such practice in interpretation will be seen in the studidd simplicity, thie austere directness, the religious truthfulness of their writing. They will have discovered the fact of style;, thiey will be more than dimly aware of its essential quality, ; , they will know at least that it is the perfect and varying expression of the varjdng moods of a mind that knows itself; and they, will not affect style until they have made fiurther and fiu-ther discovery of themselves than they, have yet made, and with that got the restraint which resides at the heart of power, the instinct of self-direcJtion which comes with the maturity of vital and vitalising impulse. Children's speech, like any other of their powers and gifts, is sometimes spoken of as an instrument — aji instru- ment, a tool, for admevingi certain ends. And yet some- times teachers are said to put into the hands of children instruments or tools for doing things which later in life, or perhaps already in childhood, are seen to be useful or pleasant. Probably we should come near to the truth if we said that the teacher finds that his pupils already possess the instruments which they will need for the purposes of life, but that he may help them to sharpen them and strengthen them, to use them properly, and direct them to the right ends. Children can speak before we teach them speech; however young a child may be he has some power of express- ing his desires and his needs. And, indeed, in their very early days their power of expression covers their need for expression much more accurately and com- pletely than in later Ufe. The little child desires food or warmth or sleep, and he has his various cries and signs, which are perfectly understood, for these things ; but when we are older and have greater command of speech, the disparity between what we would Uke to say and what we can say, becomes very great. CMldren, I say, alrealdy have their instruments ; and it is for us to develop them and' to help them to use them THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 51 in the proper way. But what is the proper way? The exercises with which we are familiar are useful enough, but useful only if they are at the same time something, more than exercises. It is true that exercises may be done with pleasxu-e, without thought of the future skill or enjoyment which they promise us, but for their own sake. .This is good; but we must make room in our time-tables and in our scheme of education for something better still. To make this distinction clear, let us com- pare what we do in a gymnasium with what we do in open-air sports. The gymnastic teacher makes us do certain movements of arm and leg, because these will make iis strong and healthy; but out of doors, upon a playing-field, we are using arms and legs, and getting strong, going through the exercises without knowing it, and perhaps doing them all the better because we forget that they are means to an end; health and the pursuit of health, exercise and the object of the exercise have been identified and become one. And so with other in- stances that naght be taken from school-life. We must find space and time for oiur pupils to do what they like, to be artificers and creators on their own account. They have their instruments, they, have also the material. Their instnnnents are their powers of expression ; the material is the whole world or such parts of it as the cMldren have been brought to know and possess. They have their city, their schoolfellows, their toys, their pets, themselves —all these things and people make up the material upon which they, may work. In schools we find children taught to work with plasti- cine and other materials ; , making imder instruction little figures, some of which — ^not all — ^are attractive enough to them ; but you know very well that if these children could be carried from the schoolroom to the seashore they would at once be moiilding and fashioning without any instructions, in the wet sand, things which wotild please them quite as much, things which would be far more 1 fantastic, fax more imaginative, than most of what we 52 LECTURES ON find them doing in school. And in any town where then is a convenient gutter, the children of the poor, happiei in this than richer children, are often occupied qtutt happily in the cheapest and most imiversal form oj manual training— making mud pies for themselves. The} have their instnunents in their hands, and the world has not grudged thiem the material. Children, as we know, like to talk — ^you must have noticed tliat— they like to talk to other children, and ever to us— certainly, they like to talk to themselves. I hope you have got small brothers and sisters, and if so yot must watch them closely. When they have exhausted us — ^when they have come to the end of the things that il is worth while to talk about with us, or even with theii contemporaries — ^they. talk to themselves about things which we cannot understand, but which are very real and attractive to them. When they have done mailing, with our help^ — ^they are very complaisant and kindly aboui taking om" help — ^when they have with our aid done mak- ing a model dog or a model frog in plasticine, they go on to make, without us, other creatures which never lived on sea or land, but with which they are quite as weL pleased as with the decorous beast they fashioned undei our inspiration. We may encourage this creative gift of children in the medium of writing. Now, one very, obvious difference between writing and speecJh is just this, that we write much more slowly than we can talk. We tend to be much more self-conscious ir writing; we put down a word, and as we shape it w€ feel whether it is the right word or not, and we car cross it off if we do not like it. The spoken word we cannot recall, but the written thing is more our own; we need not show it to anybody luileSs we like. JusI as it is quite good for children to talk to themselves wher they have come to the end of what they have to say tc us, so it is quite good for them to write for themselves, tc put down on paper their imaginings about themselves their adventures, the fortunes of their pets or their play- THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 53 things; what they think about the world in which they live. At some moments surely, at every stage in our career, whether we are children or older people, we like to escape even from our best friends and talk to ourselves, to think, to meditate; not vaguely dreaming (though there is a place for that, too, in all well-ordered lives), but carefully, distinctly, arranging our own minds as a man mig*ht arrange his own possessions, material or spiritual, (quietly and orderly, because he would know what he has, and where he is, and who in fact he is. A child, particularly in the noisy life which we are living^, mi'giht be very glad of these quiet spaces in which to collect himself, and sort out what he has in his mind, and discover who he is. That is the other part of educa- tion. There are two parts of a complete education; learning the world and learning ourselves. It is an ilhberal and distorted education which insists so much upon our learning the world and so " gaining' " it as to make us lose ourselves, a loss which, of covirse, involves every other kind of loss with it. At home, and at school too, children should be left alone with a pen or a pencil and paper, not to do exer- cises, but to do what they like: to scribble, to be dis- contented with scribbling, to want to do something better than that ; and to find by this self-conscious process of self-expression the road to emancipation from self. All this is a practice which the use of words, and par- ticularly the more dehberate and careful use of words on paper, gives to tis — ^to us who are older ; but to children also who have, with the disadvantages, the advantages of childhood. At the very beginning of this discussion, a distinction was drawn between the plain, businesslike communication 54 LECTURES ON which js necessary; for ordinary, purposes when we tel I>eople the things which we desire them to know — ^mak requests of them, or put commands upon them — ^and, oi the other hand, a higher type of expression, whicH w called artistic, where the expression itself has a specia value of its own, a characteristic style. It was then sai( that it was unwise, in teaching children, to aim delibei ately at anything more than the first kind of speech o composition, the plain, direct, but clear and faithfu account of facts, the simplest type of communication be tween pne mind and another. Let us now take up that matter once more, and regar( it from a new point of view. If a teacher vividly realises his class, realises the lif of the children who are before him at all fully, and pro perly, one of the things which will impress him mosi and perhaps alarm him most, is the simple and obviou fact that not only, are they as a class different from him but that as individuals they are different from on another. That involves, of course, a great deal: i involves that the experience which they have had short though it may be, is something special in eacl cafee, not the teacher's experience, and in the case o each several child, something peculiar and proper to him self. The thoughts in their minds will also be specia and individual ; and though the language that is on thei lips may have the common sound of general acceptano and understanding, the very fact that their experieno and their thoughts are speciaJ. and peculiar brings it abou that the words which they use, though they are contmdi and oi'dinary words, represent in each' mind somethinj special and peculiar too. So, though we seem all to b speaking the same language, in a sense it is true to sa] that we are speaking to each other in various tongues we all need an interpreter. We have experienced tha often enough in meeting strangers for the first time. W can put down the dictionary meaning of every word tha they use, but do not know what they understand by thes- words ; and they are in the same position with regard ti THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 55 us ; the symbols are the same, but the things symbolised are different. The more fully we realise the class that we are teaching', the more deeply are we impressed by that fact, and not only impressed, but alarmed by it; because if there is this difference between us and our pupils, and between each of them and every other, how are we to bridge the chasm which divides us? What is the use of talking to them if our language is almost a strange language, because it represents strange and peculiar things? Let us see if any answer can be given to such question- ings as these. The things about which we can make no mistake at all are very, few, and the least valuable that Ufe offers to us. We can call a spade a spade, but it is a poor conversation that deals exclusively with spades. We can say that the wind is in the East, but unless the East stands for something cold and chill, or sometMng bradng and strong, the mere fact that the wind 5s coming from that quarter is scarcely worth noticing. As agents or victims we all know the dullness of imerely formal conversation. When a man tells you it is a wet day, you are not really indebted to him. He has not set up any real communication between your niind and his. He has not really exchanged an experience with .you. On the other hand, those things which are valuable, and just because of their value are peculiar and oin own, the things which make up ovtr life, are also numeroxis. We can talk, it would seem — ^though without profit — about the things which do not matter, but the things which do matter baffle oiur speech. What then is to be done? We may note for our comfort that though communica- tion is difficult the attempt at it is universal. The most tadttim of men breaks silence sometimes ; the most re- served sometimes seeks a way, of sharing his ideas and experiences with! his neighbomrs; everybody speaks at some rare moments at least, not merely from the surface of his experience, but from his heart, giving out to other people, in the hope and even m the expectation that they S6 LECTURES ON will xmderstand, what is real and essential in himself. ( if you find people of a sadder turn (our literature provid us with examples), who hardly, hope to be understooc even they^ not daring to look for a response, cannot ke( silence, but throw out upon the world, which is a kindli listener than they dreamt, the expression of their hop or fears, their lonely sufferings, or solitary joys. To 1 himself is for a man to be alone— an intolerable fate ; be himself is to feel deeply and strongly— loneliness ai strong: feeling both claim and actuate expression; ai the most universal mode of expression is expression words : we speak because we must. This habit of hums speech would haixlly have been preserved in the wor through gCTieration after generation and century aft century, uiiless it had met this essential and permane need of the human spirit for utterance anid for tmde standing. Speech, then, not merely trite and super ficij but real and peculiar and individual — ^that is the surpri ing consolation which fact affords — has been master( and used by men. But let us look more closely, at our problem. L us take from the books that we know best — some play Shakespeare, or some familiar novel — a great charact which stands out with quite special and extraordina distinctness before the mind. We have never seen ti original ; we shall never see him or hear his voice — ^we i not even desire such acquaintance; but we know pe fectly what he would say and do, and how comport hir self upon any occasion. We can imagine his appearane his manner, his gesture ; he is as real to us, perhaps some ways more real, than a host of people whom a see day by day, because we have seen into his mind, > have got some understanding of his character. And proportion as this figure given us in imaginative writir the drama or the novel, is individual and special ai peculiar, and unlike ev«ry other that we recall in lite ature, or any that we may know in the actual commer of daily life, we say that he challenges and satisfi pur widest and loftiest conceptions of humanity itself THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 57 Wliat the great artist does, we may conjecture, is to see in the individxxal the whole world, and to discover the world in his intimate and complete comprehension of the individual. It is because the individual is drawn so accurately, in his own pea-son, that he stands for us as a type of human nature ; and much as we differ from one another, such a character, different both from you and from me, appeals to you and to me and to a thousand readers, not because he is like us, but because being signally and splendidly himself, he is true to human nature. The illustration may possibly, enable us not indeed to solve, but to approach our question. We woxjld not have our pupils all massed togetiier in a dvll resemblance ; we do not want them to be like ourselves — ^we want thfem to be themselves. How are we to speak to one another? Surely, by speaking for oiirself, by being ourself, and by allowing, by enjoining: on them an equal freedom. But, it may be asked, what has this to do with compo- sition?/ The answer is easily given : any deliberate, self- conscious expression of the human mind comes very near to being a form of human art ; and there is no mode of expression so common and so necessary as this mode of expression tih!rou;gh words. The teacher of composition is an Art-Master— he aims at artistry in words. He is a practitioiner, a critic and a giuide ; and if hfe is to do his business well, hie must know what art is and distinguish it from its counterfeits. The chief, and indeed the ulti- mate test of art is one which every one may learn, not perhaps quickly, but at length, to apply for himself ; it is just this, that when he looks at the painting or the sculp- ture, or reads the page, or hears the spoken words of the true' artist, he perceives that not merely is he gazing upon or listening to some performance thrown out in the spirit of a mere performer, but that he is admitted immedi- ately and directly to an intimacy with a mind uttering itself greatly by whatever medium, of speech, or paint- ing, or sculpture. This is what a great master of words has called the " contagion of art. " The artist touches us, 58 LECTURES ON and something passes immediately from his spirit to ours. How is this contagion wrought? How is this influence won? In lessons to whi<3i! we have listened, or in ad- dresses, or lectures, or sermons, but best of all in the intimacy of ordinary conversation with one of our friends, there have been moments at which as the speaker went on we felt, indeed we knew quite definitely and be- ypnd thie possibility of a mistake, that the thing he was descrilMng in words was a thing which he was, no doubt, recalling to Ms mind, but also a thing which hte was ex- periencing as he described it ; : and more than that, that we ourselves were not mfere listeners, but were suffered to enter into this activity, of his mind, and to share it our- selves. That is what upon great occasions carries away a' vast audience ; that is what thrills and moves us as we listen sometimes in private to a friend. The medium of words, we may say, disappears; the instrument which the person speaking used for approaching and touching our mind has dropped from his hand ; he and we, in fact, two separate persons as we were before, are become one spirit. There is no past tense for truth ; > what was, is ; there is no monopoly in truth ; the experience richly en- joyed by the artist, and passionately portrayed, is what he compels the listener to share with him. A test of that again, which we often apply, withouf thinking very mucli of it, in our ordinary conversation, is this : We read some passage or description, and we say, " That is exactly what I should have said." This is a very just and proper criticism ;i that is exactly what we should have said, if, without the artist's guidance, we had learnt to see things as now, with his aid, we see them. We lacked What he has now given us, a certain clearness of vision, a certain vigour of grasp, which, with practice added, are the conditions of apt expression. And we accept and adopt the artist's phrase because it is the ex- pression of an experience, not now of another person whom we were watching, but of ourselves. Such work as that, if that is art— this revelation of a THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 59 character, of a mind at work, and of a mind which knows no past, since what is true belongs to no particular time, but enters into thie veryi substance of a character and remains part of it, interwoven with it as long as it itself can be said to endure — ^if that is so, the more peculiar, the more single and separate a speaker or a writer or a per- former in any other kind of human activity may be, the more powerful may his appeal be to us who are so unlike him. Peculiarity, means a certain direct and undistracted power of arriving at the truth. Here is a man who has not been contented with the vulgar phraseology of his time, with the cant of the moment, with the conventional utterance which only half disguises a lack of real feeling and of deep experience, but on some particular point and in perhaps some narrow avenue of enquiry has gone straight to the facts of nature, to reality; his peculiarity is the measure of his truthfidness ; he differs from us, not because his quest, his object, is other than ours — ^for all of us jn oiur measure are trying to arrive at truth — ^but be- cause he has refused to deceive himself with convention, and has at all costs pursued the thing he desired. He has had the singleness of eye, which makes conduct also beautiful, and lifts morals to the plane of art. He is a peculiar person, but the thing that he has won by his peculiar experience is the very foimdation of whatever is true in our own fragmentary and half -illumined experi- ence ; what distinguishes him from us is what makes him valuable to us ; and when we imderstand him at all, we understand that this strange person is akin to the best part of ourselves, which is rarely able to come to the surface of our lives ; and we say. quite truly that what he has said is just what we would Uke to have said otu-selves. Peculiarity, then, will always mark a person who is honest, sincere, and ready to take pains; but his peculiarity, which at first sight seemed to be a division between him and oiirselves, is really the surest pledge we have of oiu- finally understanding him and being imderstood by him. Now, add to that another note or quality. A person who has these marks will necessarily be, in no bad sense 6o LECTURES ON of course, an egoist. The egoist is a man, as i commonly iise the word, who talks rather vainly ai wearisomely, about himself; but the egoist whom I a describing is a man who will only talk at all about thin which he knows, and which he has discovered, no dou with the help of his fellows, but still for himself ; he w talk about the things which he has seen with his own ey and touchted with his own hands. His method is som times called the scientific method ; it is also the artisi method, the method of truth, of only speaking about t things that you know at first hand for yourself, and kn( so well that they may be said to be part of yourself; is the method of the egoist as I now venture to d'escri' him. But you see once more that this kind of ego: is not the man who sets barriers between himself and 1 fellows ; on the contrary, he values himself properly ; much that he wants to embrace in himself, in his o\ life, as wide a range as he possibly can. The real ego: is a man who longs for friendship, for undCTstanding, aj consequently, makes once more the necessary effort (f all through this business effort and trouble are needed) not only to express himself, you see, which the artist do( but to express himself so that other people may imde stand. It is a wide-embracingi and a generous egois which is not contented to stand alone but wants to dn into itself as much as it can from the world outside, aj to spread itself, which is part of the same process, ov the world. Some correction, then, is needed of the earlier stat ment. What was said before was true in its measu and in its place. We do not want to graft an alien stj upon children ; the attempt is sometimes made with sor results; what we want rather is to allow them to wr in their own way; there we get the real foun(te.tion style; and if our teadhing is not quite extraordinari and almost in a superhuman way bad, we cannot who] prevent children from writing or speaking or acting- whatever particular field their work or play may be— their own way. Children are egoists, not only in t THE TEACHING OF COMPOSITION 6i sense just now described, but in the narrower sense in which the word is commonly, used; from this a larger egoism will rescue them. Children are artists, not completely, yet artists indeed in so far as they are trying to say for themselves what they have themselves experienced. A child is very ready to tell you what has happened to him; he is pleased or distressed; he feels tired or hungTy; he is for the moment quite absorbed in his sense of pleasvure or of pain; he assumes your sympathy. Now what I want to suggest to you about yom- work, not only in composition but other lessons as well, is that whatever may be the particular subject of instruction you axe dealing with in school, the thing either has a value for you or it has not. I should say that it has no value for you at all if it is a merely professional exercise; but it has a value for you if it represents for you and is for you an experience essential and real in your own life; if it is a mode in which you — the real self that you value, and want to preserve — ^are expressed legitimately and properly for other people to see, so that you may be known by all. A good many, teachers would shrink from being known to their friends and equals. If the subject has a value, it has it only inasmuch as it stands for real experiences, real emotions, real thoughts of your own, which mark your passage through life, and are the index from stage to stage of yom character, and it is these things which you try to present to yoxu- pupils. Similarly, it is just that kind of thing which you want them to present to you and to each other. Just as the various lessons of the school day ought not to be mere performances to the teacher, so they ought not to be mere performances to the child. The chief activity of the child is the activity of living ; and why he feels discomfort in school, and often in our society, out of school as well, is that things we too often suggest to him to do are not comfortable and natural expressions of his own life and his own individuality. llien you come back to this diflictilty once more. How 62 LECTURES ON TEACHING COMPOSITION are my experiences and yours, who are g'rown-up people, to be shared by a child younger than ourselves, and different from us in a hundred ways? By the encourage- ment on our part of artistry in him, and by the practice on our part of artistry, for Ms benefit. That is to say, by speaking ourselves with that complete truth, which conibining the deep feeling of what we sometimes call the heart with the clearest judgment of what we some- times call the head, demands an expression, studied perhaps, but always sincere;, and allowing thte child! to spend both intelligence and affection upon those things to which his nature, subtly, guided by a riper but reticent wisdom, leads him, and in the conscious and common enjoyment of which he will seek words to mark in their passage the significance to himself and to us of his delightful hours. raiNTED BY ^ILLIAH BKXNBON AND «OK, Lift rLVUOUTH The Faerie Queene. By Edmund Spenser. Iq six books. 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